ArHi SS: Storm Within *COMPLETE*

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

wat d????

i cannot believe dis that u have written this story nd had kept wit u since so long witout posting it,goddd didu u dnt knw how much wrng u were not to post it nd give us d opputunity to read it before..!

surprise is alwaz d best thing if its as good as this one 😉

now cuming to d story,ahem do i need to say it actually dat u have nailed it up wit sheer brilliance yet again nd have proved dat u r truly one hell talented writer of dis forum,i think there is no need coz i have already told u before nd dat too for innumerable number of times..! 😛

d concept of d story was mindblowing wit arnav nd khushi both in terrible pain,one in d fear of losing khushi nd d other making a decision to have their child at d cost of her life..!

arnav decided to show his hatred but her appearance nd presence around him made him weak alwaz nd thus he ended up shouting at her to hide his pain but khuhsi did not let him b in pain coz she loves her too much to see his real condition through his hatred nd she knws dat her arnavji loves her a lot nd watever he is doing is nly for her but still she did not give up nd got all stuck to her decisin of havng d baby..!

arnav's anger nd khushi's pain has been beautifully xpressed nd the way u have shown how much pain arnav is bearing insiode him to think of losing khushi was simply perfct..!

that momnt was simply heart touching wen khuhsi sent a silent prayer to her devi maiyaa wishing dat she should live as she loves her hubby nd their babay a lot to leave..!

each ne every scene of d story as simply fabulous nd i loved it how u ended it..!

actually i knw it well dat khushi will survive coz i knw u too well to guess dat 😉

loved it how u have made her cum back to her senses nd its not anythng illogical coz miracles do happen nd two ppl being so much in love will deffo live coz their love is strong enough to make them live wit each other alwaz nd forever..!

beautiful story

i loved it totally nd i will not mind if u r planning to give many more surprises like dis 😆

love ya 🤗

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

OMG I was so worried
but I like the happy ending

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

wow!! beautifully written story... loved it... could feel all the emotions within myself...

and thanks for the happy ending 😃

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darya20

@darya20

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Waw the ss was lovely loved it sooo much

It was so heart breaking

At one point I thought u will kill khushi but thank god u didnt I loved it sooo sooo sooo much

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humsafar

@humsafar

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

wowww loved it it was so emotional😊

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Excellent story Tina...

It is a mixtue of love, hate, intence and the pain. by end of the story i didnt notice that i was crying.. that much i was involved into the story..

I must say Arnav gone thourgh hell literelly as he loves Kushi so much but he dont have the option but to hate...

And hats off to kushi.. she knews her decession will cause pain to her Arnav but still she choose baby over Arnav as she knows that Arnav will love their baby...

Excellent One dear... hats off to your brain for come up with such a beautiful story.😆. Love you dear 👏😊😉

Edited by honey-sweety - 11 years ago

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

U r such a sweetheart Tina..
It was such. Heart wrenching supspense story. Loved it

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Wow . this was juat so beautiful,... am speechless with words to describe how i felt reading it ... from the beginning with her pregnancy, its so sad to know that the chance of survival was so little but she is a fighter for her child and love ... she didn't give up ... and at the ending the fruit of her's filled their lives with happiness cause arnav have his Khushi and son ... a happy family ...

Thanks so much for PM Tina ...

Do continue to write such wonderful SS ... but with all Happy Endings ...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

you my dear gave us right heart attack
and made us cry buckets
tried not to cry
but that didnt really work out
i wondered why he hated her
and slowly all came out
its due to her pregnancy which was gonna be harmful for her
she could loose her life
and we all know how he cant do without her
so he chose to hate her
or so he thought he couldnt really hate her
not when he loves her so much
well for a mother her baby is more important right
so she chose her baby over herself
which of course didnt settle with him
but it worked out for them
how i dont know but it did
it wasnt easy for them though
in fact very very hard
but it paid off with their beautiful baby boy and his wife being there too
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Loved it! Except that in all sense and purpose, he only had nine months left with her and he treated her like shit???????? Instead of giving her more love than possible?? Just like him to think about himself, only! Looks like she is the one who did everything in this relationship, she gave and he only took!