~Dil Ki Dhadkan~ KinShi*NEW* Update Pg 4!

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One beautiful sunday morning, the sun shining, cars and motorcycles making their way through the busy roads. All different kinds of people walking down the sidewalks, the small bazaars play their music as they do every morning.
There was one house down the street that seemed quiet and peaceful. It was a beautiful house with a balcony at the top and a sitting bench in front of the house. It would seem that many people live in this house since it looked so big. But here it was not the case. This house only had three people who lived in it and a few maids to take care of it.


The sun makes its way through a bedroom window, troubling a pair of eyes. These eyes seemed so innocent. Woh kehte hai na, Ek masoom sa chera.


The bedroom door opens and a woman in a sari walks in. She was in her late 40s. She had a cup of tea in her hand as she shakes her head and says "This ladka sleeps all day." She was his mother. "Abhi! Abhi! Wake up beta!" Abhi turns his position as he says "Let me sleep mom." His mothers sari was under his head. "


Abhi! Wake now! Lets go to the temple". "I don't want to go to the temple today mom, I want to sleep" says Abhi. "You know my day is incomplete without going to the temple, and your coming with me. And also Girls side are coming to see you today" his mom says. Abhi wakes up in a jhalak "WHAT?!"


"Waah! Dekho kaise utth gaya! I was kidding, but now your up, so get ready now. And anyway, you will have to get married sometime. I want a bahu in this house."
Abhi says "Mommm!" He gets up forcefully and gets ready. This was how their morning started everyday. Abhi loved his mom and he always wanted her to be happy. He studied hard and took care of his mom and sister. His sister was younger then him. She was in college. Abhi is a lawyer. His father had passed away just when he was a toddler his mom had told him. He doesn't remember much of his father. His sister was only a few months old.

Abhi takes his mom to the temple. Usually Abhi just takes his blessings and sits outside waiting for his mom. He has his shades on as the sun blinds his eyes. He looks around on the street, looks at his watch and then looks back at the temple.


His glance stops at someone. He takes off his shades to see a better view.


He couldn't see her whole face since hair was falling into her eyes. But she seemed so beautiful. She was trying to move her hair away from her face. She had a green salwar kameez on. Abhi didn't know why he was staring at her. He never really looked at girls this way. The girl moves her hair behind her ears. Now Abhi was even more mesmerized by her beauty.


She walks down the temple stairs as abhi still stares at her. The girl misses a step and almost falls but abhi catches her. He sees her beautiful big eyes right in front of him. The girl moves her glance away and says "ummm thanks." Abhi moves his focus off of her after 10 sec and says "No problem." Both look around and at then at each other. The girl fixes her dupatta and walks down the stairs.

END OF PART 1...TO BE CONTINUED...😳

Next Part : Page 2

MySelf Jackie, If you don't know me. 😳
Plz do like this post.
I am free to take requests, suggestions for my story. And i'll try my best to fulfill your wishes. 😆 Thanks so much!



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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG it's awesome Jackie 😳 Continuee 😃 and do PM me for the next part 😉 Reading a FF in years but now that I gave it a start, willing to read more 😃 Anyways, I like this indian desi type of contexts 😉 Ladka handsome hai ameer hai ladki smart hai beautiful hai and dono ki first meet eyse bachate bachate hoti hai haye haha, Hey and I'm the first one to comment! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story dear...
I thought you did not write as you never read my writings till now...
Great going...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I keep posting on Prishna...FF ---- OS and all...
have never seen you like or comment on them...

Anyway no issues...this story is good...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I keep posting on Prishna...FF ---- OS and all...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">have never seen you like or comment on them...</font>


<font color="#0000ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Anyway no issues...this story is good...👏</font>



Oh sry I don't really read any stories on IF...I just started one cuz Siham wanted me to do it on KinShi lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No problems dear...
this one is good..
and since you've put in pictures it is even more attractive!⭐️
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

No problems dear...

this one is good..
and since you've put in pictures it is even more attractive!⭐️


Thanx glad u liked it 😃 i actually suck at writing stories, but tried my best😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a really nice chapter the pictures reallyed added to it. But i couldnt help but laugh abit whilst looking at the pictures coz i know krishna was in it lol. Bt really nice and keep it up.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Story Jackie Enjoy alot with pics 😉 Keep it up👏
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PART 2

