#2 My Heart whispers, but i Can't hear...Part-20 to Part-32(pg-136)

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: naina..

ya waiting eagerly for it...u surprised us today,even more than the ebp shlok ... i love ur story ,il not guess anything i just wana enjoy reading your story ...i love such deep emotions than the shallow ones , thanx for this beautiful story...i dont knw how to post a thanks giving pic here but here is a hug for u...🤗

Thnaks a lot dear..
when in yesterday';s update, i gave a hot scene.i knew, it was last one... now onwards...you will get just emotional scenes only and true love of them,,,, where can they stand for each other and upto which extent...

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Riddhima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Omg...what was that...what happened in 6 month... ????

Confusion...confusion...shlok ko koi bimari to nahi like brain tumor or cancer...???? Ya fir he scared about Aastha's life...kahi koi aastha ki jaan k piche to nahi...???? Jo shlok usee apne aap se dur kar raha hai...poor ashlok...kisi ki nazar lag gayi...I think so...

Back to the update...awesome update...Finally aastha sayed I love you...and both are soo happy...Wo apne rishte me ek kadam aage badhe the...and then suddenly what happen...I m shocked...but now it was more interesting to watch...hmmm...

Pyaar tum ko bhi pyaar hum ko bhi hai

To ye kya silsile ho gaye

Bewafa hum nahi bewafa tum nahi

Fir kyu itne gile ho gaye

Chalte chalte kaise ye fasle ho gaye

Kya pata kaha hum chale...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
Omg...what was that...what happened in 6 month... ????
Confusion...confusion...shlok ko koi bimari to nahi like brain tumor or cancer...???? Ya fir he scared about Aastha's life...kahi koi aastha ki jaan k piche to nahi...???? Jo shlok usee apne aap se dur kar raha hai...poor ashlok...kisi ki nazar lag gayi...I think so...
Back to the update...awesome update...Finally aastha sayed I love you...and both are soo happy...Wo apne rishte me ek kadam aage badhe the...and then suddenly what happen...I m shocked...but now it was more interesting to watch...hmmm...

Pyaar tum ko bhi pyaar hum ko bhi hai
To ye kya silsile ho gaye
Bewafa hum nahi bewafa tum nahi
Fir kyu itne gile ho gaye
Chalte chalte kaise ye fasle ho gaye
Kya pata kaha hum chale...

Well what happened in six months..you will get in bits and parts now...
but there is a reason behind shlok's behavior, you will know tomorrow...
They were happy, he committed her, he engaged er, she said...i Love you... but now... he is worried for her only..and she for him...trying to know what happened...
Just wait for tomorrow...
Beautiful song for the right situation...

Bichhad ki bhi mujhse juda to nahin
Khafa hai magar bewafa to nahin
Mere haath mein hi tera haath hai
Mere paas hai tu mere paas hai
Mere saath hai mere saath hai
(using for tomorrow's update)
Thanks a lot dear

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Serviana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

First part really beautiful and Astha finally said she loves him. The second part heartbreaking...

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maivelli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

heu jeenia lovely update love u sweetz
i guess either he is suffering from sm tragic disease or due to his family problm
i knw he cant live without her
or may be in past somthing happend to shlok...
n bcoz of which he is physically nt fit?????

jldi update plz jldi
plz
plz
plz

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: Serviana
First part really beautiful and Astha finally said she loves him. The second part heartbreaking...

Thnaks a lot dear...
Ya, second one ws...sad... but please wait for next one...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Serviana
First part really beautiful and Astha finally said she loves him. The second part heartbreaking...

Thnaks a lt for first part...ya second was heart breaking but its going to show you their true love...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: pt311288
heu jeenia lovely update love u sweetz
i guess either he is suffering from sm tragic disease or due to his family problm
i knw he cant live without her
or may be in past somthing happend to shlok...
n bcoz of which he is physically nt fit?????

jldi update plz jldi
plz
plz
plz

aweee... thaks a lot dear...
Ya he loves her a lot... about your guess.just wait for tomorrow...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Omg supeeer updateee yaaar

Thnaks a lot dear...

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Anusha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#310

woah!!! one week i missed reading your updates and the story has taken bounds and leaps!!!!

yaar... you are the only person who can make us feel so happy and then all shocked at the same time...loved your update as always... 😉

waiting for the next one... guess either astha or her parents or mayb shlok has some kind of terminal illness ... hoping for a miracle...think it'll happen too...

waiting waiting waiting!!!😊