ARHI FF T#4 Falling in love with enemy II ch 16 on T#5 (mar 9)

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Posted: 11 years ago

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congrates on the new thread dear...

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Arshidrishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

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congrats on new thread 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mani

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Congrats for the new thread...
So when is the update due???

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933191

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This is such a different story I love how Arnav and khushi's relationship is growing here but I hope it's different from season and they don't marry for revenge

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Spoonai

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Eagerly waiting for ur new thread and ur pm since I'm a new reader to ur site. Thank you 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Whenever I think I have got your Arnav and Khushi figured out they never fail to surprise me, Arnav thinks he is responsible for Akash's death but in reality he may not be? Did Shyam help him out during this time is that why he is grateful to Shyam and respects him so much? Was anjali's marriage with Shyam a mere comprise? Did Arun Singh Raizada really die in an accident or was it planned? So many guesses and questions. I can't wait to read more.

Arnav has long ago let go of his plans for revenge but Khushi still thinks he is doing all this for revenge😒, now that they know Lavanya's death was a murder and not suicide why was it not mentioned or discussed again???

I like how you portray the most natural problems in your story like interfering neighbours who enjoy moral policing. I have always maintained that Arnav and khushi can either be the best of friends or the worst of enemies and here they seem to be a bit of both and you have written it well and shown the range of emotions subtly instead of overdoing and I like that balance.

Akash is dead in the story, so who is payal going to end up with? I really want to see her love track too as I really like her bonding with Arnav? Is her man going to be NK I think it will be weird to imagine them as a couple that is if you are planning to show them as one in the first place.

I am looking forward to read how their date is going to go and how the further mysteries are going to be reavealed.😃