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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Great first part!! So glad you've started a new story! Can't wait to read more :)

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

part 1
awesome dear...
too good...
wow that was so lovely...
loved it...
so entertaining...
cont soon dear...

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Nisha Thakur

@nerdy_Nisha93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Read the prologue and the first chapter. It was so much fun and I really enjoyed going through it. I would love to read further. Please accept my buddy request for future PM notifications.

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

update kari ka padi????

waiting for this too honey

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is an extremely hilarious story😆 I loved the story to the core❤️

Arnav and Khushi's camaraderie is awesome beyond words. They are truly made for each other😳

Update soon😉

Eagerly waiting to know what would happen next😃

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Wonderful Concept and loved the start...

Glad that This story seems light hearted and fun and romantic one.. Loved the pairs and waiting for the third pair to get together 😊

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Diya Ganguly

@Careless_Artist

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Great start of this ff..
Arshi's friendship is not less than a relationship of two Lover's relation..
Arnav's over possessive nature towards Khushi made it more special...
Their prank on Payel, Aakash, Rohan, Anjali was supab..
Waiting for next..

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dhakdhak22

@dhakdhak22

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

nice dear

arshi is best friend

wow they both r prankster

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Tulipdulip
Oh god I loved it.. Will be waiting to read more of it!!,

Thanks! Will update soon.😳

Originally posted by: priyanka1998
great update

Thanks!

Originally posted by: fffan123
👏👏👏

😃😃😃

Originally posted by: seeta_naips
that was too hilarious🤣

That breakfast convo had me in stitches

great prank

Hehe...Thanks! Glad I could make you laugh.😉

Originally posted by: Smrikta992
Amazing..
Its Hilarious..
Lovd it..
Arnav nd khushi's pranks r just awsome..
Will be waiting for nxt..
Thnks for pm...

Thanks! You'll see them prank them a few times...you'll see them pranking each other too.😉

Originally posted by: gifttag
Awesome, wonderful and amazing...I loved it.

Thanks!!😊

Wow what a story..Arnav/Khushi best friends and inseparable, together like other couple don't have that even after ten year or so living together, they have understanding, they really know each other and deeply care for one another too.
You're right...sometimes you find a comfort level and an understanding with someone who's a friend and sometimes even couples can't reach that point...Arnav and Khushi share that in this story...they have understanding between them, they're comfortable with each other, deeply care for each other but they're not a couple. Things are bound to change once one of them wants something different...

But I don't know I have a feeling there is more than what meets the eye...definitely from Arnav's side when he said 'as if I would let you go away from me' and Khushi saying 'you scare all the guys away' Khushi is aware of his possessiveness and has never questioned it, may be she did't even think as they are together all the time she did't think about the deeper meaning this could have.

True...Khushi is used to his possessiveness...and she's not really looking to date anyone so she doesnt mind him scaring off any guys that try to hit on her..😆 Khushi's the only best friend he's had who understands him like she does...she's very dear to him and hence the possessiveness.😉

Arnav is a playboy who changes his GF like Tshirts and the funny thing is he himself scares them away by the looks if it telling them about his own shortcomings.

Arnav will use any excuse at hand to break up with his GF. he doesn't think he's a bad guy...he just said that to her to break up with her...😆

Will we by any chance be seeing a jealous Arnav as that is always a real treat to watch or read.

Hehe...always.😉

Loved all the characters in this funny story and loving the way you have started this and I can see the great potential this laughter fill story will have with some deep emotional scene as well at some point.

Aw, thanks! and yeap, you can bet on some emotional scenes at some point...it won't be anything too heavy like B&B, though.😊

Can't wait for the next chapter. Pls continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: badfaith4u
That was hilarious

The misunderstanding, prank and their relationship

I just love it

Please continue the story

Thanks! hopefully the craziness will continue!😉

Originally posted by: anabiya1
One of da best update i ever read...:-)

Thanks!😃

Originally posted by: henamani
like their friendship but it is so physical that they are bound to cross the line

It is easy to cross lines when you're that close and you tend to get drunk together quite a bit...lets see how it unfolds for them.😛

Originally posted by: rubikjules
Wow katie! Superb first chapter! I love d characters..arnav is so chilled out..
I love their friendship too..although deep down I think they do have feelings for each other..whn arnav tries to drive away every guy who tries to hit on khushi we can easily see d possessiveness..it bothers him..
Arnav is definitely chilled out...very different from the usual ASR mode we see him in...he's very possessive about her and his excuse for scaring away the guys is: "I'm trying to keep her safe."😆

Its a very diff story..very funny too n I really enjoyed reading it..!
Thks so much for d pm..!

