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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

This was very cute!

Loved it !

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

superb os

DAMN HILARIOUS..🤣

Every wife is possessive like khushi..

but agar husband arnav ho toh baat alag hy..lol 😆😆

but LOVED it the way khudshi ne un sadak chap lailas ko Bhai Baap yaad dilaya..

totally funny and entertaining...

Lovely..

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Rofl
i love it when some1 writes on jealousy:p
pehle toh laila-giri?? Really? Lol
then bhai bapp hahhhaaa
it was awesomeee

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

🤣 That was funny. Laila Giri, Surpanakha, Bhai Baap an then Jijaji/Brother 😆 Those two women will never ever look at another man in their lifetime. Well done Khushi, you have saved your Arnavji. The funniest part was her inviting them to their house for Raksha Bandhan. Loved it :)

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@whiterose29

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

This was amazing! 😛 A bold and feisty Khushi is a treat to read about! 😆

Lovely. <3

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This is brilliant...!!!!👏

You are a wonderful writer. Your works have substance, story, essence with a great blend of humour.

Khushi's monologue was hilarious. And I loved that bhai-baap thing.😆

Do write more such OS's. And another FF if you can. I simply love your writing.😊

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Tiramisu_coffee

@Tiramisu_coffee

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Chibi!! Yippie, exams are done !! I bet Pashmin can sympathize with Khushi 110%.. Lol!! Checking out some hot man's asset at MCD ... Tsk tsk so shameless... They ruined MCD's jingle 'I m lovin it' for so many innocent peeps came there to enjoy their Mc Aloo !! Bloody Pervs!
Anyhoo, can't wait to read more of ur OS's !! Keep em comin!! I m lovin it, damn it!!

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To know this,buddy me;)

@...OceanEyes...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

helee diii..o m g..m very very very glad to see u...m resing 4 nw..will unres soon!

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Anne

@Anne_ArHi

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Haww...

That was one cute, funny and interesting OS from you Helee,,,,

I wonder from where you got this idea gal...

Let me tell you that I enjoyed reading this story and wat really attracted me was the title...Nice one ya! A feisty, jealous and possessive Khushi is always exciting to read. And Arnav...Had I been in those 2 gals places, I wonder if I would have controlled myself from ogling at him. What about you, Helee?

Write more of these...

Moreover I would love it if you start a new short story, I would love to read it or may be I'll someday offer you to write one with me someday if I've an idea...You are an awesome writer, never forget that.

Anyways, thanks for d PM gal!

Bye.