This is my 1000th post and just wanted to make it special...
Looking back I'm amazed that IF has become such an addiction...
I just joined IF after GHSP ended and I went mad without it...
Here my 1st post link...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2725422/kahani-gurti-ki
I desperately needed Maneet daily dose and came here to do my bit in bringing them back...
I began to live in my own Maneet world...any of you familiar with wagle's world? Just like that...
I started posting them everynight just like a diary entry summing up my Maneet dreams of that day...
That was the continuation of GHSP as I wanted it to be...
Maan Ki Geet...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2896845/maneet-ff-maan-ki-geet-ghsp-continued
I remember kabslock liking my posts in the beginning...
Dona has been my constant support...but for her lovelys and awesomes I would have left IF long back...thanks dear...thanks indu for your emoticons...
there was a time when I was thrilled to see my views increasing in tens!!...
I was a total stranger to the FF fraternity then and even didn't know about Geet forum ...just posted in FF forum...Dona asked me to post in Geet forum...
Reachsky introduced me to Deepa's FF updates thread and then on Deepa became my IF mentor...
She asked me to update my title...till then I kept posting just like that...
And it's now Deepa and Dona who comment for every single post...thank U very much...love you guys...you are the very few friends I have made in two years...
Even now I don't send pms for lack of time...sorry guys...
Thanks to Deepa's thread I got a few more readers...
I just wanted to keep posting till I got to see Maneet back...hope they come back soon to entertain us and save you all from my daily tortures in the name of FFs...
This is a Maneet treat for all who keep supporting me and have the patience to read my scriblbes ,like them and take the time to comment too...thanks guys...thanks a lot Maneet...this is for you...
I'm not mentioning all the names for the risk of a few names being left unmentioned...
This is my take on GHSP had it continued to be aired just like some other soaps...
Though we are not lucky enough to see our favourite couple daily no one can take away our lovely memories of Maneet ever...thanks a lot to the real FF writers who keep our Maneet memeories afresh tiil date...
It's almost four years since Maneet got married ...
The third b'day of junior is round the corner...
And the fourth anniversary of Maneet wedding is also nearing...
So if at all GHSP continued...then...
Geet Hui Sabse Parayi - mere papa...
Maan is busy in his work as always and Geet is busy with junior Khurana, let his name be Shaan rhyming with Maan...
So Geet wants to go shopping with Maan for the functions...
But Maan is too busy...
Geet goes to KC with Shaan...
She waits for Maan but he is with some client...
Geet tells Adi to go and inform Maan that a VIP client is here waiting for him for ages...
If Maan doesn't meet the client within 2 minutes then he will loose them for ever...
Adi: Geet, ye kya hai? Mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, Maan sir andar koi naya project ke barein mein baat kar arhe hai
Geet: unse kahiye ki pehle apne purani projects pe dhyaan de phir naye projects ke barein mein soche, haina Shaan?
Shaan: haan
Adi is so scared...
Adi looks at Geet desperately...but Geet is stubborn...
Geet: jao Adi sir
Adi: par Geet, mein iss waqt Maan sir ko kaise disturb kar saktha?
Geet: aap jaa rahe ho ya hum andar chalein?
Geet andar gayi toh Maan bahut gussa karega, Maan is always concerned that the clients are given utmost priority...jab koi client Maan ke saath ho toh unkke jaane ke badh hi Maan kissi aur ko milega, chahe woh koi aur important client bhi ho...
Adi andar jaatha...
Adi goes speechless...
Presentation ki CD toh Geet ke paas hai...
Geet refused to give it till Maan comes to meet her...
Adi: he he he he he...
Adi blinks...
Maan gets angry...
Maan: Adiii, presentation shuru karo
Adi: presentation?
Maan: haan, hammare Noidawale project ki presentation
Adi: shuru karthe haina
Maan: jaldhi karo Adi, hum tummare liye pure zindagi wait nahi kar sakthe
Adi: sir, koi paurane client bahar aapka intrezaar kar rahe hai
Maan gets angry again...aaise kaise sabke samne kissi aur se milne jaa saktha, aur iss Adi ki dimag toh kabhi kaam hi nahi kartha...
