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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
update by 7.pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">continue soon...</font>
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 13- section A
. Asad makes hs way to khan villa.. He knew he was dng wrng, bt he couldnt control hm. . . Looking the gate closed he loosed hope bt then remembered that his room was on ground floor so he cn go frm window.. . . He adventurously climbed the wall and jumped in. He walked silently , luckily he saw zyaad and zoya sleeping, who were in their deep sleep. . . Asad jumped frm window. .. He went to zyaad placed hs hand on hs head which made hm wake.. Zyaad silently smiled to hm, asad felt a bond. Asad: "my son was mising abu" he murmured keeping in mind nt to disturb zoya. Zyaad smiled keeping hs tounge out.. Asad kised hs forehead. To which zyaad gigled which made zoya turn. Asad put hs head down of bed bt hs hand was nw under zoya's hand who cmforted zyaad in her sleep.. . . Asad: looked up slowly, " oh, m i idiot she is sleeping" he said to hmself. He slowly took hs hand out frm hs grip. He then left.. He was relieved after seeing hs son. . . Asad's apartment. .. As he went in, in shama's photo he saw zoya.. He rubed hs nd realised it was hs illusion. Asad could nw feel zoya even when she wasnt around.. He was nt sure of hs flng.. . Now zoya took hs dreams, he woke up in shock. Asad: "alah, wat is hpning to me? Everywhere zoya" he went to washroom to take bath.. It was mrng nw.. . . In the morning.. . . Zoya cme office, .. Qureshi: "gud mrng zoya.." he smirked admiring her with bd eyes. Asad: "mam"he shouted, "she is my junior bt nw ur senior qureshi mind ur facts". Asad knew of hs bd mind. He just wanted to save zoya. . . Qureshi being insulted in front of all, left frm there. . . Asad smiled to zoya bt she dumply took her seat. . . Mihika being atractd to hm, cme to hm. Mihika: "sir, u knw this girl.. Oho never take her side, she is just.." she tried to fill asad's mind. Asad: "..is just beautiful" he dint knew wat he just said admiring her.. . . Mihika: "wat sir" she surprisingly askd. . Asad ignored her, bit hs tongue nd went in the cabin. . . Qureshi's cabin. Qureshi: "i'l nt leave u zoya u'l hv to pay fr it" he beated the table. . . . In the evening. . . Asad: " guys please atention, tonight i hv a busines party at my apartment u all r compulsorily suposd to cme" he looked to zoya cnfirming she wont deny. . . . All claped with their excitement to visit asad's apartment that to for party. . . . Khan villa. . . Zoya: "phophi, i m suposd to go for a party, dnt cook for me, nd ya i'l take zyaad with me" she informed dilshad. Dilshad: "which party" she bluntly askd. Zoya: "busines party phophi" she left as further she dint want to answer. . . . Zoya got ready, nd too made zyaad ready.. She dint wantd to go bt hs compulsory word forced her. . . . Party hall. . . Arrangements were dne wait for guests.. Asad hmself welcomed all first neha, mihika and unwantingly qureshi. . . nt yet cmpleted check below
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Part 13- section B
Party was about to begin. . . Asad was searching for zoya. . . He couldnt see her.. . . Then she came with zyaad, she was in red plane saree with sparking border. Zyaad was wearing a black jacket.. . . Asad was stuned to zoya and hs son, he rushed to them, Asad: "welcome," he dumply welcomed her. Zoya to which just noded. Neha cme runing to her. Neha: "he zoe, u r looking beautiful.." she then turned to zyaad,"oh zoe ur son is so sweet, bt he doesnt look like u.. I think he is like hs abbu" zoya glared first at asad then to neha. Zoya: "neha, lets go,.." zoya took neha with her. Asad: "zyaad looks like me" he smiled to hmself. . . Zoya sat on a sofa. Placing zyaad on his lap.. Zyaad was playing