Thanks Jules! Hopefully I can keep the funny factor intact...comedy is not my usual genre of writing...just wanted to give it a shot.😆

Awaiting d nxt part of bnb..!

Jules25/ Rubikjules

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom
Hai i am new reader of ur story read buty n beast thats amazing thats y send u frnd rqst thanx for acepting about this stry asusual amazing prolog n cs r intresting lov arshi bonding and others u describe their bonding butifuly that mk story more intresting eagarly waiting for read more thanx for pm

Welcome on board to both B&B and AY. 😊 Their bonds will remain the way they are for the most part but with the kind of relationship Arnav and Khushi share, its bound to create some rift sooner or later...😛

Originally posted by: arshifan04
Lovely one

Thanks!

Originally posted by: cupcake1234
Oh so they are all house mates...and Arnav and Kushi are best friends eh?
Those two are too cool for school...

They're in school alright..both dedicated students too but they like having their fun. Why not, right? I mean this is when you live life to the fullest!😉

Kushi sure does have a pretty big appetite.She seems to take the saying 'eat your breakfast like a king' very seriously 😆 I mean that was a hell of a lot of food on her plate..

Haha...right? There are these little things about her that set her apart from other girls...make her somewhat different...she's not a tom boy like Arnav likes to call her but she's not super girly either...you'll see more about her character as it unfolds.😊

The misunderstanding about "sleeping together" was so much fun to read.Everyone's reactions were hilarious.

Does Kushi get to be Arnav's wingman? or in this case wingwoman ?😛

something like that.😉

The prank at the end was very funny as well...!Clearly they don't act their age😆

well...they're still young..lol..still in early 20s...and you're only as old as you feel...😆😉

Originally posted by: cookie-lover
Awesome... right from first two words to the last line of the update..
and the whole misunderstanding was hilarious.. and the prank gonna try it on someone... 😈

Thank you!! haha...sure, give it a try...I've definitely used that prank before!😆 the expressions are always priceless!😈

Originally posted by: CountingStarsx
Awh..their comfort level is so amazing. <3 Beautiful concept! x

Thank you so much Vani!😊

Originally posted by: suji5
intereating update..
they are living together?
what about their parents?

Yeap...all six of them are housemates...Khushi's father has passed away and Arnav's Mother has passed away...their parents won't be playing too big of a role in the story and they'll really be just minor characters. :)

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Loved it
Arnav n Khushi are awesome

Thank you!

Originally posted by: manikka
tht was the good start dear...

Thanks Manika!

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
i was laughing my head off ...my team taught finally all the 16hrs of work got to me ...wink wink ...and that i have gone off the edge
thanks dear for making my day

does kushi love him already?

bahahaha...I'm glad I could make you laugh.😛 and about Arnav and Khushi...who loves who...hmmm...You'll just have to stay tuned for that.😉

Originally posted by: Asiyamajeed
😲 😲 Haww this is ur sixth story...??
I never knew u wrote othr den 'RUSTED' & 'B&B'...though i didnt read rustd😛

for giving dis surprise...😊

nice character sketch bt only arnavji's nd khush's relation ko chod diya...this is ramanchi katieji...😡
Ramanchi nahi thi...bas ek aur mini-surprise tha..😉

the title...prolouge itself is promisng awwsme...lovd it..

Thank you Asiyaji.😊

Dinosaur...beast..hehe..
Nd also arshi most used lines..😛

Rulatey ho...Hasatey ho...hamesha tum satatey ho...per joh bi ho hume bohut acche lagte ho..😃

Iss FF mein rulane ka plan nahi hai...B&B mein kaafi rula chuki hooon already...😉

love u too ji..❤️❤️

P.S GTG Nw 1st chappy waitng fr me...😛

though my main course nd desert becme 2days old bt it is as fresh as nd yummiest sweety...😉

haha...I'm glad that even 2 days old dessert pleased you.😛😉