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Heya plz do update the index !!
It becomes difficult to find pervious chapters :)

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WHAT IN THE LORD NAME'S WAS THIS UPDATE..!!!!
DUDE you rocked in this chapter like never before.. I'm in love with Swayam even more than before now.. His incensed POV made me want more and more..❤️. His mind a ruddy mess, dealing with shit 24*7 and quite the angry young man ready to get in a row with the person who crosses his path I like this guy quite too much..👍🏼.
His possessiveness for Sharon wohooo blew my mind to a completely different level he wanted to be the sole one of her life.. If she is angry or if she cries he has to be the reason for every freakin inconsequent thing of her life.. Aaannnd not to forget the flashback from Swayam's POV my my such desires and to this extent whoaa never knew such intensity could exist or could be felt..😃.
I loved loved loved the conversation between Tate and Swayam it was so so so pleasing to read and I feel their bond will only strengthen with time and she might play a part in bringing Sharon and Swayam close..😊.
Sharon's POV was heartbreaking to read.. Swayam has ways to vent out his frustrations but this girl here has it all pent up in her no release for her my heart goes out to her..😔. You stopped at a bloody crucial point so you better update soon Arshak or I'm gonna murder you dude quite literally..😆.
This update was worth the wait for every word you wrote just mind blowing dude.. Take a bow for it..😃.
P.S- I quite don't understand Jared and Swayam's connection and what is blood?? Try clearing that out if you could buddy..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.

Woho Man..Arshak Man..!!
Finally we got update dude..
I have to reserved now as ur update is really OOsum and i was just waitng to read swayam plot here..Thanx dude for PM
I will edit tomorrow

edited my comment on page 98 😛

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

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wat an update arshak

it was thrilling, exciting, captiviting and extremely unpredictable;

the way you described swayam's character

as mysterious and charming

struck straight to my heart he gives a f**k

about nything except sharon

his pov was Detailed, Wordy ,deep n flawless

you are a magician of language,

using quick and delicate wit, and a lyrical elegance

bringing freshness and power to the story

making it funny, moving, tender, brave and dangerous.

a pleasant writer, with a pleasant style,

a connoisseur of strong ideas .👏

i just loved the way you gave small flashback in b/w

of thr childhood days wat a description man

giving an introto tis beautiful yet painful love story

n the way swayam handled tate was beautifully penned 😃

i was so happy when i saw sharon's pov

it was like the perfect icing on the cake

i never realised when the update was over 😲

creating an urge to read sum more

the first book with hands -

strong ones that reached out of the pages

and seized me by the throat.

do update soon 🤗

regard- rosy

Thanku So-So-So much Rosy! Did u know Writing swayam's part was Easier than Sharon's.. God! writing a girl... is harder than i thought.
Thanku so much for those Amazing words. I thought ya'll wouldnt read it.. and i also thought Ya'll would hate this swayam.. :P But turns out... He might be acceptable. :P
Hahahaha.. i had to stop somewhere there.. But swayam's scenes and this type of updates wont be coming again... only rare... :)
again thanku so much for those amazing words and its really encouraging me to write more on this story. :D
Arshak :) !

Awesome update!!!

Originally posted by: Swayamd3

Thanku So-So-So much Rosy! Did u know Writing swayam's part was Easier than Sharon's.. God! writing a girl... is harder than i thought.
Thanku so much for those Amazing words. I thought ya'll wouldnt read it.. and i also thought Ya'll would hate this swayam.. :P But turns out... He might be acceptable. :P
Hahahaha.. i had to stop somewhere there.. But swayam's scenes and this type of updates wont be coming again... only rare... :)
again thanku so much for those amazing words and its really encouraging me to write more on this story. :D
Arshak :) !