Maan: pehle inkka kaam katam hone do, phir dekhthe hai
Adi: par ye bahut khaas client hai
Maan: ye bhi toh khaas hi hai, hummare liye har client khaas hi hothe hai, samjhe tum ?
Adi ke paas toh Geet ke diye hue CD hi hai...
Maan snatches it from him and runs it...
Geet comes on the screen...
Maan is shocked...
Maan turns back to Adi and stares...
The video is playing...
Geet: Maan sir wahan kya dekhthe ho? yahan dekho, picture shuru honewali hai
The clients are also excited ...seems to be interesting...
Geet: sorry gentlemen, I had no other choice but to steal a few minutes of our Maan sir's precious time like this...
Everyone looks at Maan...Maan is embarrassed...
So Mrs.Khurana wants to convey a message ...
Maan tries to stop the video...
Geet: hare Maan sir, band kyun karthe ho? picture abhi bakhi hai
Adi: ha ha ha ha ha ha
Maan pauses it...turns to his clients...
Maan: sorry for the trouble, lets continue tomorrow
Clients: no problem Mr.Khurana, hum bhi family men hi hai
They leave...Maan stares the screen...
Adi: sir
Maan: what?
Adi: picture abhi bakhi hai
Maan: what?
Adi: woh...Geeet
Maan: Adi, jao apna kaam karo
Adi escapes...
Maan plays the video...he doesn't know that Geet is here...
Dekhthe hai ki Geet kya kehna chahathi...
Geet: toh Maan sir shayad aap apne ek purane client ko bhool gaye
A flashback of Maneet runs on the screen with some old photographs...
Then there is Shaan's photo on the screen...
Geet: issko yaad hai? Aapke basha mein kahe toh ye hummari donno companies ki joint project hai jo ab hummare company akhele handle kar rahi hai, aap toh isske zamedari utane ke liye tayaar nahi ho, toh humne faisla kiya hai ki aaj se isske zamedari aapki aur hummare company isse aapke hawale karkke kuch aur zaroori kaam pe dhyaan dene ki faisla kiya hai, toh ab se aap apne naye projects ke saath issko bhi sambalo, good bye Maan sir
Maan: Geeet
Adi: sir, apne bhulaya?
Adi enters Maan's cabin with Shaan...
Shaan heads to Maan's chair and the little prince takes over the crown...
Yahi toh KC ka agla crowning prince haina?
Maan: Adi, ye sab kya hai?
Adi: sir Shaan
Shaan grabs the paper weight from the table and starts playing with it...
Maan tries to get it back from him...
Maan: Shaan yahan aao, papa ke paas
He climbs the table and crawls towards Maan...
Shaan goes and hugs Maan...: papa...
Maan lifts him and kisses him...Shaan kisses back...
Maan: mama kahan hai?
Shann: papa papa, aaj mein aapke saath kheloonga
Maan: Adi, Geet kahan hai?
Adi: Geet Pinky ke saath bahar gayi hai sir
Maan: what? Shaan ko yahan chodkke?
Adi: sir Geet ne kaha ki Shaan aaj yahi rahega
Maan: what?
Shaan: haan papa, mama ne kaha ki aaj mein aapke saath kheloonga, aao papa
Maan: par Shaan, papa ko bahut kaam hai, aap ghar kyun nahi jaathe, apne mama ke paas
Shaan: nahi mujhe yahi rehna hai
Maan: teek hai, aap yaha beitiye, aur ye lo sketches, aap kuch draw karo
Shaan: par mujhe drawing nahi aatha
Maan: try karo, aajayega
Shaan: papa aap sikao
Maan tries to draw a skyscraper...
Shaan: ye kya hai?
Shaan makes a face...
Maan: kyun? Ye achcha nahi hai?
Shaan: nahi, mujhe pasand nahi hai
Maan: teek hai, aapko kya pasand hai?
Shaan: lion, deer, elephant, peacock
Maan: what? Mama tumme jungle book ki mogli banana chchathi hai? MSK ke beta jungli tarzan banega?
Shann: papa, mujhe yahi pasand hai, aap sikhao
Maan: haan haan
Maan tries to draw an elephant, but it turns out to be a disaster...he is used to lines aud cuts and arches and not animal figures...
Shaan: papa, ye koi naye animal hai kya?
Maan: ye elephant hai
Shann laughs...
