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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AR-kash

Very nice parts
Sorry for the late replies
Loved the parts
Finally eva called armaan daddy she is soo sweat
Rahul and muskaan are engaged now thts good
Hate rohit hope he doesnot do anything to shilpa now
Armaan and ridhimma trust each other
Finally they are togther
Hope nothing happen now
Cont soon
Cant wait to read more

Originally posted by: blessed4

Superb part. Nice to see Ridhima got her true love. Please continue soon

Thank you so much. I'm glad u enjoyed the part.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Damn it, I missed the first dabba. -_- Be faster next time.

RES anyway :)
Okay, so unres.

First and foremost, ILYT <3
And what a brilliant excuse to not comment completely 🤣
But yes, well, I would have killed you so that's fine. xD
I know. That's why I had to cut it short. I didn't want to be killed.

The Following Chapter Contains A Part That Is Unsuitable For Younger Readers.
Reader Discretion Is Advised.
I always wanted to write that. 😆

Now that's just completely weird. :) How is that weird. I was only warning.
But, back to the part. :D

That beginning was so intense *___* I love how her emotions are portrayed jaise uska sar fatne wala ho and everything is against her <33 I'm guessing the knuckles are Armaan's and the voices are of Eva and Armaan 😳 So yeah, to the flashback now. DAMN IT, my guess was wrong. :( Aww! At least she still speaks in breaks. Makes it seem so much more angrier than she already is xD Rohit is such a ********. But YAY, she slapped him ^_^ I love it when the female lead slaps the villain <3 I just wish she had hit him in the nuts though. 😳 But then, that's just me. 😆 BUT ISSHHH, he kissed her 🤢 Poor Riddhima. -_- But then, she rocks so she stamped him! :D Also, do you plan on making Riddhima a marathon runner? 🤣 Honest to God, she runs a lot. 😆 But then, ARMAAN'S ROOM! :D

Aww Armaan <3 I should take anger controlling lessons from him 😆 But that dialogue of his <33 ILY for that. Such an amazing dialogue that is :') But I'm glad that knocked some sense into her and told him. BUT WHY IS ARMAAN SO PERFECT? :'( Makes me wanna cry </3 BUT SHE ASKED HIM TO DO THAT THING. What The! :O That was so unexpected. I thought she'll say thank you or will you marry me. :O But they did it <33 And Armaan's care is so heartwarming :') I've always loved Ridzi in Armaan's clothes, so much more special that seems <33 When she spoke without pausing, even I didn't notice. 😆 I was so involved. xD I'm so happy that Ridzi's happy :D

RM <3 <3 <3 That's such a sweet first liking or whatever it's called. ^_^ Muski, oh Muski. She poured water and he ran behind her. That's just sooo, them. I love how they can be so childish and yet be so serious when required <33 EVAAA *_* She.Is.So.Cute. She was cursing the blocks 🤣 Oh my god, I love this child 😆 And that interaction with Ridzi and Armaan is so cute <3 They're such amazing parents ki they don't even shout at their bacchi :) I love them yaar.

GOD ROHIT -________- Go die in a hell hole and never come back please Rohit. He's such an irritatoo. -_- I hope he dies in the next chapter ^_^

I love how you've put in EVERY character and given them the required parts <3 That's one of my favorite things about your SS <3

Now to the reply you gave to my comment, 😆
YAY, I get Atul! :D I'm unique, hence I love Ben Cooper ;) 😆 Any guy can be Ben Cooper 😆 I don't mind xD YES YES, you will try for an AR DANCE And Keerti might be back.
Now I can't wait for the update *________*
So update soon 😃

I was going to reply more but I'm lazy. 😃So I'm just going to say thank you very much. oh and also undo ur res in my scrapbook.
Edited by .BezubaanPari. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
-Preview To Chapter 9-

"And how could let him near Eva! What if he had done something to her!"

"Ridzi I said I'm sorry. I told him to leave but he insisted on coming in. What was I supposed to do?"

"YOU COULD HAVE CALLED ME! How hard is it to pick up the ******* phone and dial a number!"

"Okay. Okay. Enough. Fruitloop calm down. Relax. Look you sit here. I'll go ask him to leave okay."

"No. Armaan I'll ask him to leave. You stay here with Eva."

"Are you sure?"

"I'm sure. I'll be fine. I'll be right back."



Not done yet hence tiny blurb again. 😆 Sorry I know u all hate them. But anyways let me know how it was and I apologize for any errors. Index and Pm info is on page:1.

Okies I go now. Bye.

-Tashu

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Posted: 11 years ago
You really have a bad habit of torturing us :(
I loved how you started it...you can tell how angry she is just by one line
But whose come???? Is it Rohit????? No but it can't be him because why would Armaan let him in...but I'm probably wrong that always happens to my guesses
:( I'm sad I want an update
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Posted: 11 years ago
[B]Hiii...Awesome preview...Loved it...hope Eva's ok...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
guess shashank has come over
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Posted: 11 years ago
U r really good at torturing us with those tiny previews seriously :D.. i just wish that this bas***d leaves them alone and ridzi gives some punches!! He such an ... whatever!
Update soon!

Ps. I commented on ur first update and then i got totally inactive and left IF!.. and now i got back and read all the updates. You are awsome!

-shilpa
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice
Looking forward to read more
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thank you so much everyone for liking and reading the preview.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

[B]Hiii...Awesome preview...Loved it...hope Eva's ok...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life

You really have a bad habit of torturing us :(

I loved how you started it...you can tell how angry she is just by one line
But whose come???? Is it Rohit????? No but it can't be him because why would Armaan let him in...but I'm probably wrong that always happens to my guesses
:( I'm sad I want an update

Originally posted by: aishu3003

awesomeee preview😉

thank you guys! And yeah I'm sorry for torturing you all! But I shall end it shortly.

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