New AsYa FF- ' Dil-e- Nadaan'#1 thread 2 link- page 1 - Page 70

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

superb update

can't believe Qureshi could go to this extent

asad's plan workeed

n he got zyaad back

really happy for them

thnx dea keep reading

update soon

Originally posted by: 11sinal

update soon

and all the best for ur exam

thnx a lot

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

thnx dint u get pm?

Originally posted by: KaBhilove07

thnx, update to be lil late cz of xams

Its okay i will wait for your update
All the best for xamz

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Update Sooon

update cmng by 9 or 10 pm

Originally posted by: khadupam

Its okay i will wait for your update
All the best for xamz

thnx dear update today

Originally posted by: sasir

no

now iam getting other pms but not urs😭

plz update soon

plz pm me

i swear i pm every part.. I'l nw scrap u also, ..

HI buddies, i knw i m late to update.😊 bt my xams r cmng gosh, its tough frm nw updates wil take sm time, bt plz keep cmmenting, i found many of u nt cmenting, guys i love to see ur cments plz cment .😭
20 PARTS, over cnt believe, thnks to all likers and lovly cmentors.
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bt i too loved their cment.
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LUV U TONNES,
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Part 21- section A
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Asad iritately cme out, all were waiting out fr hm,
Zoya: "mr. Khan u r late, lets go, we'l miss our train" she handed zyaad to asad.
He was yawning hard. They reached railway station.
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They took their seats,
Asad, zoya, zyaad, humaira, nikhat took ri8 side seat, whereas rest sat on left side.
Journey was for 2 days( sory i dint knew actual time).
DAY 1 at night
Asad slept as he never hd slept before, others too woke til 1 am then slept.
Day 2 also pased, it was dificult for asad to get zoya, as all suronded her.
They safely reached mumbai.
They decided to fresh n up n then go to haji ali, at 4 am mrng they made their way to haji ali, they walked in groups.
Front- zoya, zyaad and humaira
Others folowing them. Asad was astonished seeing hs beautiful wife in jeans and shirt, it was 1st time she wore it.
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All peacefuly prayed at haji ali, najma was nt there, she left seeing all praying.
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She met a man on way of haji ali.
Najma: "imran, hw wil i manage to tel all abt our relation" imran huged her.
imran: "najma, u knw na i love u, tel them hw we met on chat and hw i used to cme to bhopal to meet u" he broke the hug.
Najma: "bt imran" he kised her forehead.
Imran: "i'l die without u najma" they were intruptd by asad's cal.
she ran frm there.
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Dilshad: "najma, where were u" najma grew pale.
Najma: "ami, vo i thought to capture the beauty in camera" she managed to lie.
DAYS PASSED
But asad was nt able to get zoya, smtime she slept with najma or smtime zyaad was with them.
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LAST DAY
Nikhat: "bhabhi, plz cn zyaad sleep with me today plz" they were eating, asad lighted up, zoya agreed.
All went to their rooms.
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ASAD IN ROOM
Asad: "alah, finaly today she'l be with me," he jumped on bed.
Zoya cme: "alah miah wats wrng with u mr. Khan, hv u gne mad" she laughed and turned to close door.
Asad became embrased.
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Not yet completed check below

Part 21- section B
LIL MATURE CONTENT- u cn say it romantic too
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Asad holded zoya frm bck.
Zoya threw hm and was abt to go when asad tug her hand and closed her to hm.
Zoya: "mr. Khan plz," Asad saw her.
Asad:"wat, frm last night u r seducing me mrs. Khan" zoya widened her eyes hearing this."
Zoya: "wat i did?" asad hold her deadly close to hm.
Asad: "frm two days u r wearing jeans, mashalah u looked beautiful" he whispered in her ears.
Zoya shyd: "realy?" asad nw graped her lips, nw their tounges were fighting in each other's mouth.
After 3 minutes asad broke the kiss, and was about to unbutton zoya's shirt,
Zoya: "mr. Khan nt nw" she seriously said.
Asad: "why?" he was shocked.
Zoya: she first looked at hm, then laughed," first u" and she started unbutoning hs shirt.
Asad tightly huged her in a playful maner.
She made asad free frm hs shirt, we was nw in black vest.
He removed her hairs frm her neck. He sucked a part of her neck making her moan.
He then again kised her on her lips.
Zoya placed her head on hs chest. Asad made her look up, he kised on her eyes, cheeks and then her neck
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He made her take off her shirt, she was nw in her long white vest, which she wore cz shirt was transparent.
Asad: " zoya, whats that" he disapointely said.
Zoya opened her eyes, and smiled: "mr. Khan, leave today" she laughed and took blanket and slept holding him in her arms.
Asad: "zoya, today zyaad is not with us, and its our last night in mumbai.." zoya stoped him placing soft kis on his lips.
Zoya: "sleep now, its enough" they slept.
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MORNING
A mistake they made asad dint let zoya even close the door.
Humaira and ayan came to cal asad and zoya.
Humaira first entered she was shockd to see their clothes down, bt realy it was just their shirts.
Ayan was about to enter when humaira stoped hm.
Humaira: "let us go they'l cme" she holded hs hands and took hm out.
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Najma dint knew wat to do, she was confused about her confession of imran
She went to dilshad's room, she was packing her bags.
Najma: "ammi" dilshad turned.
Dilshad: "najma, oh u r here, lets go we r getting late" dilshad dint alowed her to speak, and took her out.
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Humaira, ayan cme frm asya's room, nikhat cme with zyad and farhan, they joined dilshad and najma out.
asad and zoya woke after 5 mintues, they huried to change and fresh.
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While going out zoya noticed door open.
Zoya: "ho, mr. Khan it was open, if sm1 would hv seen us" asad showed hs inocent face.
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Outside hotel
All were waiting for them.
Dilshad: "very early asad, go n rest mre" she teased hm.
Asad took zyaad frm nikhat: "sory ammi" zoya put her face down.
farhan: " bhaijan, u cm rest more, we already hv mised our train" asad and zoya were embrased while others gigled.
Humaira was happy bt shocked at the same time knwing the room incident.
Zoya: "nw hw we'l go to bhopal" she tensely said.
Ayan jumped frm bck, face of zoya.
Ayan: "bhabhi, nw ur loving, respected shauhar wil take us on hs wolverin shoulders, wat say bhaijan" asad hit hm on hand while others gigled.
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Zoya: "bt hw, he nly hd two shoulder" zyad claped playfuly, all started laughing.
Farhan cme after making a call.
Farhan: "bhaijan, dnt wory all dne, our next train at 1 am" all went bck to hotel.
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MORNING AND EVENING PASSED BORING. Bt ayan planed smthng special at night in garden, as they were suposed to wake whole night
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HOHO. Finaly im dne..
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