Shann: papa elephant aaise nahi dikhtha
Maan: mujhe patha hai, elephant aaise hi hotha
Shaan: nahi, ye elephant nahi hai
Maan: Shaaan, I'm telling you this is an elephant
Shann: nahi, papa ko elephant banana nahi aatha, papa ko elephant banana nahi aatha
Maan: ssshhh chup, bilkul chup
Shaan starts crying...
Adi comes running...
Adi: kya hua sir? Apne Shaan ko kya kiya?
Maan: what? Adi, meinne kuch nahi kiya
Adi: Shaan kyun ro raha hai?
Maan: usse hi pooch
Adi: junior, aap kyun rothe ho?
Maan: bilkul apne mama ki tarah har waqt rothe rehtha hai, aane do Geet ko, MSK ke bte ko kaise crying baby banake rakha hai usne
Shaan: mujhe elephant chahiye
Adi: hathi? Sir, mein jaake hathi lekhe aaoon?
Maan: Adi, pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Adi: ha ha ha ha ha, mera matlab toy elephant
Maan: kuch bhi karo, jaldhi isska muh band karo
Adi: yes sir
Adi gets a toy elephant...
He gives it to Shaan...
Shaan throws it away...
Maan gets angry...
Maan: ye kya hai? Tumne elephant manga aura b kya hua?
Shaan: ye nahi woh
He shows the paper...
Maan: Adi, tum ek chote bache ko sambal nahi sakthe
Maan is frustrated,,,,how many times has he got angry with Geet that she couldn't handle a little boy whenever she complained...
"Geet stop whinning , mujhe chain se apna kaam karne do, issilye mein ghar aane se dartha"
Now he knows that it's not child's play to take care of a kid...
He is angry with himself for treating Geet like that...
She should have felt bad...mein kya se kya ban gaya hoon?
Aajkal mujhe apne Mishti ki fikar hi nahi...
Meinne kabhi nahi socha ki Geet kaise issko dinbar sambalkke tak jaathi hogi?
Mujhe sirf apna kaam ki padhi hai, jaise mein koi pahaad apne shir pe uttakke aaaya hoon...
Har raat Geet jab thode dher Shaan ko apne paas chodkke jaathi toh Maan kitna gussa kartha ki Geet ghar pe pura din aaram karthi hai aur phir bhi mujhe hi disturb kyun karthi?
Ab Maan ko apni galthi ka ehsaas hua...
Adi tries all the tricks to stop Shaan crying...
But he insists that Adi made an elephant on the paper...
Poor Adi, however hard he tried he ended up with something else...
Shaan: ye chua hai hathi nahi, ye bimar elephant hai, dekho kitna pathla hai
Maan: Adi, iss office mein kissi ko bhi achche pictures banana nahi aatha?
Adi: haina sir, Mr.Kumar bahut acheche plans banathe haina
Maan: Adi, humme hathi ki picture banana hai
Adi: par mujhe kaise patha hoga sir?
Maan: itne saal yahan kaam karkke ye bhi nahi jaanthe?
Adi: apne pehle bar aaise kaam diya haina sir? Humne pehle kabhi kissi zoo ki construction nahi kiya hai sir
Maan: Adi, kuch toh karo
Adi: sir hum net se download karthe hai
Maan: teek hai
Maan downloads a beautiful elephant picture...from the National Geographic site...
Shaan: ye photo hai, isse dekhkke mein kaise draw kar saktha hoon?
Maan: kyun? Ye toh asli hai, isse dekhkke tum teek se seekh sakthe
Shaan: par mein kaise draw kar saktha?
Maan: ye tummari problem hai
Shaan: aaise nahi, pehle aap isse dekhkke ek elephant banao
Maan tries to recreate it...
Btu it was too real and he couldn't convert it into a picture...
Maan koi artist nahi haina?
Shaan is disappointed...he starts crying...
Maan: Adi, tum isske copies banakke sabko distribute kaor, ada gante mein mujhe isski drawing chahiye, jaldhi
Adi takes copies and gives it to the staff...
It's already noon and Geet returns to take Shaan for lunch...
Geet is surprised to see that KC is so silent inspite of Shaan's presence...
Ye kaise ho saktha? Kahin Maan Shaan ko bahar thodi nahi le jaye?
