Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 19)

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AKHUSHI

@AKHUSHI

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#821

Hey, I am happy and content with the way You are progressing the story. I think a person who is troubled with past can not change in one day or in a month or even a year. It takes long time tender love and care. So I feel, it's on the right track. Once Arnav realizes Khushi is the real one, who loves him, cares for him and it's not compromising thing, he will love and cherish Khushi. So I am happy with the story line and eagerly waiting for the update.

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nadiafarjana

@nadiafarjana

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#822

i love your writing..
i am happy to read whatever you write.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Eagerly waiting for MDM update. Apart from that your new story also is very intriguing. Will follow that on your blog.

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hellgirl

@hellgirl

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#824

hey this sounds amazing...
i m so ganna read it pls pm me the blog link...

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Mina420

@Mina420

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

I never really liked werewolf stories... but your prologue sounds more than interesting and I would love to give it a try. Please send me the blog link.
In advance, please don't kick me out of your pm list. I have two exams coming soon, followed by my placement period for my bachelor period. Hence I am busy but I will try to comment as frequently as possible.

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SaRun.

@SaRun.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Its sounds good :D

Vats wishing u all the luck!

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#827

first of all

waiting for update

next post o.s soon..jaldi s ending dhundho unki...

3rd werewolf story...hmmm ok..vaise i wanted political story...bt phir i will read this...too,

its true this genre hadnt explored that much..

4th..promise karo..mkm k update regularly doge,,,u were going back one a week routine na...wat happened???

5 th n last...wrist finally thik ho gyi???😃

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#828

i love your writing a lot...

its so mature, rich on content, emotion and romance...

but i have not read anything other than arhi cuz i cant invest myself in anything other than arhi and ipkknd... one maddening experience is more than enough for me... and other thing is i am ardently dedicated to and insanely in love with them...

having said that i wud request you to make it arhi and if not i will try to give it a shot imagining it to be arhi just cuz u r writing it...

do share ur blog link... :)

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kooltoad

@kooltoad

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#829

chapter 33

yayyy i loved that u introduced the Mr RR angle (i requested u for it) :))

and the way khushi dealt with it and how she read his body language, his silence and how she pacified him, its only what a true companion would do... i will not say she is his soulmate but she is definitely on the path of becoming one...

and bade papa is definitely becoming a kid given the pampering and attention he is getting along with the time for rest-cum-leisure... i like this guy... did i say that before...? i guess many times... lol...

and the date, well i will call it a date, and a really cute one too!!!

khushi again thought of his likes, interest first and moulded her likes and interest to blend with his... and she is such a lively person and lives every moment to the fullest in all situations...

and our arnav's attention was again glued to her beauty and antics... kind of reliving the surajkund mela experience...

and khushi so sweetly remembered to take food for her vilaiti and choosy husband... and the smile on his face, i could actually imagine it... :)

and then comes the last leg and the most romantic moment, it gave me dhak-dhak...

the thoughts going trough khushi's mind were so real, and then her doubt that may be he is not affected... she is starting to have those kind of feelings for him now and not realising it... and its so easy to think in this way; may be he is not affected/may be he doesn't like me/ may be this/ may be that...

and arnav definitely knows how to control his reactions and expressions but how long will he remain like this, it is inevitable cuz khushi is just so irresistibly beautiful inside out that he has to realize the love he feels for her and also the attraction that is increasing by notches...

i like all the italicized inputs about their feelings cuz of their realism and genuineness... this is the way one feels in such circumstances and the feelings couldn't be anymore real...

so dubai it is?

i am sure khushi cant say no to her husband even if she has to say no to her Lavanya di...

and arnav is hell bent on making Mr RR realize, understand and accept that khushi is gone from his life for good! but the man in question is lost somewhere although i don't want him to return, not still, hope he is mending his heart and coping well with the situation...

so we will get a lead in their romance?

jaise bhi ho, give us an update fast...

the updates are of decent length and content but i am always left wanting for more,,,, :))