Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 19)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

waiting ke itne sare comments dekh ke hum pe daya karo annoy ji😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

loved the story... :) :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Read the update few days ago but couldn't comment, had the most horrible two months ever with studies and work and still see no end of it! Anyhow congrats on the new thread first of all😊 Now moving on to the update, what can I possibly say,words are just inadequate to tell how much I loved the update! I really like the pace you are setting up in progressing their relationship. Specially the way gradually Khushi is turning in to in an understanding partner,she is still in the process of figuring out the actual Arnav that lies beneath the Arnav, he carries himself as in front of the society. The way Khushi understood the silent gesture of Arnav when senior ASR questioned about Rishab was a fantastic scene.

She is well aware about the fact that Arnav doesn't like Rishab and even though she told Arnav before marriage she won't discontinue the friendship with him solely because of this reason she is not doing anything to make him angry until she finds out the real reason behind his hostility towards Rishab, though Rishab pulled off a stunt in front of him declaring his undying love to her she feels like there is more to it than seen.

Loved the way Arnav was admiring his little wife as a silent spectator and appraising the way she was showing her enthusiasm towards something he enjoys doing during their trip to chandani chowk.. The staircase scene was just amazing! It showed how caring Arnav is. Khushi's blushing spree was so sweet, but I think Arnav will have to at least in a subtle way show he is also affected otherwise some where down the line Khushi will feel like she is the only person who is trying to build a strong relationship. Well it was quite apparent he was also affected if at all far more than Khushi! From the way his mind was conjuring various things it was quite obivious😊 But his wife of course couldn't notice this thanks to his talent in disguising emotions.

Afterwards the manner Khushi broke the awkward silence was so sweet. Arnav will understand in no time what he feels for Khushi is something deep since he had already realized he just doesn't want to initiate a physical relationship. Anyway Arnav has a long way to go,Khushi by him side I'm sure it will be an entertaining journey. And I think you should keep the this pace so that it won't end soon 😛

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daffodils06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Friday is still a few hours away...so I guess the next update will b on a new thread...rite..??

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

update kal mil jayega na? ????
India me Friday kal hi hai.,...I will not consider any other time zone ...

@shruti..tujhe toh baad main dekhungi. ..fursat main. ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Originally posted by: thulasi_arshi
update pls

bindu is also back with her monkey gang. ...writer ji. .ab toh update de do. :D

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sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: thulasi_arshi
ladoo n sadu

I loved it. :D. :D

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thulasi_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#868

UPDATE

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sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#869

Arnav---- hume tumse mohabbat hue hai. ..oh janemaan do you know???

iss dil se shararaat hue hai. ...oh janemaan do you know?????

Mr. oh so smart Raizada. ..if. u will not tell than how the hell she will know? ???

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shruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sphobic
update kal mil jayega na? ????
India me Friday kal hi hai.,...I will not consider any other time zone ...

@shruti..tujhe toh baad main dekhungi. ..fursat main. ...

yeah me too want ..update...aj hi kar do mujhe vo bhi chalega!!

@spo--ha ha dekhte..phle exam de...

khatm hi nai horahe...h😆