Aaslok new OS : once upon a story part 7 updated on page77

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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Tomorrow I will rest of parts😊
Now I am bit tired
Going to sleep
Good night

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: lachii
eww what a screwed man this shlok is...good job!!

thank u and welcome back

you back after long break

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: anjipankaj
Aastha lost her memory.now shloky boy has to work hard to get back her memory and still he has some feelings for aastha.loved it .will be waiting for further updates

dont be very sad it was just a twist but i will give you a shock in next one😆

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: rbb1
Great update omg poor Astha I hope she gets well soon

ready for big surprise😆

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: fatima_FM
Part 1
Awesome

thank you love ya😳

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: rbb1
yeah it's sad but she will get well with Shlok's help

again i want to say guys and gals be ready for the huge thing😆

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pixi_nightingal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Part 2
Superb was thinking to read tomorrow but 1 comment catch my eye
So I couldn't stop myself 4rm reading 😆

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latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

nice update, like that she is injured with memory loss, and i like shlocks confused thoughts and possible realisation that he may have deeper feelings for her apart from just wanting the letters. Nicely written