Originally posted by: ARSHI_FAN11
Katie you shocked me 😲 !!!! but achche wala shock 😆 KHUSHI came !!!! Yeap! She showed up at last! I'm glad that this time it was achche wala shock..lol...
Ok now that I told you my most prominent reaction, let me get to other things... There are so many thoughts running simultaneously that I want to say so much all together! Alright, I'm all settled to read all of your thoughts!😳Thank you so much for including the pics, Anjali's gown looked heavenly (I have a weakness for white 😉) Oh both Naina (my "illustrator" aka sexy_eyes) and I found that gown and we had a good laugh that both of us had chosen the same gown for Anjali...I want that gown so bad! It was love at first sight! and Khushi my God I can just imagine her in that dress and accessories - she would have looked so so beautiful !!! ASR creation after all, and I would like to believe that he unconsciously designed it for her and thus it fit her like made just for her 😆😉😳Maybe he did unconsciously designed it with Khushi in mind...who knows?😉 The accessories were Naina's find...I took up the tattoo and hairstyle research...hehe...I loved the video and the pics that were described and of course the song is so heart touching - I totally enjoy this song of KK 😉 I should probably edit the last update and say that I have nothing to do with the video...it was a simple search on Youtube..I didn't make it...but if you're talking about the descriptions of pictures in the update, then, yes...that was all me.😆You had me almost in tears when you mentioned last pic where Khushi shows her tattoo as if including Arnav in the picture - it was just so heart touching... no matter what Arnav would be present with her always...Arnav is always with her, in the form of the tattoo, in the form of her heart which used to beat for him at one point...he's been an integral part of her life for a long time and the three years of separation cant diminish that...Her entry wow that was rocking - I could totally see it playing out in front of me oh I loved the butterfly tattoo !You shocked me with this twist of story! I never anticipated that Khushi would actually make it to the wedding and thats so silly of me ! Of course she would have come to Anjali-Rohan wedding no matter what and would not miss it for anything in the world!..I'll take the full blame for that, thank you. lol..with my evilness, I had most of you convinced that she wont show up...You gave us a glimpse of true ARS anger here when NK was introduced to him and later when Khushi was with NK 😆 just don't tell me that there would be any misunderstandings about NK or Lavanya (unless NK-Lavanya get together soon if you have that planned 😉 ) I will leave that to the future parts, as usual...both NK and Lavanya have a part to play and that's why they were introduced...granted that its a small role but its crucial...These two have enough misunderstandings to deal with already - they seriously need some alone time to sort all this... And finally Arnav noticed the changed Khushi, all curvaceous and gorgeous ah haa 😉(I am not surprised to find her changed... time does that to you and in her case its all a good change 😳) Indeed, time does that to you along with your profession, I find...I mean...as a medical school student, when she mingles with similar crowd, she probbaly had dress codes to follow for parties...you cant really go and treat patients wearing track pants and oversized shirts, right?So are we going to witness the regular sparks that turn to flames on the dance floor when Arnav meets Khushi 😳 ohhh am so dying to see their first proper conversation and as people madly in love (and jealous!) Umm..I might have to disappoint you with this but things are amiss between them...they're still aloof to each other and things are pretty awkward so the dance floor may not burn...but ASR will burn in jealousy!😃Loved the update (you can believe that as I read it twice already!!!) 🥳and I cant wait to read more, thank you for this one 🤗 Thank you for the amazing comment! 🤗...I'm trying my best to post the update today! Look out for it!😉PS: saw your note and for the third point I can vouch that they have no clue about how much we all waited for BB updates 😛 hahahhahaa...I know right?! I can't apologize for that enough but things were really busy in life...education and family and onset of career and what not...and in my profession...the hours and shifts are unpredictable...especially if you're on call...oh do I have interesting and annoying stories about that..lol...and for rest two, honestly, I feel these are some kids on the forum and nothing else. Immaturity of the comments shows their age 😉 You are doing a fab job with your story and I would like to mention that as a reader I want to read the story you want to tell and not what others want you to tell... 😊 Thank you sweets! for the most part, I never make MAJOR changes to my stories but I definitely incorporate small suggestions if they're feasible...😳
update was lovely Katie...and forget the haters, let them take a hike...constructive criticism is different and that shud be taken positively but haters shud be plain ignored Agreed. I welcome constructive criticism, it is what has helped me evolve and improve as a write but haters do the exact opposite...I try to ignore them for the most part...😛
i loved the surprise, though i was waiting for this, but thought it will come for the wedding, but this was much better Thank you! I thought about bringing her directly to the wedding but then I thought of all the possible 'Rabba ve's in the other wedding rituals..😉
so Khushi has also changed just like Arnav, what made her change, was it a thought process that said that Arnav chooses only such type of girls, i guess it is that what made Khushi change, wud be lovely to see her reaction when she gets to know that Arnav loved her the way she was... A lot has played a part in the change in Khushi...but of course...I will let the reasons unfold one by one later in the story but I like the direction in which you're thinking...can you think of any other reasons why she could have changed??
