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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: V3Od

I know I'm late in commenting, I'm totally busy these days. But I surely didn't miss any of your updates, and I must say that they were fantabulous👏


thank you so so much 🤗

So I will be commenting for chapters 11, 12 and 13 together😊

The reunion of the lovers was amazing. I honestly had tears in my eyes when Arnav made love to Khushi after 2 long years. I wonder how they stayed apart for so long. I mean he truly loved her, and she can never stay away from him. Those two years must have been pure torture for both of them. Anyway, what matters is they got back together, and I'm over the moon😆 i am glad to hear that. i was little skeptical posting that. you see, i am no good in writing love making scenes. oh yes, i can that..not only you, there were lots who just said one thing "finally they are together. plz dont separate them again" Oh, I must mention, the way Khushi made Arnav do all the household work, and asked him to write a poem was really cute. And I would ask the same thing, which grade is he in?🤣 At least, he was honest nah. That's what matters at the end. And also the fact that he love her more than anything thats the only part i enjoyed writing more for some own personal reasons 😆

Chapter 12 was another beautiful update. Wow, Arnav did give Khushi a wonderful surprise. He is the perfect husband for any woman. And the way he knelt down and asked for forgiveness was really heart touching. How can anyone stay miffed with a guy like him? I loved the update to the core❤️ But the end left me baffled. I wondered who the kidnapper was, although I still suspected Aditya ofcourse, bringing a man to his knees is never easy 😛

And my suspicion was proved right. It was Aditya indeed. But seriously, all this was done for revenge? What was small Sneha's fault in all this? She was just a kid. I hate this man to the core. I want Arnav to teach him a lesson for what he did. It was Aditya's mother at fault in the first place, not Avinash. He was drunk, and she took advantage of the situation. But being a good man, Avinash still supported them. But his mom instead turned her back on her own son, and instead of being angry at his mother, he hated his dad. Then later on when he found out Arnav was his father's real son, he started to feel jealous of him. The only difference between Arnav and Aditya is that Arnav did not whine about what he lost in his life, he instead built one for himself with Khushi. But Aditya whined for what he did not have, and instead of making his own fortune, his life plan was to ruin Arnav's life. If he for a second stopped being jealous of Arnav and looked around, he would have been able to find a much better girl than Khushi. But no, he was damn adamant in having Khushi and ruining Arnav's life. He is the only person to be blamed for who he is right now, and what he is going through yes, its indeed him. he is blinded by rage, anger, jealousy, hatred, loathe. it all started with his mother. she tried to ruin everything and when things went bad, she lost control over herself. instead of providing aditya a good life, she ruined it. arnav is just a reason he wanted to put blame for is horrible childhood. yes, he had a bad childhood but killing someone is never a right option.

I seriously hope Khushi wouldn't hide anything from Arnav now. Because it would create a mess later on🤔

Thanks for sharing three wonderful updates with us, that too regularly🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Update soon😉

Edited by --peehu-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
mujhe tharas athi hia the character for aditya
i hope arnav will not let happen something to kushi
adiya will have to get punishment
he killed a little baby ,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: mu12

mujhe tharas athi hia the character for aditya
i hope arnav will not let happen something to kushi
adiya will have to get punishment
he killed a little baby ,


lets see what happens...major drama coming up 😆
Edited by --peehu-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Yay, you are online🥳

I guess we will get an update soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86


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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
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WHAT THE !!!
I'm commenting as 1st on a story wch i jus randomly came across ..
Nandkisore ki jai ho !! :D
Aisan harkat sirf wahi karwa sakat hai !! :D
Ahhaha! :D

Jokes apart ..
Peehu, i'm glad that i came across ur workz !!
By reading ths chap [i.e., Out of the blue] I cn say u'r One Amazing writer ..
& I wud love to read all ur workz !! :') [Only Arshi Please!]

So, cn u PM me ur Index please ?!
I wud defo finish 'em soon ..

Mchh love,
Megha! <'3
Edited by Megha-Sobti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Loved the update!!! Hopefully they will find Aditya!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Glad theyve clocked on who it is :)
Cnt wait to c how thos story devolops x
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
nice update
waiting for aditya to be punished
plzz update ff fate & other ffs alternatively
n dn't forget to send me pm 😊


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