SS: IT HAD TO BE YOU: Completed - Page 26

IT HAD TO BE YOU...

very interesting and unique concept my dear...

Khushi is a laadly beti and very special little sister ..

Anjali is no more and poor boy has to suffer a lot because of his lose and his parents..

And Garima played a very beautiful mother figure for him..😳 (well all thanks to Khushi)

Arnav and his bonding with Khushi's family...👏

I loved the way you wrote Arnav and Khushi's feelings one is 17 years and the other 22 years still she felt some changes in his eyes...and Khushi wanted to give him time...👏

so many changes in Khushi's life ..with broken heart..

Is Arnav still trying to stay away from her?

and I hate Lavanya's statement on Khushi and Arnav's relationship...HIS SISTER...!!!!😡

Is Arnav is afraid of losing family again?
or is there another reason as his parents were not a good example ...

# part 2,
so wonderfully written Nidhi,

loved the conversation between them in the kitchen...

why this man avoiding her too much..

Garima is not seeing the love for Arnav and longing for him in Khushi's eyes or she doesn't want to?

Nidhi...No need of AMAR-PREM...Only ARNAV - PREM...😆

ya phir jealousy lession for Arnav?😳😆..

Oh my God ..at her 21st birthday she got such a beautiful gift from Arnav.and the dinner date...
..then why he is backing of in their beautiful relationship? ( may be he needs to tell her family what he feels for Khushi and hope he'll do soon...are you planning to separate them?)



Arnav had already lost a family, Khushi refused to make him an orphan again👏

thanks for the mails,
take care.

Nidhi - Not that you werent a great writer before but this story here, is by far the best. It looks like your stories are turning out to be complicated life stories - nothing dramatic like in the movies but your average boy-girl complications. This update is by far one of my favorite updates. The highlight of your writing in this update was certainly the description of Arshi expressions/eye lock during the kitchen conversation. It was so good I could picture every single expression change and I felt the goosebumps when you said Arnav looked at her and their eyes met. I had to read this update 3 times and still feel "in the story". I really need an update on this one, like right now. I know it is not possible, so here is hoping for a short wait. Love you girl! You are turning out to be one of the best writers here.

oh and btw - Bain and Company? Tell Kushi if she works there, she will not have much time for romance. ha ha

Loved the way u have started it...the tangled web of relation they are presently in...amazing...

You truly are amazing...LOVE YOU DAMMIT!!! Every story of yours, you know how to captivate the reader to coming back for more not to mention rereading while you update the story for further analyses. That is what you have done to me and probably many others on this Forum J

Seriously this chapter was the BEST...two people who truly love each other are sacrificing their love in order to not ruin or make their relationships complicated. Pure sacrifice on both their parts. It seems like their love is strong and now that they are adults and mature they can manage through. I am guessing Khushi's parents would love to have Arnav "officially" as family. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us.

aww😭 poor khushi...I just love ur characters cause they are always individuals with strength but vulnerable in their own way...loved the update

Another wonderful update Nidhi...Loved it...

Brilliant start. you have matured as a writer starting from Finding Love... love the tsory - looking to read the next part! ASAP! :-)

Lost count how many times I read the update.. :-) I feel sooo sad for Kushi.. she still has 8 year old soft toy..how come Garima hasn't noticedhis till now? she seems to be highly tuned to her kids needs and their feelings. she would have read it for sure in Kushi's eyes and Arnav's care too. may b thats why she is asking Arnav to introduce her to Amar..and somehow I have started liking this Amar guy as I strongly feel he'll understand Kushi and will bring Arhi together..

Khushi spoke his mind
What if they screwed up ... Than what ... WouLd his family love him or welcome him the way they are now ?? He is too scared to change his equation with the family ..once being all alone and no one to cared for he don't want to loose the family