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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Sabse pehle to I need to Dance...!

My guess was right..!

Even though It was quite out of my league to guess the actual reason behind Rohan's betrayel but at least I knew the man wasn't a saint.

Yipeee..! Dance continues.

Because IF doesn't has a variety of Dance emoticons, lemme make it clear I doing Kathak...! (Lucknowi touch you see)

Now when my legs are exhausted with the dancing, I would go forward with my comment for the chapter.

That was all about the truuuth.

Finally Khushi knows what a ba****d that Rohan was and I am extremely elated over the fact that she didn't paid any heed to his any kind of bullshit. 😡

Good she kicked him out of his life, for heart it would take some time.

Mera Arnie..!!! Haaye

The man is concerned for his Miss Sexy Legs. 😆

Tere ko pyaar hone waala hai. 😆

The hot and dashing and all time cool ASR is soon going to fall for the tigress Khushi.

I am hell excited for that. ⭐️

Ab tu bhi jaldi jaldi updates likhna and keep them posting.

Kiran is all set to enjoy the upcoming romance ride.

NOOO!!!!! 😲

Just realised that now Khushi has no reason left to stay in India.

So is she going back??

Hey bhagwan..! That is another problem now. Arnie has to be quick warna ladki haath se nikal jaayegi.

Make Khushi stay in India for a few more days, or years if possible. Hamara ASR is a sluggish person in love related matters.

Whatever..!

Wo mera headache nahi hai.

I leave the problem for Komaliya.

Tu problem solve kar jaldi se aur ASR and Khushi ke beech me thode Rabba Ve moments set kar.

And no no, I never mind reading Ahem moments too. I am 18 years old you see. 😉

So write anything you want, I am ready to read all of it.

Bus!!!!

Enough of commenting.

Ab tu jaldi se update kar.

Me waiting.

Waiting impatiently

Waiting already

Waiting like crazy

Waiting like err.. have run out of more terms..

Abhi ke liye itna hi..

UPDATE REAL SOON!!! Warna meko phir se wahi dream aayega.. 10 back to back update waala. 🤣

*Stalking alert*

Update chahiye!!!!!!!!

P.S. For the late comment on the chapter I am really very very so not sorry..! 🤣

Tere ko kya laga? Mai tujhe sorry bolungi?

Huh..! Like her ASR, Kiraniya sorry nahi bolti..! 😆

But chal, it's you so wait, lemme try..!

Komal I...I..I...I..I

Hell!

Ma'am I am really very so$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

Arey mujhse nahi hoga, next time try karungi :p

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You and your crazy comment which I love reading😆
@Red: LOL tu astrologer ho gayi hai kya😆
Good that you didn't say sorry even after trying so hard😳
Love you<3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: surlin_chhabra

Nice update...
Feeling bad for khushi...


Thank you<3

Originally posted by: -BROKEN_ANGEL-

Oh god rohan is such a cheap guy.i never thought that.thanks to ASR khushi got to know his true face.poor khushi she came to india leaving her country to release him.but this guy is such a b******d.shashi is an awesome father.waiting for next one

Thank you<3
yes, rohan is cheap and a jerk!

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

Awesome update

I am happy at lease khushi knows truth.
Plz update soon waiting for next update.

Thank you:)

Originally posted by: Divyahet

KC,
awesome update..
Rohan was not at all Saint 😆 ek kissu ki kimmat tum ab jaano ge Rohan babu..😆
well Khushi did the right thing usko jail sadne ke liye chhod diya..👏 badaa angrez ban ne
chala thaa thug kahi kaa..pyar ki aad mai Visa ki life line badhaane ki koshish ki haaye ab bhoogto visa toh maraa hi ab khood bhi..😆

loved the conversation between Khushi and her Dad..

may be from next update we will read something something about their "pyar ke phool Khilne ko hai " between arshi.😆

thanks for the pm KC..
take care.😊


Thank you Di:)
Loved ur comment! :D

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Neetz11690

fab upd

i know that rohan is cheating on khushi
hope now soon love blooms b/w arshi
upd soon

Thank you<3

Originally posted by: AimmyLovesSobti

Dhanno here;)
Phle muj Ko ye bta bey
Mera res kaha hai???????
:(
Chal it's k;)
So so so jo Maine socha wohi hua!!!!
That bas***d was cheating on khushi!!!!!!
Awesomeee!!!!
Thanks basanti you know na why!
So my Asr is not at all fault here!
When I started reading this ss I was sure daal mein kuch kala hai but ye to puri dal kaali nikli bey :o
I knew that this rohan is not that innocent!
Innocent to khushi hai :'(
She trusted him and he!!!!
One complain basanti
Why khushi went out from there????
I mean aise hi? 2,3 punches...7,8 slaps...10,12 kicks to bante the na!!!!!
Bloody jerk!!!!!!
Awww ASR is feeling bad for her!!!
Hyyy
Waiting for more basanti!
So my...I mean yours...I mean khushi's ASR is not that bad!!!
If he framed rohan so uss ke sath aisa hi hona chaiye tha!!!
Love you!!!
Now plz!
Khushi in arnav ji ke strong arms
And yup yup. ...**Ahem Ahem**
;)


Love u dhanno<3
Missing u! :(
HID ki heroine Khushi hai tu nahi, isliye nahi pade punches😆
Our ASR is awesome just like us! :D
Wait kar thoda😳

Originally posted by: mubina_m19

Fantastic update
Finally truth is out
Feeling bad for khushi oh she is heart broken
How can some be so cheap I never thought rohan would be that cheap that he doesn't love khushi he was just marrying her for visa 😡
I only thought he was guilty in Aisha case
Why Arnav is sad
Kahe pyaar to nahi hogaya Arnav ko miss sexy legs se 😉

Thank you for the lovely comment Mubi:D
@red: You never know babes😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

I was so damn waiting 4 dis...


