Chapter 3
First part where Khushi left her fear behind and went to face whatever the danger that was waiting for her in a forced strong facade shows that she really is a grown up girl who could manage on her own without her brother's help. So she is not her brother's baby sister anymore. And the way she calmly and composedly used her brain before facing whoever the person that has crashed into her house shows that she indeed was an intelligent girl😊
The rendezvous of the two pairs of eyes was very beautifully penned down by you. And I must say the few lines that described the collision of the two pairs of eyes were so apt with your title. And the silent eye conversation both of them had was wonderful. And I'm so glad at the way Khushi treated the stranger, although in real life it's not the right thing to do😆
Okay, the soap scene was really funny. And seriously, how can he not know how to wear a kurta pyjama? Who is this guy? Seems like he is an orphan and a loner. I kind of felt sorry for him though. But honestly, did he call "Sitara, Sitara"🤣
I have to say Khushi owns a big heart. Poor Arnav, must have had a really hard day for him to sleep on the floor. Or was it natural for him? So many questions are whirling in my mind😃
OMG, the breakfast scene was at first hilarious, but the latter part was emotional. Did he finish a whole fruit basket? And the way he asked Khushi to make everything was really cute. Also the way he asked whether she will make breakfast for him was a really innocent question. And I must say Khushi is a really nice person with a golden heart. And I guess Arnav has suffered a lot all these years. My heart went out for him seeing the way he ate.😔
In your story, I love both Arnav and Khushi's characters. They are really innocent and kind hearted in their own way❤️
When reading the first two chapters I thought that Arnav may be from a middle class family, but now I realize that's not the case. And the first impression you gave through the prologue is now changed for me. I really love this refreshing concept. A very big thank you for sharing it with us. I'm truly enjoying this story🤗
Thanks for the pm😃
PS - That was a quite long update. Thanks for that. But one question, how did Arnav crash into the house, if Khushi properly locked the doors and windows?🤪