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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept Jot!!! :D
Haven't seen AK's show but will try this story?? Is the show any good??
Waiting :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very Nice concept.Eager to read it.Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

PS - pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
First of all, someone asked me about the show.. Um, this show is quite old. It was very popular.. It ended in I think 2008? I'm not sure. But yes, it was a wonderful show. 😃 One of Ekta's most successful shows.
And as I stated in my PM, I've changed the concept of this story. The first one wasn't working for me. So, do go read the concept on the first page once again or you'll be slightly confused. 😆
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Chapter One
A Colossal Disaster
'Kripa? Dude, wake up!'
Kripa groaned picking up the pillow and covering her head with it, attempting to drown out the nagging voice of her roommate, Zoya Farookhi.
'Kripa! I mean it. Wake up now.' With that, Zoya yanked the blanket and pillow off of Kripa causing her to sit up annoyed, rubbing her eyes.
'What is wrong with you? You've been laying in bed ever since your phone call with your family.' Zoya chided. Kripa sighed in response.
'Mishti is getting married next month.' She muttered, wringing her hands together.
'That's good news! You get to attend a wedding. And it's not just any wedding! It's your sister's wedding!' Zoya exclaimed, sitting down on the bed cross legged.
'My parents want me to show up this month and help them with preparations. Why? Because Mishti thinks I can continue with my "useless writing degree" anytime.' Kripa said bitterly, standing up and fixing the bed sheets.
'Now that's ridiculous. Okay, I'll tell you what, we've got nothing to do and there's this party my friend, Sophia invited me to. I wasn't planning to go cause it's not my kind of party but we'll go together. Get ready.' Before Kripa could reply, Zoya was out the door.
Sighing, she walked to the full length mirror in the dorm room and stared at herself disapprovingly. She cringed at her hair which looked like a bird's nest. Kripa reached for eyeliner, rubbing at the dark shadows underneath her eyes. She never did like her dark brown eyes and pale face. Mishti had light brown eyes, high cheekbones with naturally rosy cheeks. If only she had an ounce of Mishti's femininity. Shaking her head, she dropped the eyeliner and decided to comb her hair first.
Just as she finished up applying her make up, the door swung open and in stepped Zoya once again dressed in a black tube dress.
'When did you curl your hair?' Kripa asked in surprised as she turned around to face her friend.
'Sophia did. Don't I look cute? You ready to go?'
Kripa nodded. Checking the doors lock, the two walked out into the hallway.
'Where's this party?' Kripa asked Zoya as they headed towards the waiting taxi outside.
'It's at someone's house. I have the address. Sophia texted it to me.'
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A couple minutes later, the taxi stopped in front of a two storey brick house shining with bright lights. Kripa stepped out after Zoya tentatively. She had a bad feeling about this party for some reason.
Zoya reached for the doorbell and rung it twice before someone heard it and opened the door for them. As they stepped in, Kripa felt a cold chill spread through her body. The party just didn't seem like a good idea anymore. She carefully dodged a messy drunk couple on the floor before she noticed the trays of white powder laying on several counters along with green mossy substances. She grabbed for Zoya's arm and turned her around.
'They have drugs here!' Kripa hissed in her ear angrily. Zoya rolled her eyes at her.
'I forgot you've never been to a party the past 3 years.'
Kripa's eyes flashed. 'I have been to parties. Just not these.' Zoya dragged Kripa to the alcohol wordlessly.
'Here, have Jell-O shot. You clearly need it.' Kripa snatched the cup from her hand and dumped the gelatin in her mouth. Zoya was right in at least one thing. Kripa sure as hell did need to get drunk tonight. She had had enough with her family and tonight, she needed to flush it out of her system.
'Hey look! Sophia. I'll be right back.' Zoya said, walking off. Kripa shrugged grabbing herself another Jell-O shot.
Before she knew it, the world had become a little fuzzy but a lot more exciting. She could feel the music beat against the floor, and the joy and happiness among the crowd of people dancing. She walked forward slowly and joined the crowd, her hair flying wildly. Suddenly, a pair of hands gripped her waist and she turned around unsteadily. A pair of green malicious eyes stared back at her smirking. The feeling of disgusting surged through her and she threw his hands off her stepping back. The more she stepped back, the more he stepped forward.
As she continued to move backwards, she finally stopped when she hit something hard. She rubbed her eyes attempting to clear her vision and saw the green eyed man acknowledge someone behind her and walk away. Confused, she turned around and found herself staring into a pair of dark eyes with mesmerizing specks of gold. His lips were in a straight, stern thin line and he emanated nothing but coldness. But there was something alluring about him. She unconsciously raised her hand and placed it on his shoulder. He was saying something but her brain couldn't register all that was happening. It was too much. From colours and beauty, everything went to black. The last thing she felt was the mystery man's strong arms catching her.
