AShlok FF - The Unusual Wedding - Part 28 - Page 85

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anukalu

Lovely update...thanks for the pm. Sorry was out all day and dinner with friends. Though read it at 3.30 am. Loved. Update soon.


Thank you dear 😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago

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What is there to get shocked. He had a live in relationship with Swati for Godssake! Am sure they weren't playing chess all the time 😆😆


What the...

okay fynnneee...😲

But hey I got an idea from it...thank you...U r a pot full of ideas di...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
I've jst read both parts
Loved it
Can't wait to read da nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read part 25 hmmm..
Inhaled the essence very fairy tale and reality too.
Loved the imagination,
Thank you,
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Posted: 11 years ago
This calm was an indication of a storm he thought...well brought in the thought and the sensual scene in a rich and dignity way..loved your script more today as the words touched every chord and felt natural with our imagination to reality and fairy dream as it is true of man and woman in love..love Union was nicely written must say what dignity in your words but way hot too..like natural couple.

Thanks a lot for cold luring all scenes well.
⭐️Awesome.👏Terrific,mesmerised 😉
Edited by Prasai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

too good to read!!! loved it enormously ... and Shlok's "l love you" is the icing ... waiting to lap up more of your great writing on their addictive love :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasai

This calm was an indication of a storm he thought...well brought in the thought and the sensual scene in a rich and dignity way..loved your script more today as the words touched every chord and felt natural with our imagination to reality and fairy dream as it is true of man and woman in love..love Union was nicely written must say what dignity in your words but way hot too..like natural couple.


Thanks a lot for cold luring all scenes well.
⭐️Awesome.👏Terrific,mesmerised 😉


Thank you, thank you so much 😊. Nice to see you have enjoyed parts 25 n 26 😃. Will update this in a while.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: desikahani

too good to read!!! loved it enormously ... and Shlok's "l love you" is the icing ... waiting to lap up more of your great writing on their addictive love :)


Yeah I meant Shlo's love to be the icing 😃 and yeah will update this today! I am caught up with the other FF a little bit, but will def come back to this too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonder how you are going to right the morning after..uhmmm uhmmm...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha16

wonder how you are going to right the morning after..uhmmm uhmmm...😆


You know I am still not getting that morning after right and thats the reason I have stalled it today. Will mostly update this tomorrow.

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