AShlok FF - The Unusual Wedding - Part 28 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Anusha16


I'm first!!! Again... well that's sweet...😳

Haha.. totally awesome update...very very funny...

seriously... are you that angry at shlok??

male chauvinistic pig?? pea sized brain???🤓🤣
oh no... I never thought of these thnigs...

actually I like astha more at this update... she is so funny thinking of the most unromatic things about her patidev...😆

Btw this update reminded me of Harry potter dialogue... when aunt marge complains to vernon...
" If there is something wrong with the bitch then there is something wrong with the pup"

you seem to be a fan of harry potter... are you????😲

lovely update di...



Thank you 😊. Glad you're ROFL. I want to save the mushy updates for later. Wanted to write something different. And if readers do want a mushy Shlok, they always have my other FF 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: latha_555

poor aastha, hot tea, atleast shlock did try to initially help her...i wonder if he made the comment about having breaky ready in retaliation to her not allowing him to help her...


Hmm...never thought about it like that! This Shlok is quite a chavunist btw 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
omg astha is nt exactly the way she was potrayed during prolouge she is hell outrageous...
she used so many wrds to address shlok i wonder when shlok will cm to know about it then what will happen???

loved it
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
lovely update as usual...👏 👏
so Astha is a little sherni here...
loved it...
"dont dare to touch me"
that was awsome😆
all are hating shlok...
but somehow,i can sense some(very little)😆
goodness in him...🤔
beautiful update...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Nice update thank you wonder what will happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower


Hmm...never thought about it like that! This Shlok is quite a chavunist btw 😊.


ops then its me analysing and over analysing again:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
superb.. liked it.. continue.. thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Tooo Awesome...
All the curses to Shlok by Aastha... Loved it...
But this is short one...
What happend long updates..???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Mixing sweet poison🤣

I just couldn't stop laughing

That was awesome 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika

Tooo Awesome...

All the curses to Shlok by Aastha... Loved it...
But this is short one...
What happend long updates..???


I had a long day out and had just got back. Will try longer updates though 😊. Thank you for the feedback.

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