ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread Four* (COMPLETED) - Page 97

I am absolutely speechless!

Juhi... u have plotted yet another beautiful story. Loved it to the core.

Hi Juhi,

I'm speechlesss..

👏👏👏👏👏👏yes thats what you deserve for this extremely beautiful story and trust me i have no words for this absolutely stunning SS.

I had come across this work in the most strangest of circumstances and I was hooked. I have not been able to do anything significant from the last two days and that's because I couldn't get over this SS. Read it in one go from prologue to epilogue and there was just one thing that came to my mind, you can single handedly bring down many well known writers. Period!!"

I am not a fan of supernatural fiction, not even close. I find fiction itself too unreal and maybe asking me to suspend my belief for a few hours even cannot be expected atleast from me! but I guess my resolve wasn't strong enough and the main culprit behind this is SEDUCTION.

It was beautifully written, each and every thing! The tension, sadness, happiness, suspense, mystery almost everything could be felt. And there is no way a reader, even a skeptical one like me!, wouldn't enjoy this!

I had this strange experience that when I was reading the chapter the curse' . Thunder and lightening had started outside and the sound of the rains hammering down on my balcony provided a perfect background music for the chapter. No matter I loved it a lot! Also, I had read the chapter ten and epilogue at the dead of the night , under a blanket hiding away from my mother's reproachful eyes and guess what I was having Goosebumps reading about the curse. 😳

Do not mind it coming from a newbie, but you are a great writer. I had moments when I myself wanted to jump inside the painting and pull khushi back!😉 You never gave away the suspense and went totally against the predictions of the readers( I too had predicted about khushi's child breaking the curse but the dare' part caught me completely off guard!😲) I am glad that I joined IF and came across your work. You will remain my greatest inspiration whenever I decide to pen down my thoughts! 😊

Thanks for this brilliant and beautiful tale. I felt that I was either watching a movie or that these incidents really occurred. It was suspenseful, kind of spooky and yet a very lovable tale. The Blue Room reminded my of the Round Room at Casa Loma which is supposed to be haunted. I was happy to be able to connect this palace with the palace that I had visited. Arshi's love was all consuming and powerful. Khushi is indeed fortunate for getting Arnav in her life and then the lovely daughter.

WOW!!! What an amazing and different story. 👏👏👏

Juhi, I simply liked the way how you concluded this story. I am not a fan of reading when travelling. But I saw you updating this story when I was travelling and I just could not stop reading further till the finish. Now if I think of the last line of the curse, it all made sense that innocence should dare the curse to end it which I think many readers like me overlooked. who else than their own daughter who has seen to herself her and her parents going thru over years. A child perceiving all this and daring this might sound surprising for an instant, but the point you emphasized here is that the kid not necessarily to know the whole story behind it but she did observe something around her mother and painting. A child dont see logic around lifeless objects vs human beings so she directly went ahead and talked it out directly with the painting. probably this is what made the kid succeed in breaking the curse while whole lot of adults around tried to see things more logically about daring the curse. Nice closure on other threads too. Barring some twists happening in my life during your last couple updates of this story, I really had good time reading this story of yours. Thanks for this.