Arshi ss- You are my jaan... chapter 5 update[page 7]

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PROLOGUE


"aakash pls take care of di and... And khushi for me'' arnav said to his brother over the phone while talking to him..
"i promise bhai ki main khushiji aur di ka kayal rakhunga'' aakash replied to his cousin brother finally relieved that he is talking to him now.
"thank you'' said arnav in appreciation that someome is looking after the peopls he loves most.
"no problem bhai, ab aap khushiji is baat karna''. Saying this he passed the phone to khushi who was standing beside him.
Khushi collected the ohone from aakash and moved a little away to speak with her huaband, but she couldnt bring herself to saying anything to him.
"khushi'' arnavs husky voice came from the other side of the phone but instead of replying to his call she just broke into tears which brought the attention of the others in the room to her but they didnt say anything .
"khushi rona baand karo pls''
''khushi, i telling you na that i'm fine''
''khushi pls stop crying''
but khushi dint stop crying is worse it made her crying worse and arnav dint know what to do about it, so he just said what came to his mind at that time and just said it...
"khushi I LOVE YOU" and immidiately she stoppwd crying instead a shocked expression was seen in her face. But that too dint last long for arnav said something again which made khuahi start crying again but this time she also said something in return.
"khushi i really really love you alot'' arnav said, to which a very sobbing khushi replied as...
"i love you too arnavji'' .


Pls tell me how it was. Thank you
INDEX
PROLOGUE-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3849175&PID=97793289&#p97793289
CHAPTER 1-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3849175&PID=98028445&#p98028445
CHAPTER 2-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3849175&PID=100821335&#p100821335
CHAPTER 3-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3849175&PID=103562246&#p103562246
CHAPTER 4-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3849175&PID=104234448&#p104234448
CHAPTER 5-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3849175&PID=105340852&#p105340852
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the prologue...
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful start! hmm cheesy title😉
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<font size="6">CHAPTER 1</font><font size="1">

"I love you too arnavji" khusi answered back to the phone while sobbing and holding onto the phone more into her ears waiting for arnav to say something more but after a few seconds, she heard the soung of the phone been disconnected from the other side of the phone. "tut tut tut" the sound came making shiver as if feeling cold.


"arnavji?" she said into the phone


" hello arnavji"


"arnavji are you there?"


"arnavji please talk to me"


"arnavjiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she shouted into the phone in despair not wanting to believe that the call mhas been disconnected. Hearing the voice of khushi shouting ad calling onto arnav in the phone is what made the little audience she had react and all at once they all came to here side asking her her questions.


"kya huwa khushi/ khushiji/khushi bitya/ pati sari?" aakash,payal,anjali,nani and mami all at the same time.


"kaat gayi" a very disturbed and shaken khushi said to no-one in particular and then she turned to her sister and "jiji arnavji..." She looked at anjali and said " arnavji ka phone kaat gaye di, look di the phone has been disconnected" she said while crying and pointing to the phone while talking as if trying to explain her point.

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" khushiji" aakash said making her turn to look and look at him.


"khushiji pls stop crying, bhai will not be happy to know that you have been crying after he left please, okay?" he said looking her in the eyes to which she nodded and start to wipe her tears with the tissue he gave her.


"look khushiji bhai told me that the reception in then place he is now is very bad so please stop crying , I'm sure bhai will call you again when the gets network okay?" he said explain to her as if she is a 5-year old kid, to which she nodded her head innocently while wiping her tears. That's how the rest, even mami continue to assure khushi that her arnavji is safe and he will call her again.


After everything was done khushi stood up and left the room to go to her own room and aakassh stood looking at her until she was out of his site promising imself to look after khushi and treat her as his younger sister even after arnav is back.

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"I love you too arnavji"


When the words came from the other side of the phone hitting arnavs ears, for a moment he felt very happy but few moments later when he heard the sobbing sounds of khushi from the other side of the phone he wasn't able to handle it and he just disconnect the call without saying anything more and he gave the phone to the man standing over his head with a gun pointed to his brain so that if he says anything wrong, he can just blow up his head. At that moment arnav felt so defeated and so angry . The sobbing voice of khushi still ringing in his ears and it is paining him big deal in his heart


"oh khushi..." he said as a tear roll down from his eyes


"khushi, what have you done to me" he said in a defeasted state closing his eyes as more tears fell from his eyes.

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Edited by u12ae1029 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nice start of the story, continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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When are you gonna update?
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Wow di aamazing. .do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Start.👏⭐️
Loved it.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃
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wow di plzz continue soon plzz di
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CHAPTER 2

It has been two days since
arnav has made a call to raizada mansion and in these two miserable, she has
been eating very less food and she hardly even talks to anyone. Everyone in
raizada mansion is very worried sick for her because they have never seen her
like this before and anjali has already made a promise to herself that once
arnav steps foot in raizada house, he is going to have to hear a piece of her
mind for letting the poor soul go through all this in his absence and he hasn't
even call her "this is unacceptable" she told herself seeing the amount of
weight khushi has lost in the past few days.


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In the past few days that arnav has been locked, he has had more
than enough time to think things through enough to gather that he has been
wrong in retain khushi and now the first thing he has to do after leaving this
rotten place, then the first thing that he would do is to make up to khuishi
for what he had done to her "but first I have to get out of here" he taught to
himself thoughtfully and got himself busy into thinking again. After thinking
for about a minute, arnav then came up with the idea of what to do. He looked
around the room/cage he was put in, kept hostage and spotted a window at the
far end of the room and taught that maybe he could escape through the window
and get himself out, but the idea seemed stupid after examining the burglary
proof af the window. It was very strong that if he tried breaking it he might
break his arm instead, so arnav singh raizada dropped that idea and sat down to
think of another way of getting himself out of the place when he heard the
sound of some footsteps of people coming into the dark room that he was kept talking
about some boss of theirs that has come to see arnav.


Shocked was arnav singh raizada having seen the face of the person
that has kidnapped him. It was his own brother in law Shyam monohar jha. Though arnav knew that
his jijaji is a dog, he never knew he was a snake also. There he was
standing in all his glory wearing a
white shirt and black pants(which he used arnavs money to buy off course) and a
very sickening smile.


Edited by u12ae1029 - 11 years ago

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