Finally, d truth is out n tht JERK accepted d TRUTH

I feel so bad 4 Khushi

Bt ASR's reaction after seeing her heartbroken made me feel better...

I'm so waiting 4 more...

Luvd it CC... Muahhh...

Love you Di<3
I am glad you liked it! :D

Thank you<3

Originally posted by: sruthick

So Rohan was cheating her..
Poor Khushi...Feeling bad 4 her...

Don't be sad ASR hai na!😳

Originally posted by: navjot7

awesome updt
so my doubt is right rohan is also involve

its good that khushi know all truth
rohan desrve punishment i am happy that he is in jail
arnav want to win over khushi thats why he tell whole truth
but its good for khushi
now i am waiting for arshi romance
thnx for pm
updt soon


Thank you<3
ArHi romance coming soon! :D

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29

I was kwenin dis bas***d rohab is a jerk frm phele se hii..itna innocent bann rha tha khushi ke saamne..
N mera ASR isko bolte hao hero..bhale khushi ne usse kitna kuch bola..den too usse realise karvaya hw jerk is rohan..
I love u ASR..ur d best ever!!
😛 😳


Thank you Sona!
LOL your ASR is Hero!😳

Originally posted by: avantika_2012

Chapter 5

Arnav is a jerk! But I guess that's the point of your story.

See them romancing? I don't know if I'm ready for that! You'll really have to convince me (as a reader) to be able to digest their romance 😆 Right now, ASR is downright obnoxious.


Chapter 6

I think I'd noticed this in one of the earlier chapters where you had hinted that Rohan wasn't completely innocent. Interesting turn of events. I was feeling bad for Khushi but then her Dad made her see some perspective...so that was good :)

Last line...ASR's scene was funny ;)

You're doing good. Keep it up :)



Thank you for reading the chapters and commenting separately:)
I am glad u liked the updates!

Thank you<3

Originally posted by: AnupamaJY

loved it

that was awesome

that rohan turned out to be a jerk. he was pretending to love khushi to get him visa. thatz disgusting. he was lying to her even when khushi came there.
if arnav didnt provoke him to confess he would be still lying. i just loved the way arnav provoke him. ya i know he did it to break khushi's determination. but it did a good to khushi. she came to know about rohan's true colours before it is too late
khushi is really hurt by rohan
i am nor surprised that she left rohan just like that

loved the conversation between khushi and shashi

though arnav should be happy at his victory he is not
now when will the next meeting be of arnav and khushi?

continue soon


Thank you for your lovely response.
They will meet very soon! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

What the?

I loved this..

RAstogi Fiasco over

Damn he was kissing really

Double Damn he wanted to marry Khushi for Visa

Triple Damn Arnav is affect..

Yahooo

Romance and fights on the way..

Its gonna be cool

So clear pond ko mix karne ki faida...

Ek nahi 2 machli...

Khushi aur Rastogi ki sachayi

Super!!!

Chakoriji Update soon


Thank you so much Meenu Begam! :D
Loved your comment!

Originally posted by: Nickysweet

I m so happy rohan truth came in front of her
I already knew it he is not a good boy..stupid fellow trapped her just for the visa
Arnav tricked hin very nicely and he openly blunt everything
Waiting for arshi love story start
Update soon

Thank you Di:)
I am glad u liked the update!

Thank you!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gayuraj

nice update
truth is finally our
awesome
waiting 4 d nxt update


Thank you<3

Originally posted by: mrin0709

Hey loved the update...

beautiful story.. Intelligent ASR... and poor Khushi... i feel bad for her.. she came all the way from US to rescue someone who was actually cheating on her and did not even love her... 😭


Thank you for reading the story and giving you lovely response! :D

Originally posted by: madhusquare

hello

found this ff on the forum


its interesting


loved this flirty asr very much


now the actual arshi plot starts


eager to read the next chap


i have sent a buddy req to ur pm account.
pls accept and pm me for further updates


Thank you for reading and leaving wonderful response!
Request accepted :D

Originally posted by: AdiGallia

Love it Thnx Komal for the PM.😊

Thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update...Finally d truth is out
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Superb update...Finally d truth is out

Yes, finally the truth is out
thank you<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
This comment is for chapter 6 as I have just read it...

In my previous comment I said I am sad because I cant fathom how Kushi would love someone who framed her boyfriend. You replies saying ASR will soon make this right and make it right he did in the very next update. Alright on, all hurdles cleared. Something certainly started affecting ASR and Kushi is totally unattached. Lets bring the romance now...

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