Achcha hai, ab mein aur shopping kar sakthi...
Geet finds everyone busy with some serious work...
What's this? Koi naye project ke plan bana rahe hai kya?
Geet:Adi sir, yahan kya ho raha hai?
Adi: Geet, humme disturb mat karo, hum bahut important kaam mein lage hue hai
Geet looks at Adi's desk...
Adi is drawing an elephant...
She looks at the others, they are also doing the same...
Geet: what? KC kab se art school bana?
Adi: Geet, ye Maan sir ke orders hai'
Geet goes to find what Maan is upto?
She finds Maan sleeping in his chair after struggling all day with his son...
Bechare Maan sir, office mein sorahe hai?
Geet finds Shaan watching cartoon on Maan's lappy sipping his drink...
She finds a big ice cream tub and chocolate wrapers scattered around...
Geet: Shaan, ye sab apne khaya?
Geet is worried that he will get throat infection eating all this at a time...
She snatches the cold drink from his hands and he starts crying...
Maan wakes up...
Maan: Adiii, kya hua?
Geet: Maan, ye sab kya hai?
Maan: Geet, woh mein so nahi raha tha, bas soch raha tha
Geet: achcha?
Maan: haan
Geet: kya soch rahe the aap? Agla issko pizza order karein ya burger...
Just then Adi enters with the Pizza...
Shaan: pizza
Geet stops him...he cries louder...
Geet: Maan, ye kya hai?
Maan: pizza Geet
Geet: meinne poocha ki aapne itne sare cheez order kyun kiya?
Maan: mujhe kyun poochthe ho? Tum roz issko aaise khilathe rehthi toh aaisa hi hoga
Geet: aapko kissne kaha hum roz pizza order karthe hai?
Maan: phir ye pizza ke liye itna zidd kyun kar raha tha?
Geet: issiliye kyunki mein issko kabhi pizza khareedhke nahi dethi
Maan: kya?
Geet: aapko patha hai ki ye aaise hi kathe rehtha toh bimar hojayega
Maan: par Geet
Geet: Maan, aapko ek chote bachche ko sambalna nahi aatha?
Maan: what?
Geet: abhi dekho
Geet takes away all the goodies from him...
" Shaan good boy haina? Ye sab bad boys hi kathe hai, haina?"
He keeps silent...he doesn't cry...
Maan' s surprised...
Ye kaise jadu hai?
Geet just lifts him and pats him on the back...
He falls asleep on her shoulder...
So he needed to sleep?
She puts him on the couch...
Maan is relieved...
Geet feels pity on him...
Poor Maan, itne bade KC ko apne ungliyon pe nachatha aur apne hi bte ko sambal nahi patha...
Maan: Geet, tumne lunch khaya?
Geet: nahi, mein Shaan ko ghar lekhe jaathi hoon
Maan stops her...
Maan: tum abhi bhi mujhse naraaz ho?
Maan gets closer...
Geet : nahi
Maan: toh chalo hum saath mein lunch karthe hai
Geet: par Shaan
Maan calls Adi...
Adi comes in...
Maan: Adi, hum bahar jaa rahe hai, you take care of Shaan
Adi is scared...
Adi: lekhin sir?
Maan: Adi, aaj yahi tummara boss hai, so don't mess with him
Adi: ha ha ha ha ha ...babaji mujhe bachao
Maan: chalo Geet
Geet is confused...
Geet: kahan?
Geet is happy to go out with Maan after a long time...
She is excited and she keeps chatting with him about Shaan's b'day and what all they have to do this time to make it special...
Maan just enjoys this ride with his Mishti and keeps driving without knowind where they are heading...
It's almost 3' pm and they have come a lond distance away from the city...
Geet batein karthe karthe tak jaathi...she is hungry...
Geet looks out and they are in the middle of nowhere...
Geet: Maan, hum kahan aagaye hai?
Maan looks out...
He has no clue where they are now...
Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut bhook lagthi hi
Maan: haan Geet, hum lunch karthe haina? Yahan ek bahut achcha restaurant hai
Geet: yahan?
Maan: haan, tum dekhthe hi raho, yahi hai, paas
Luckily they find some place to eat...
