Arshi FF: Zindagi of Arshi THREAD 2: FINAL EPILOGUE - Pg: 114 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey, thanks a ton darling. I loved it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: raws

now three ppl are suffering...



Very true dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: canapoem

I always think what if Lavanya was Khushi and vice versa? Would we still want Arnav and Khushi to be together? the solution to this dilemma is not simple. Among the three there is going to be injustice done to at least one of them.


Yes. This is a question that will make you rethink on the story. I have gone through this dilemma a lot of time while writing this story.

It depends on your definition of injustice. If we both have the same semantic meaning for the word, then I'll tell you one thing, all the three characters will face with injustice and justice in this story. Time will take care of it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZakiZ

hey Daljeet, thanks... u should know that ur story gives me dreams and makes my day that much better... and i love leaving comments on the chapter.. it feels nice that u appreciate the comments... ;) :* tc



Awww☺️

What kind of dreams you have on my story?

Your comments fill my heart. So I have to acknowledge that fact right😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: nia.arshifan

Congrats on the new thread... 😊

THANK YOU😃

Thanks for the clarifications... They are much needed...

😳


So the situation was that arnav needed emotional support so he went out for lavanya n lavanya thought that he reciprocated her feelings... That means arnav is the one now... Whatever happened that night was his mistake... It is a mis understanding from lavanya's side... Whatever it is he has to face the consequences for his mistakes... Its sad that khushi is suffering amidst all these...

Yup! You said it. He has to face the consequences of his actions and he will too.

By the way, did i just read my name in the note?? U thanked me.. For my crazy talks?? Seriously... But if u r happy n remembered me for that then i'm gonna post very long comments everytime...

Then I'll look forward for your comments darling. I always love long analytical comments. Which writer won't?😉 You deserved the mention.

And yeah, all the best for ur internal...
Will be waiting for ur update...
Thanks for the pm...

Thank you😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: avaneesh06

adhiti dear... 😛

first of all my hearty congratulations to u... 👏👏
i just love ur works... its so close to my heart... whatever busy am...
i used to be keen to catch up with ur writeups... 😊

i have read ur first one... that imagination story in med... am i rite dear... 😉
when compared to that... the ongoing stories...
wow... what a difference... i could feel that... d way of matured writeups... awesome... am really really impressed... hats off to ur lovely works...
keep rocking... 👏👏

and am really honored to see my name there... luv u so much... 🤗

abot the clarifications... wow... i dont know abot others... but i just loved it... how a person can act when he's totally shaken... dat desire... fear... pain... love... everything...amazing... 👏

am just scared of the future tracks... 😲 i mean more curious to know how it leads... 😲😲😲

Congrats once again dear... 🥳


Hey, thanks dear. LOve you a lot for this comment. Each line made me smile.

Thank you so much. You are one among the first readers I have. And it is so overwhelming that you are still with me, though you have kid and other responsibilities. Also often I get to miss your updates due to the busy shedule of semester. Yet you are always there to support me. Thank you, it means a lot😭😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: daljeet


Yes. This is a question that will make you rethink on the story. I have gone through this dilemma a lot of time while writing this story.

It depends on your definition of injustice. If we both have the same semantic meaning for the word, then I'll tell you one thing, all the three characters will face with injustice and justice in this story. Time will take care of it.


Daljeet, thanks for the reply. I am eagerly waiting to know how the story is going to go forward. This story is indeed complex to come up with simple solutions like happily ever after. Kudos to you to think of a complex story about relationships like this one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: daljeet


Yup😆

Again I'm saying this - don't misunderstand my stand please. I clearly mentioned in the note that the scene change is not to justify Arnav. Even in this scene, I don't think he being drunk or needing emotional support can render him right about La. NO. He was a coward the next day. So this scene doesn't change anything which will justify Arnav.

This was just a correction that I had to make with respect to the change I made in La's character. That's it. That's all to it.

You phrased it right. This is my personal opinion to - He may be a big star and a very nice lover to Khushi, a good human being and whatever, but with respect to La his actions are unjustifiable. I don't think being slefish is wrong, because the 3 characters here are selfish, but unlike La and Kushi's actions, his cannot be justified.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratz on the new thread! waiting for the update! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahh that was good part from Arnav's side

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