with her hairs. . . This scenario was most loved by asad, he couldnt make out hs feeling for her, nw he is able to see shama in zoya. . . Asad: "allah, i miss my family" he smiled with brimmed eyes looking at them. . . Mihika joined asad: "hi sir, what r u seeing" she distracted hs mind which was focused on zoya and zyaad. . . Asad: "nthng," he broke hs stare n turned to mihika. Mihika: "sir, i knw u were seeing zoya" asad raised hs brows, "isnt she looks gorgeous" asad relieved, "bt u knw wat sir, hs hubby left hm, no1 knws why.. I think character fault.." . . Asad: "shut up!" he shouted on her. That graped all ones attention. And also zoya. Being embraced he left. . . Mihika rushed to zoya. . . Mihika: "becoz of u sir insulted me" she pointed her. Zoya: "r u ok na? Hw cme cz of me.." she bravely faced her. Mihika:" he couldnt bear a word against u.." she too blames her of their older clash. . .. Zoya with briming eyes leaves. . . She sat on bench out with zyaad, he was asleep nd cried. . . Asad came and sat beside her. . . Asad: "dnt cry" he said hmself crying. Zoya turned to his voice. . Zoya: "u," she stoods up taking zyaad. Asad: "i m nt gng to take ur son away" he made her face hm. Zoya: "please, mr. Khan dnt say anything" she begingly said. Asad: "zoya, i knw i was wrng, bt nw i m trying to make everythng ok and for that i need your help." he holded hs hands. Zoya: "dnt do this.. This i'l broke in pieces. Please spare me.. If u realy want to sought things first tel me what was zyaad n my mistake dat u left us" to which asad stood dumpstruck. Zoya cried hard hugging zyaad. . . Zoya: "dnt hv answer na, only cme dat day nw if u'l hv much will to answer me, what m i or u r facing today is nly cz of u" she left in anger.. . . Asad sat on bench crying hard: "zoya, i acept i was wrng bt i was helples n bound to my lo..." He stopd as he nw felt lil bad of nw caling shama hs love. . . KHAN VILLA. . . It was 11 pm all were sleeping. Zoya directly went to her room. . . Zoya placed zyaad on bed: "does he realy want me n zyaad, do i exist fr hm"she was revising hs thoughts. Hw he cares for her, hw he saves her.. Nw that memories brought smile on her face. . . Next day. . . Dilshad: "look i m suposd to go delhi for nishad khala's daughter's weding. Humaira u r cmng with me zoya, najma u r nt gng out of home for a week.. " she informed them. . . Zoya: "ok phophi, today i'l ask for leave.." she leaves. Humaira: "ami, who'l look after zyaad." dilshad: "zyaad's ammi wil be there, u dnt wry" she smiled. . . Blue wells constructions. . . Zoya went to Qureshi's cabin. Zoya: "sir, i want a week leave" she polietly askd. . Asad: "no leave, mrs. Khan n dnt forget i m ur boss" he replied frm bck.. . . That burned qureshi. Zoya: "bt mr. Asad, .." he cuts her. Asad: "no means no" he bluntly said. . . He noticed tears in her eyes, that killed hm for being rude. As he was abt to say sorry she left. . . . Office was over, qureshi made zoya wait after office taking asad's name, bt he was upto hs dirty plans. . . Zoya was working on her desk, when sm1 touches her.. . . Zoya: "wat r u dng mr. Qureshi?" she jerked him away. . . @@@@@@
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved it...cute update 😊
thanx fr pm...
Pls pls cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
excited for next part
thanx for pm
do pm me fro next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting.
loved it.
asad realizing his feelings for zoya.
plz update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
glad asad cleared that he will not take zyaad away from her
n loved how asad wasn't able to hear anyword against her
now hope asad saves zoya on time
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramlath

I loved it...cute update 😊
thanx fr pm...
Pls pls cont soon...

thnx a lot dear 😳

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