TAAREY OS- THE SHOCKING DATE

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Mrunmayee

@Mrunmayee02

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesum os bhabhiji...😉
Waise I loved it to the core...❤️
N yaa I knw a secret wich u told me bout dis os...😉
Waise bhai aapne bhi kya likha hai...Awesum...❤️
N thnku so much for dis os...

Edited by --Mrunmayee-- - 11 years ago

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

unres

sorry for late comment...

coming to os...

it was a lovely os...

loved taarey...

yup it was shocking date but also a cute date

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Shweta

@2111_shweta

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Sweet OS

Loved the proporsal 😳

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sumera sulaiman

@sumera_sulaiman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

It was such a lovely and indeed shocking os 😆
But it was really nice to read a different os
You just depicted their feelings very lovingly..
And always swayam vil b d Hitler in their love story but here taani ka Mom hahaha 😆 😆
And as always both cant stop staring each other 😳 😳
Har taarey stories ki hylyt unki llhh moments hi rahi hai
I just loved it.. Their proposal on the beach atlast bcame the highlight
Do keep writing such cute sa lovey dovey sa story on taarey.. Its always lovely to read about them again and again.. 😊 😊

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asha rani.B.S

@Asha_Tacker

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

A good first work.TR POV twrds echotr ws naughty haan.TR f8ng lk kids,so swt.Thr confession remembrd me my one shot story.Well,it was lovely.D kiss at d end,ummm!

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Aiman

@princess_tara

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

lovely os taarey was too adorable
tanx for pm
keep writing

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anaghchavan

@anaghchavan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

beautifully written,

liked it very much.

keep writing and pm me when ever u write and os/ss/ff on
taarey.

thanks

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Namita

@anatomy_nerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

wow dear...it was such an adorable os 👏
Taarey's 1st date...omg it was hilarious, cute and lovable...dat golgappa part was so damn cute n the proposal was out of this world
U should write more OS's