SwaRon SS: It's about time||Epilogue Updated||

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bhavika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

first part ws mainly on sharon's pov...it ws very well written...
Nw waiting fr the nxt part...
Do continue n pm me...

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

amazing!!

pls continue😊

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Rachel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

it was awesome...
very good start..loved the way you explained sharon's monlogue...
update soon :)

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Chaitra Joshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

interesting start...

how i wish we could see things this way in d3...

but as far as the show is concerned swaron patch up still seems to be a distant dream...😭

i would love to see it in ur ss atleast...

do continue soon and pm me😊

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Regina.Phalange

@Regina.Phalange

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Amazing start ..looking forward for the story :)

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Great start to your SS mihika a pleasing read..
The monologue we got from Sharon's pov was really nice to read.. I liked how she connected all the incidents to get an answer to her questions.. The pehla nasha dance, the payal chori and the truth and dare moment all of it symbolised one thing and that was Swayam's love for her..
I'm glad she is back to her diva mode and glad she is going to get her answers from swayam..
Plzzz pm me when you update the next part..😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Amazing start Mihi..wonderful monologue...u portrayed her feelings so beautifully...you got back the lost charm of SwaRon ...only if this essence of SwaRon we could see in D3...amazingly portrayed POV...u showed her feelings,her love,her guilt ...everything u expressed beautifully...plz continue soon...love the way you write😊

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try2149

@try2149

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

really liked ur ss.

very good start.

you wrote sharon's pov so beautifully.

i really wish hamein d3 mein bhi aisa kuch dekhne ko milta.

plz pm me when you update next part thanx.

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VruShan_MaNan

@VruShan_MaNan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Sorry abhi ke liye I have to reserve.😛

Maarna mat.😆

Unres.

I really liked the way you started this SS.

One thing I like the most by far is monologue of Sharon which is rare in D3.

I really wanted to know what must be going on Sharon's mind and you conceptualized it really well.👍🏼

The monologue completely justified Sharon's character which is the highlight for me.

I know its just a start and a lot more has to come, so I am really eager to see the way you will take this forward.

So eagerly waiting for the abandoned corridor part as we all know it has the very special and prominent place in SwaRon's life.❤️

Bigg huggg.🤗

Edited by VruShan_SwaRon - 11 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

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A very beautifull start..Loved the concept..Though i am not follower of D3 anymore..But i loved ur way to analysis with sharon as a character..Loved the individual POV of sharon..It was perfectly described regarding her pain,her emotions,her love and her willingness to get back her swayam in her life..To be honest,in D3 we never got to see this..But lucky to have read in ur SS..So in whole it was sharon part and u done great with it..Beautifully penned...Keep continue..I am just looking forward to read swayam reaction..After all he is an angry young man now lol..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateek.007 - 11 years ago