ARHI FF T#4 Falling in love with enemy II ch 16 on T#5 (mar 9)

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Preety_Nebula

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Just lovely.😊Your last line"because I 'm falling for my enemy" just got me.

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fa-ameer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Beautiful dear...last past really touched my heart...

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.Sandal.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Ohhh God deeps u evil
Again cliffhanger.
Loved it itx fabulous

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PARVATHY44

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

awesome update.really enjoyed reading it.

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Finally I am commenting, though I am still through iPad I could not stop myself from reding this update again and commenting. Sorry for the delay Deeps😳

Aww the opening scene was cute, Khushi in her shawl, Arnav in his employee's car to avoid his spies LOL I like this, the way his family members look after him! I am still not very sure about Shyam's intention but I like the way Arnav speaks about his loved ones, with so much of love and respect.

Why is Arnav avoiding a two wheeler ride?! I remember you hinted him not being able to walk in an update, is that thing related to this? I am loving this suspense😃

Wow they went to a normal restaurant not some five star hotel. Poor Arnav he likes her so much and I am pretty sure that Khushi likes him too but the thing is that she is scared. The way she thinks about all the men makes me wonder what has happened with her? But at least she doesn't think that low of Arnav.

Arnav and Khushi's perception about love and marriage are so different. Indeed Arnav is every girl's dream man but alas not khushi's. I am sure Khushi's opinion will change soon.

Wow that kid is same who had sent that message to Khushi about Arnav. This is getting interesting:D

Omg this is sad, Arnav thinks it's his mistake that his dad is dead today. But what I loved about Khushi was she tried to cheer him up and tondo that she uttered the word 'date'.

Ahh I loved the bold Khushi, awesome. But Arnav's reply amazed me, he is an amazing person. LOL khushi is cute to make him stop uttering those words she kissed him. What a adorable kiss. It made my day😃

Percap is interesting, continue soon:)

Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago

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anjubua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

lovely update,do
continue soon.👏👏⭐️⭐️

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

RES UPDATE PAGE 15

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kajal511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

awesome update
loved it
loved it a lot
waiting for twist...though i dont want any seperation for arshi

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theezy-lovely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

i gotta read this fiction in one go...

its just fabulous... i really loved it...

this fiction is full of twists which makes to fall in love with this story n waiting to read...

you have portrayed the characters nicely...

and the last chapter was awesome..

the last line "because i have fallen in love with my enemy!"... superb...

waiting to read more...

i have sent a buddy request pls, accept it and do pm me when you next update...

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Thanks for a great chapter...loved the discussion on love and marriage...Khushi is so practical in her thinking and Arnav the total opposite!! Loved it.

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