Maan manages to take her to her favourite eatout...koi punjabhi daba...iss waqt toh yahi khana milega...lunch time has passed long back...
After lunch he takes her to their farm house...
They have come so close to their farmhouse na...
Geet: Maan, hum yahan kyun aaye hai?
Maan: Geet, tum Shaan ki b'day ko yahi celebrate karna chahthi haina?
Geet: aapko kaise patha?
Geet forgot that she had told him just now...
She thinks that Maan is still not aware of Shaan's b'day plans...
She had been planning on her own...waise Maan ke paas time kahan tha Geet se aaise beitkke baat karne ki...ya phir Maan ab Geet se baat karna bhi nahi chahatha...
Geet looks at him and Maan knows that he had disappointed her all these days...
He can see the longing in her eyes...she wished this evening never ended...
She just wanted to be with her Maan just like this...
Maan: tumme kya lagtha mein apne biwi ki itna bhi parwa nahi kartha?
Geet: aaise nahi
Maan looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...
Geet swimmimg pool ki tarafh jaathi...
She is thinking of setting the dinner tables around the pool, moonlight dinner...
Maan apne mishit ko hi dekhthe rehtha...
Aaj bhi ktini khoobsurat hai...
Geet keeps telling her plan...
Maan ko kuch sunayi nahi detha...
He just keeps staring her...
Geet then enters the hall...
She looks at the walls...and the curtains...
Everything looks dull...Maan ke pasand ke soft colors lage hai...white and grey...
This is no fun and the kids would feel like they are is some boring class room...
She wants it to be repainted...with some exciting cartoon pictures...
She keeps chatting...
Geet: Maan, hum yahan ek chote se dance floor banayenge, aur yahan sare toys honge, aur ek magic show bhi hona chahiye, Shaan ko magic shows bahut pasand hai
Maan is in no mood to listen...he is admiring his pyaari Mishti...
Geet looks at him and has this starnge feeling that Maan has got other plans for her now...
Geet: Maaan?
He closes her mouth with his hands...
Maan: chup...bilkul chup...
Geet pushes him and steps back...
Maan gets closer...Geet steps back till she is cornered...
Maan locks her in his arms...
Geet: Maaan? Ye kaise mazak hai, aap bahut bhure ho
Maan: toh Geet, mein bahut bhura hoon, haina?
Geet: mujhe bas yahi shikayaat thi ki aap apne bachche ko hi bhool gaye
Maan: bache ko bhool gaya ya apni pyaari Mishti ko?
Geet : Maan, chodo mujhe
Geet bends down and escapes...
She goes near the window and looks at the pool...
She could see the moon's reflection on the water...
Geet: Maan, ye chandh kitna sundar hai dekho
Maan: tumse sundar nahi Geet
Geet: Maan, hum party yahi karenge, pool side, teek hai, aur pool ke centre ek shaandar stage banayenge, with all the kids around, Shaan will be in the centre with a huge cake...
Maan: nahi hum party yahi karenge, andar, pool mein abhi nahi, kissi aur din,raat ko, jab koi nahi hoga, sirf tum mein aur
Geet: aur chand
Maan: nahi, Geet, chand nahi
Geet: Maan, chandini raat hai toh kaise hoga?
Maan: nahi nahi, amavaas ka din teek hoga, mein tum aur hummare beech koi nahi, chand ki roshni bhi nahi, jo humme disturb kare
Geet: mujhe andere se dar lagtha
Maan: mein bhi wahi chahatha
Geet: kya? Aap mujhe darana chahathe ho?
Maan: tabhi toh tum mere paas hogi, warna aaise hi dhoor bhaagthe rahogi, haina?
Geet: Maaan?
Maan: aur abhi party shuru karein?
Maan winks...
Geet: ye aapko kya ho gaya?
Maan gets near and hugs her from behind...
Geet: Maaan?
Maan pushes her choti aside and makes room for a hot kiss...
He places a warm kiss on her back...
Geet swoons...the warmth of his lips sets the fire inside her...
She is engulfed by his fiery passion...she is ready to melt in his arms...
Maan lifts her and takes her in...
Geet: Maaan?
Maan: ssshhh aaj mujhe rokho mat Geet
Geet bhi rokhna kahan chahathi? Mahiii...
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