Abhi was still staring at the girl as she walked more futher and further away until he couldn't see her anymore. A hand touch Abhi's shoulder. It was his mom. "What are you looking at dear"? "umm nothing mom, lets go." says Abhi. "Here is prashad, it eat. its gods blessings. Take it with both hands! You always forget" Abhi takes both of his hands and accepts the prashad.
Both reach home and see that Nisha has arrived home from college. Nisha lives at the college campus. Abhi is a very protective brother and gets worried about her very easily. "Bro! How are you!? Mom! Missed you!" "Nisha your home!" They were very happy. "How is my little sister?" "I'm not little anymore Abhi! But i'm awesome! How are you? Found any girl?" Nisha was teasing Abhi because she knew he would get annoyed. "If I even do, why would I tell you?" "Haww ur so mean!"Says Nisha. Abhi gives her sarcastic smile and walks away up to his room. He sits on his bed, and kept having flashbacks of the girl he outside the temple. "Who is this ladki? Why does she keep coming in my mind!?"

"Hey Radhika, Who was that guy you were with at the temple?" "What guy?" Says Radhika.
"The guy that kept you from falling! Kaun tha woh? I saw both of you, Kya scene tha!" "Shutup Nikki, it was nothing like that." Radhika ignores her as she fixes her clothes and tries out new clothes in her closest.


"But Radhika I got to say, he looked very cute. Ek dhaam Hero jaisa tha!" "I don't care Nikki, you think all guys look like heros." "Whatever Radhika! You never think anyone is cute! It has to be a sign! A hot guy that catches you from falling at a temple! that is so romantic yaar! Ek dhaam filmy style!" "I wish he had let me fallen, so i wouldn't have to listen to you talk nonstop, and i wouldn't of even minded if he let me fall. All guys are the same, thats how they try to get girls, so we would fall for them and they get what they want." Says Radhika. "Not all men are the same Radhika! You can't judge a person by their face ok."

As the silent night went by, eveything was quiet and peaceful. Night began to turn morning and music started in the bazaars. Abhi had woken up early to get some groceries before he had to leave for work. As he is walking back to his car he bumps into Radhika. All their stuff falls on the ground but Abhi couldn't look away from her. Radhika had a stern face and she tries to pick up her stuff. Abhi bends down and helps her. "Sorry didn't see you coming." Radhika doesn't say anything. She picks up all her stuff and walks away. "Excuse me, umm your the same girl from the temple right?" Radhika gives a forceful smile and says, "Yes." Abhi asks her if she wouldn't mind if he drops her off to her home since she has so many groceries and its also windy. "umm its ok, i'll be fine. thanks". Radhika again drops something on the ground and Abhi smiles. "I guess if you want to leave a trail of food, its ok with me, " abhi says scarcastically. "Radhika looks at him with an annoyed face. "Keep your smart remarks to yourself smarty. I'm only sitting in your car because i'm desperate to get all this stuff at home ok."
Both are quiet in the car, so Abhi puts some music on. Radhika gets annoyed by the loud music. "Oh my god! What is this?" She changes the song. "Hey this my car!" yells Abhi. "I don't care! I'm not listening to that stupid song" says Radhika. "God why did I offer to drive her home!" whispers abhi under his breath." "What did you say?" "Nothing. By the way, where you live?" "Just keep going, i'll tell you when it comes ok."


Radhika puts on a new song. Kyun ki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho...Zindagi ab tum hi ho...Chain bhi, mera dard bhi..Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho. "Wah kya song hai!"


Abhi makes an annoying face. He thinks in his mind "This girl is different then i thought yaar, stay away Abhi, looks like she'll definately increase your blood pressure." "Hey what are you thinking?" Radhika snaps are Abhi. "Don't get ideas ok, I know guys like you." "What do you mean guys like me? Is there a problem in me?" Abhi looks at her with a stern face.


"Watch out!!" Radhika yells while she tries turns the stering wheel when there is a huge truck coming toward them. The car crashes against the truck, and flips over. Abhi and Radhika in the car, bleeding and unconcious.


End of Part 2. TO BE CONTINUED.

Part 1 : Page 1
Edited by -ILoVeKinshuk- - 11 years ago

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