Oh girl, I was double sure that Khushi is gonna make an appearence, and Arnav is gonna behave like that love stuck loverboy around her, oblivious to whoever plays witness to it.
I was all worried about Dia, and now I want to give her a hug and say oh you poor girl... Seriously, the best thing about this story is the characterization of that girl Dia, she is a common girl, with a thinking of a girl next door, just out of her college.. What would happen when she meets a very handsome charming personlity? When she finds him giving her a little attention, even unconsiously, unintendingly?
Very beautifully handled, and what surprised me was, the way you had taken the story didnt make me feel as if the girl was a intruder, a vamp. Rather, I did feel bad for the young dream which started spread vibrant wings every time the man smiled at her or smirked at her.
But then who else wouldnt, ASR is a charming personality until he opens the door to his gussa and not surprisingly, the magic to shut that door with a Alomohara is known only to a very few, one of them is his wife, who also happens to use it very frequently!
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