Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

This will be a fun read. Can't wait to see Khushi in Mrs Raizada mould. Poor Dia. Uski to band bajne waali hai.

Love your writing. Such good fun reads.

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ashask07

@ashask07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

dia s sooo gonna get a shock...

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Very promising ...a jealous Khushi might fall prey to her insecurities . Hopefully she will handle herself with maturity and without resorting to any madcap schemes 😆 Looking forward to Arnav's take on this ...

Thnx for the pm.

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

EEEHHH!!!!! ==DD I am sooo excited for this oneee!!!! Gonna be an SS right??? Hayye! A jealous Khushi... I love it already!!!! ❤️

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crystal17

@crystal17

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

a smitten new comer and a possessive Mrs. Khushu Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada. Poor Arnav, stuck in between. Can't wait to read the next part.

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

loved the update

brilliantly written

eagerly waiting for the nxt part

thanks for the PM

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shr1234

@shr1234

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Arre, I was waiting for Anjali's story to unfold... This is a great surprise! I'm loving it :)

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Nice reading.
You got me interested in knowing what happens next 😛

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adithyan

@adithyan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

lovely start...

poor Dia😆 is yet to meet ASR's vishvaroop and the Mrs.ASR the great😆

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Arooma

@Bubbles76

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

hey dear ...

its good to see you back ...

when u havent update in months ... i thought you have left the writing and IF like other writers who are doing this from past months ... sadly they are also removing their stories 😕 ... so it had made me very sad ...

i use to check now then if u have posted anything new or not ... and lunckily today was that day ... when just before loging out i check ur index and saw the u have posted few OSs ... and i cant tell you how happy i was to see that U R BACK ..!!!

well i have read all the new OSs u have written till now and each one was awsom ... they way you write and cover all characters is lovly ...

letme tell ur on going SS "Sirf Khushi ki" ... is something i was looking forward to see ... that someone falling for Arnav and Khushi being confident that Arnav was only her and the girl finding out that Arnav has married to Khushi and jealousy follows or other things ... 😆

well i trust ur judgment more about what will you show next ... so looking forward to it 😊

P.S: i have also started an Arshi FF 5 months back ... if u get time then do read and letme know what you think ...

here is the link ...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84695347