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Chapter two below..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Chapter Two
The Dark Knight In Shining Armour
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The next morning Kripa woke up with a massive headache. She looked around at the unfamiliar surroundings groggily. Panic set in and she jumped out of the bed searching for her phone. Just then the door opened and in stepped a man that looked awfully familiar. His dark brown eyes with specks of gold seemed too familiar. As beautiful as he was, that wasn't a good thing. She was drunk and she did not believe in one night stands.
'What am I doing here? Where's my phone?' She demanded, attempting to hide her uneasiness.
'You fainted last night.' He replied. She had to admit the man not only had a face worth looking at but a voice that made her weak in the knees as well. It was smooth, deep and sensual.
'My phone?' Instead of replying, her gestured towards the nightstand table with his head. She followed his gaze and found her iphone laying on it, off. She cursed under her breath and rushed over, nearly tripping over her own feet. As it turned on, she saw 10 missed calls. All from Zoya. She was going to be killed. Nervously, she turned to face the mystery man once more.
'I, um, thank you? I guess? I'll have to leave now. My roommate is probably very worried for me.' She said, keeping her finger on Zoya's contact in case he tried to stop her from leaving and she had to call her. He, unfortunately noticed and smirked. To her dismay, he slowly advanced towards her. He stopped an inch away from her, her face almost touching his shoulder. She tilted her face up to look at his.
'I'm not going to kidnap you. You can leave, I don't care.' He muttered quietly staring at her. 'The names Angad Khanna'. He stepped back and she began to breathe again. He offered her his hand and she took it. Tingly feelings overwhelmed her and she pulled her hand out of his as if she was burned. His expression told her he felt the same.
'Kripa Sharma.' She said meekly. He smiled slightly and she felt her heart skip a beat. He didn't smile enough. His smile was too beautiful to be neglected so much by him. He reached for her phone and she let him, too awed. Moments later, he returned it to her and stepped out of the way. Smiling in return, she ducked her head and headed out. As she neared the door, she momentarily paused to stare a green eyed man standing in the living room with an amused expression on his face.
When she finally stepped outside, her beating heart began to calm. She wasn't sure if it was because of fear or the feelings she felt for the mystery man. She liked to believe it was the fear. She glanced down at her phone and found 'Angad Khanna' added as a contact. Without wanting to, she was smiling like an idiot. He had given her his number? She jumped when her phone vibrated and a text popped up. She clicked IMessages and found a text message from Angad himself.
'And I have your number'.
Out of instinct, she glanced at the house and found him standing at the window, grinning. She felt her breathe catch in her throat. He truly was a beautiful sight to behold. Blushing, she turned away and walked to the bus stop, deciding to call Zoya from there.
'KRIPA? Ohmygod! Where the hell are you? I was just about to go to the police station to report you as a goddamn missing person. God Kripa. I take you out to ONE party. ONE DAMN PARTY. And you go MIA on me!' Zoya screeched through the phone. Kripa held the phone away from her ear wincing.
'Can you somehow pick me up first? I'm in front of a bus stop nearest to that house you brought me to last night. I'll tell you everything later.'
'Fine. I'm coming.' Zoya snapped and hung up. Kripa sighed and sat down on the bench running her hands through her hair. She definitely had feelings for Angad Khanna but she was wondering if it was all going too fast.
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Next Chapters: They meet again. 😃
Drop your comments, likes, whatever.
-Jot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
great start
lvd it.
their first encounter was interesting...looking forward to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Reminds me of the night in the outhouse!
Awesome work Jot! Can't wait for they meet again:):)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is why I love you 😎
Wait, you changed concept?? Lemme go read Pg 1 again then. Be warned, you better not have changed the over theme of 'dark' 😛 😳 *back* Okay, at least you've kept Angad to be dark and Kripa's character to an extent. I can work with this 😃 No gaalis for you this time.


I shall the chapters.. say Sunday? *if no other test comes up out of the blue* -.- You update quick now.. I'd love to have a bank of chapters to read. XP

-A.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start! I'm aldy loving it!!!! =D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
an amazing start jot <3
seriously...
though u changed the plot, its even a better concept now...
love the character sketch of kripa specially...and angads mysterious character is thrilling :D
looking forward to more of the chapters of this ff

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