ArShi FF:Twilight(Part 2 on PG 22)

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

nice update

do continue soon

thanks for the PM

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

nice starting.khushi got a car from her dad.short update.plz giv a long update next time.waiting 4 arnav's entry.cs was interesting.plz update ur other ffs

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Mystery Girl

@mysterygirl06

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

awesome update.loved it...update soon..nd seriously a Buggati...woah woah...i love this car...

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Supper good start..

Though short but sweet..

Thnks for d PM..

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

nice update !!

loved it too much

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ankita sharma

@Ankita__S

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Nice updt.
Do continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

interesting sketch 👏 👏 👏 👏👏

amazing update 👏 👏 👏👏

waiting to read more😃

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

awesome update..
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Hi 😊

I really appreciate ur desire to write an Arshi story based on Twilight ... even I love the series.

but honestly dear the problem here is that u have only changed the name of the characters and places.

the situations ... the lines ... the relations ... they are all the same coz of which the story holds no suprises.

I dont want to hurt u dear but taking inspiration from a story doesnt mean u have to have the same situations and characters. if u want to write a vampire love story on Arshi ... then go ahead but dont make it so strongly similar to Twilight.

cheers