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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome chapter
Loved it
Please do pm me dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Chapter 3

First part where Khushi left her fear behind and went to face whatever the danger that was waiting for her in a forced strong facade shows that she really is a grown up girl who could manage on her own without her brother's help. So she is not her brother's baby sister anymore. And the way she calmly and composedly used her brain before facing whoever the person that has crashed into her house shows that she indeed was an intelligent girl😊

The rendezvous of the two pairs of eyes was very beautifully penned down by you. And I must say the few lines that described the collision of the two pairs of eyes were so apt with your title. And the silent eye conversation both of them had was wonderful. And I'm so glad at the way Khushi treated the stranger, although in real life it's not the right thing to do😆

Okay, the soap scene was really funny. And seriously, how can he not know how to wear a kurta pyjama? Who is this guy? Seems like he is an orphan and a loner. I kind of felt sorry for him though. But honestly, did he call "Sitara, Sitara"🤣

I have to say Khushi owns a big heart. Poor Arnav, must have had a really hard day for him to sleep on the floor. Or was it natural for him? So many questions are whirling in my mind😃

OMG, the breakfast scene was at first hilarious, but the latter part was emotional. Did he finish a whole fruit basket? And the way he asked Khushi to make everything was really cute. Also the way he asked whether she will make breakfast for him was a really innocent question. And I must say Khushi is a really nice person with a golden heart. And I guess Arnav has suffered a lot all these years. My heart went out for him seeing the way he ate.😔

In your story, I love both Arnav and Khushi's characters. They are really innocent and kind hearted in their own way❤️

When reading the first two chapters I thought that Arnav may be from a middle class family, but now I realize that's not the case. And the first impression you gave through the prologue is now changed for me. I really love this refreshing concept. A very big thank you for sharing it with us. I'm truly enjoying this story🤗

Thanks for the pm😃

PS - That was a quite long update. Thanks for that. But one question, how did Arnav crash into the house, if Khushi properly locked the doors and windows?🤪

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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Chapter 4

It was an emotional update. But it was really nice. Great work👏

Coming to the update, what has happened in Arnav past? Why would someone call him a murderer? And the way Arnav lost his patience hearing Khushi's words showed that he indeed has had a pathetic past. Would love to know what happened. But will wait till you reveal it😃

Khushi is going to be one dead duck if Aman gets to know that she is keeping a man, that too a stranger who is searched by the police. But I really am happy that she indeed did not throw Arnav out from her house being harsh towards him. I guess she will help him to get out of all this mess😊

But how will Arnav's innocence be proved now? I mean the man with whom he collided wa a stranger to him. From where would he find that guy? God, how many unfortunate events does this man have to got hrough before he finds his peace? I want Khushi to be by his side no matter what happens😳

Thank you for this amazing update🤗

Thanks for the pm😃

Eagerly waiting for the next chappie

Update soon😉

PS - Can you give the English translation of Hindi dialogues within brackets from the next update onwards? It would be easier to read😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Just came cross and start reading it... It is really good... I fell in love with it...

This is something new and intresting...

Update soon.. I would love to read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Amazing story...
Loved it...
Arnav is weird but cute...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome story dear.its really interesting to know the mystery of arnav.waiting for next parts.do send me pms whenever u update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Story and loved the concept...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Simply superb concept
Just love it
Waiting 4 next part plzz pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
I started reading your story because of V3Od's suggestion and it attracted my attention from the begining. I've read all chapters in one go and have a little request, could you add English translations for all quotes? I know you translated some conversations but I want to understand all of them.
Back to the story, I loved Khushi and Arnav's innocence. In spite of Aman's warnings Khushi chose to trust Arnav whom she knows nothing about him, totally a stranger to her. Maybe first time in Arnav's life someone trust him unconditionally, prepared breakfast for him. Arnav's first reaction when he saw the bathroom was so adorable.

I felt so sad reading the lines in which Arnav was sleping and and eating on the floor, His unawareness of liquid soap, his odd behaviors made me wonder about in which conditions he lived all his life.

I'll send you buddy request, please accept it and send me PM for next updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Read all chapters in one go .loved it
plz pm me.
and thanks to v3od for recommending ur story

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