AShlok FF - The Unusual Wedding - Part 28 - Page 52

Originally posted by: rbb1

Another amazing update really want to read the next part hope you update it soon Shlok is so sweet covering her with a sheet

Originally posted by: aviaanya

My dear friend what beautiful updates! It's a real treat to read your updates. The story is developing so nicely and liking the many facets of your characters. You create very beautiful scenes. Looking forward to the next... 👏

Originally posted by: Prasai

Very nice update.loving ashlok finding their feelings and moving according to.

Loved how shlok is cocnern and secure for Aastha.the care says a lot.

Loved their dinner date.

You are sizzling up more in reality to real ashlok..loving the touchy to story.

Keep updating.

Lately kids holidays go me hooked up with as in mom more..

😉

Originally posted by: niki795

part 18

awesome
loved the romantic part...
poor shlok his plan backfired on him
but the last part is shocking... Kinda expected it

Originally posted by: Anukalu

Loved the update...so well written. Do update ASAP. Don't keep us waiting for long...cos it's driving me crazy...I'm simply hooked on this story. Keep up the wonderful work.

Originally posted by: niki795

He realized how silly their fight was in comparison to the near loss of a life.

loved this line the most

Originally posted by: latha_555

awesome update, nice fight, glad aastha tried to appologise and shlocks pride even though he wanted to accept, and then their true love when fear and danger came into it. loved it

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Ur work is so good..refreshing..simple and beautiful