ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread Four* (COMPLETED) - Page 96

wow!! just finished reading ., story was brilliant..luved it.

Hi ... Just read the entire ss n one go ... Read abt it in one of the recco meera had given while i was reading emerald isle ... Simply loved the way u hav written ths entire story ...it was simply amazing ...frm the concept to the way u potrayrd the emotions of every character ... It was really mesemerising ... Truly beautiful ... Would love 2 read all ur wrks ... U r def an amazing writer ... Hav bookmarkd ur index n wil read the rest of ur stories soon ... Im nt very good at comenting but wil def try 2 leave some aftr i finish readind ur othr stories ... Simply loved ths one ... Continue writing ... U r 2 good at it ... All the best ...

It was a wonderful jorney
Very beautifuly writend
I never thought seduction can be
Like dis ;)
I mean ur each word has a deep meaning
How beautifuly u described curse, cure deir love
Attraction, seduction, every thng was just
Perfect...

Awesome

Juhi Di,

Loved this story read it one go 😊 each part was so beautifully portrayed just can't get enough of it👏

Loved the concept and read pretty much in one go.. 😊

It was quite different from what I've read so far and a pat on your back for attempting it 👏, and I was really hooked on to it to now if the curse gets resolved eventually...

I liked the fact that it was not even after the child was born in the last chapter, and though I had lot of questions in my mind at that point, I liked that you were honest with your idea (from the note).

But I was little disappointed after the epilogue. actually I didn't read it completely because at a quick glance I got that it was resolved and then I wasn't as curious. 😕 I hope you didn't add it because a lot of readers expected that? Honestly, I'd have still liked it getting resolved if I had not read that note at the end of last chapter..

In either case, it became little predictable for me, so maybe that's why the disappointment. Because you raised the bar pretty high with Khushi's truth earlier. I had been trying to guess what her truth could be and I had a strong suspicion that Khusih was Aakash's girlfriend whom Riazada family had never seen... Also having read all your earlier stories, I didn't feel that joyous after finishing this one like I did at the end of Secrets and Shattered to name a few..

But content is just one aspect of storytelling and your writing style and revealing the story itself is remarkable.
Good lock with the challenge and looking forward to read what you come up with...

the words would be less sweets
this deserve standing ovulation
love it

I know really really late reply but was so caught up with work and my final semester project that now only I'm catching up on all my updates of the stories I read.
Amazing epilogue.The first part was heart wrenching and I was so disappointed that khushi hadn't yet found a cure . But the second part was amazing. The way you gave meaning to the last line of the curse was too good for words. It was the perfect ending!!!! Can't wait to read your next story

I just read the entire story in one go, and I felt it would be a crime if I didn't comment on this.