Arshi FF: Zindagi of Arshi THREAD 2: FINAL EPILOGUE - Pg: 114 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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need an update now... PLEASE😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulations on the new thread dear...! 👏
and do please update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo on new thread.thanks for mentionin my name.its an honour.im humbled.d note cleared many doubts.all d best for ur exams.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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now three ppl are suffering...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new thread... i am really concerned for khushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratulations on new thread.
Thanks for the mention. ..
You are dreamymaya's sister?
I get opportunity to read both sisters story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My dear sister,
I am overwhelmed by your mention and that you didn't how all this writing started out...One friend of mine in IF had asked me, when I mentioned that it's my sister who writes fan fiction, who brought me to this fan fiction writing world, she had asked me whether the writing crazy on Arshi runs in family genes...well, what can i say? :-) I am very glad at least we have a common interest at least in one matter..but however coming to the second part of your note of justification --- first note on Arnav --- well, I can still find loophole if I try and that will start another fight between us...and the second justification on La-Arnav one night --- well, am not saying much because I have already told me in many words..but now after seeing you justification I need to say only one thing --- when La felt that finally Arnav realised his love, his plea "Please don't leave me" that undid her and she gave herself willingly, hoping, trusting, you know in the false belief of finally finding the shore for which she had been searching while being lost in the ocean of life and feeling that she had finally found home... ..you know, that is the biggest cheating you can do to a woman...Emotional cheating is the biggest crime than any worse pain... I got no more to say on this...I don't want a reply. I had thought to keep my thoughts to myself and you know trying max to detach myself from La and think in a broader scene giving equal importance to all 3 main characters but somehow Arnav comes across as very very selfish man. He may be a big star and a very nice lover to Khushi, a good friend to La, a good human being and whatever, but in my eyes, he lost his respect!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Im overwhelmed by ur actions 🤗. Thanks dear. But the actual credit goes to u and ur hardwork. Coming to the clarification - the change in La - Arnav scene its better than the previous one (damage was more in the first option) but it doesnt justify Arnav's action. All the best for ur internals. Waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: joe_arhi

Im overwhelmed by ur actions 🤗. Thanks dear. But the actual credit goes to u and ur hardwork. Coming to the clarification - the change in La - Arnav scene its better than the previous one (damage was more in the first option) but it doesnt justify Arnav's action. All the best for ur internals. Waiting for the next update..



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Yes editing was done not to justify Arnav's action. No, it was because the last scene is a blunder in my story that I forgot to correct when I changed the course of the story. So corrected it.

I mentioned there itself this is not an attempt to justify or clean up Arnav's character. With respect to La, Arnav is a very selfish person.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamymaya

My dear sister,

I am overwhelmed by your mention and that you didn't how all this writing started out...One friend of mine in IF had asked me, when I mentioned that it's my sister who writes fan fiction, who brought me to this fan fiction writing world, she had asked me whether the writing crazy on Arshi runs in family genes...well, what can i say? :-) I am very glad at least we have a common interest at least in one matter..but however coming to the second part of your note of justification --- first note on Arnav --- well, I can still find loophole if I try and that will start another fight between us...and the second justification on La-Arnav one night --- well, am not saying much because I have already told me in many words..but now after seeing you justification I need to say only one thing --- when La felt that finally Arnav realised his love, his plea "Please don't leave me" that undid her and she gave herself willingly, hoping, trusting, you know in the false belief of finally finding the shore for which she had been searching while being lost in the ocean of life and feeling that she had finally found home... ..you know, that is the biggest cheating you can do to a woman...Emotional cheating is the biggest crime than any worse pain... I got no more to say on this...I don't want a reply. I had thought to keep my thoughts to myself and you know trying max to detach myself from La and think in a broader scene giving equal importance to all 3 main characters but somehow Arnav comes across as very very selfish man. He may be a big star and a very nice lover to Khushi, a good friend to La, a good human being and whatever, but in my eyes, he lost his respect!


Yup😆

Again I'm saying this - don't misunderstand my stand please. I clearly mentioned in the note that the scene change is not to justify Arnav. Even in this scene, I don't think he being drunk or needing emotional support can render him right about La. NO. He was a coward the next day. So this scene doesn't change anything which will justify Arnav.

This was just a correction that I had to make with respect to the change I made in La's character. That's it. That's all to it.

You phrased it right. This is my personal opinion to - He may be a big star and a very nice lover to Khushi, a good human being and whatever, but with respect to La his actions are unjustifiable. I don't think being slefish is wrong, because the 3 characters here are selfish, but unlike La and Kushi's actions, his cannot be justified.

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