Vignette 24. Sirf Khushi ki - SS Pt 5/ Pg41

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daisydee425

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

awesome update
loved it
dia should know asr sirf khushi ka hai

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sasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Pls pls pls pm me the further updates..I am n love with your stories..they r fantastic ..

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ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

OMGEEEZ!!!! I totally lovved it!!! <3 Waiting for the next...

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Aruni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: psarada
Hmm so Dia knows the half-truth and everyone knows that half-truths are dangerous. Madam doesn't know what Khushi means to ASR and she is busy planning a rosy life with the ASR. Just hope her dreams wouldn't be dashed to ground by ASR. I would love to see Dia being a spectator to Arnav-Khushi's love and romance and thereby slowly understanding that ASR is Arnav only for Khushi and the reason is because Khushi is the one for whom his heart beats. That would be great 'growing up in love' for Dia and she would know that she would find her own Arnav in the big world. Can't wait to see how you intend to take this SS forward. Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the pm.

Sarada ji look like i missed you turning maroon. Congo!

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Just loved it! Dhruv's comment at the end was hilarious!

I love the way Arnav constantly tells her how amazing he thinks his wife is in his own style.

I can't believe Dia knows he's married yet still thinks she has a chance!! 😆

Right now Khushi is feeling bad for poor Dia, I can't wait until she finds out that Dia likes Arnav!!

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vks11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

I say it once again - no one but no one potray's Raizada Family better than you.

I loved Dhruv's laughter and comment.

I so love this story.

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

This time without ur pm I read, n it's amazing!! Hope dia quickly understands Ki ASR per kiska haq hai!!

Ps: dhruv's love story kab aa rahi hai??

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Manasa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Amazing os!!!!!!!.. am in love with ur stories.,, it feels as though the story is playing right in front of my eyes...cant wait for the next update!!!

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msmarple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Wonderful!

Dhruv's comment was so on the mark :)

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Cute6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

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aparna dii your updates always make my day and this tym its night *sigh* neend kaise ayega m wondering..this is turning out to be so so good..the way you show the intimate moments why are only limited to mornings after or nights before?? i guess you are bit aprehensive about writing more..koi nahi if mentioning only those things make me go all mushy then going into detailed description will turn me into a cherry and i dont want to turn one keeping in my that m always surrounded by my roommates😆

but dii they are written beautifully and i love reading them( those parts are read like uncountable tymes by me..your dhruv story had so many of them and it still is my favorite one among all your works...i love dia for the only reason that she is responsible for all those army commander ordering troops vala romantic dialoges..asr and his hatke romance...

poor dia i hope she goes and finds full information on asr..i want to see it alike s=dhruvs story witneesing the love between this couple thru dia's pov instead of all those heart breaks..and m vaiting for dia-khushi encounter...😊

already yearning for next

Edited by Cute6 - 12 years ago