just like Arnav i was also wondering why she isnt talking to him and not missing him while chatting with the others in the party, but her monologue explained why...Yeap..that plus teh fact that she has dealt with the situation better...she used the circumstances to make herself stronger while Arnav because a victim to them..
and she knows how Arnav wud react to NK, thats good...m taking the liberty of assuming that NK is here for LA...hey, why not, in today's modern-age, its quite possible that NK already knows LA through friends or through fb or something and has a silent crush on her, and thats why came along...no ??she knows Arnav enough to know that he's still very possessive...he's the same man who FORCED her to get DRESSED! lol. three years have passed, yes, but she hasn't forgotten what he was like and what he still might be like...and your assumptions about NK and LA...very interesting, I must say...but yes, in this day and age...its not unusual...
so Arnav went back to his earlier characteristic first, of dancing with LA, to do what, to make Khushi jealous again, doesnt he know that it backfired last timeOh no no...he didnt dance with La to make Khushi jealous...it was simply a means to get closer to Khushi and NK so that he can keep a closer eye on them.😆...but thankfully took the initiative and asked her for a dance later...NK exited gracefully, seems like he is handing over the friendship again to Arnav...as if he was helping Arnav out by being there for Khushi, in Arnav's absence...I don't know about him helping out Angad but he sure helped Khushi out...he was sort of what Khushi clinged to in those hard time to rise back up again...
and they started dancing together...ideally Arnav shud ask her out for a date now...just to know things bt her...cause he has accepted that she has changed, wht better way to know what the changes are, then asking her out for a date...and this time NK better not come in-between them...hehehehe Lets see how their conversation goes in the next update...and Arnav being Arnav might even ask her out but will she say yes without having answers to her questions?
more eager to read the next part, now...more thenever I'll try my best to update today.😳
keep writing dear
Originally posted by: P4rveen12
You honestly don't know how much I love you for this update, I had a big smile on my face throughout the whole update. I love you too and I'm glad I make you smile..hehe..😉
Thank you for including me in your thank you note, a lovely and sweet gesture. You deserve a mention in every update for being amazing with your comments every time. baffles me how you can come up with so much to say every time.😳The update was absolutely amazing and simply superb, so so beautiful. Thank you so much!Awww loved the amazing and beautiful Video Khushi made showing all there awesome memories together and her song choice was fantastic. Its one of my all time favs!Wow loved the way Khushi made her entry and she even sang the song in tune, simply loved it.Arnav's emotions, feelings and reaction when he saw Khushi were written so brilliantly, I loved his surprised and stunned reaction. OH, it took me so long! trying to imagine him feeling those things and trying to describe his shock...😆Loved the way the others hugged Khushi it such a sweet and emotional moment,Arnav and Khushi hugging was just the highlight of the whole update, so beautiful, amazing, brilliant, tender, loving, heart touching. Yeap...I didnt want to make it overly excited for them because they havent talked in so many years...I had to write their hug part with a dash of awkwardness, hence Arnav's lack of words...lol...Wow the green eyed monster definitely made an appearance in this update in the form of Arnav, lol.Bless Arnav was so jealous when he saw Khushi and NK, love the way Arnav greeted NK with so much distaste.A jealous Arnav is always a treat to read but I'm sure NK will be harmless and Khushi only belongs to Arnav. The green eyes monster is here to stay for a bit and the jealousy as only begun! wait until Arnie boy learns more about the bond NK and Khushi share...the man will feel jealousy like he's never known...😈 time to give him a dose of his own medicine..😉So happy Arnav went and approached Khushi for a dance and wow the chemistry is electrifying, I hope we will still get a continuation of the dance in the next update and I expect it to be sizzling and very sensual. I am definitely going to disappoint you with that then... the dance will portray the awkwardness that now exists between them...Loved all the dresses you included they were all gorgeous, Thank you...credit for Payal's dress and half the credit of Anjali's dress goes to Naina (sexy_eyes)😳The update was written exceptionally well and perfectly from start to finish, Thank you so much!I absolutely loved the update and I loved the surprise, I knew Khushi would come. Ah darn it! I was hoping to stump you with that...I guess I've lost my touch...lol.Thanks for the PM,Eagerly waiting for the next part,I'm so proud to be in the stalking group, my parents will be so proud, lol xx Ahahaha🤣whether they'll be proud of that fact, I can't say but I'm super proud of you hun!😉
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