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@tarana08

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Posted: 18 years ago

#141

can't wait for marriage
plz cont soon YaaR
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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

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Posted: 18 years ago

#142

thanx 4 commenting frnds........sorry mai thora buzy hoon..but i promise k jaldi cont karo gi...... 😊

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

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Posted: 18 years ago

#143

pls as soon as u get time continue ur story.

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Stunner

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Posted: 18 years ago

#144

PLZZ CONT SOON ME WAITING EAGERLYY TO READ

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: fakhra
sorry mai thora buzy hoon..but i promise k jaldi cont karo gi...... 😊

mehru dear you take your own time.. jab free ho jao tho story continue karna....😃

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#146

sorry frndz i know kafe lamba intezar tha................chalo i m posting story........

Sangeet ka tu sub ko paata haina......shadi ka din bhi a gaya hai.....aab shadi....
ghar mai saae tiyrian ho rahe hote hain.....akhir shadi ka waqt a jaata hai........akshat kasak Imaan k room mai hote hain...

Akshat:hey Imaan aaj tum chali jao gi...yaar i'll miss u......

Imaan:baas baas haan aki.....mujhe paata hai tum jhoot bool rahe ho...

Akshat:tumhey kaysa paata.....

Imaan:dekha dekha kasak......

Kasak smiles....
Akshat:hey Imaan tumhare jaane k baad na tumhara room mai lay loon ga.....

Kasak:wo q......koi zarorat nahi.....os rooom mai mai raho gi........

Imaan:tum loog jo itna lar rahe ho na mujhe paata hai Armaan wo room kise ko nahi day ga...

Akshat:ohhhhh.....bara yaqeen hai.....

Imaaan:haan.....dekh layna......

juzt then their servant enter
Ser:madam ji nichay baarat a gaye hai aap ko bula rahe hain.....

Kasak:ohhhhh woooooo...barat.....chalo.....
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wo loog nichay jaate hain angad mandap mai betha hota hai ......Imaan us k paas bethte hai veena armaan k paas hote hain......

Veena:beta...

Armaan:nahi mama.....plzz.....mujhse kuch maat kahiye ga.....
...
Shadi ho jaate hai.....sub bethay hote hain wid all frndz........
Akshat:lo Imaan tumhare shadi ho gaye.....aab mujhe sakoon hoga......

Kasak:very funny.....Imaan ye bhi na.....wase Imaan we'll miss u...

Imaan:mai bhi tum logo ko yaad karo gi.....aur subse zada Armaan ko.....

Armaan chup betha hota hai....apne ankho mai ansoo liye.....
Akshat:bhaia......bhaiiii...

Armaan:hmmmmm.....

Akshat:kaha kho gaye...

Armaan:kahe nahi......
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Imaan ki widaii bhi ho jaate hai...wo apne ghar chali jaate hai.......
.....
In Armaan;s room......

Armaan:kyun imaan kyun......kyun tum mujhe smjh nahi paye......kyun in ankho se tumne wo sachai nahi parhi........tum mere zindagi ho...mera jene ka maksad ho......phir bhi......kyun...

........
Imaan aur Angad ki shdai ko 2 months guzar jaate hain........wo apne duniya mai khush hote hai aur Armaan ne akeley jina sikh liya hota hai.....Imaan ki yaadon k sahare............(i know bohot jaldi ho gaya....)
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At Garewal Mansion...
Armaan apne files mai buzy hota hai aur akshat aur kasak bethay apne studies ka kuch discuss ker rahe hote hain......Veena bethi book parh rahe hote hai......tabhi fone ki bell hote hai......

Veena:mai dekhte hoon...

Veena:hello.....haan angad beta......

Armaan aik dum veena ki taraf dekhta hai.....
Veena(continues):haan beta.....haan......sachhhhh.....acha mubarak ho bohot......bohot hum aate hain...haan bye.....

Akshat:kia hua mama.....

Veena:angad ka fone tha ......us ne batya k Imaan pregnant hai.....wo loog city hos mai hain.....

Akshat n Kasak:wowwwwwwww........

Armaan get shock.....(aray yaar ayse he......)
.........
In HOSPITAL........
Veena:congratz beta...

Imaan:thanx aunty...

Veena:aab tumhey apna khiyal rakhna hoga...

Imaan smiles.....
Veena aur Angad baatien kerte hue bahar jaate hain........akshat aur kasak imaan ko congratz ker k bahar chale jaate hain.....aab sirf Armaan bachta hai,,,,,,

Armaan:congratz Imaan...

Imaan:thanx....

Armaan:tum khush ho.....

Imaan:haan Armaan.....aur tum tu jaante ho mujhe bachay kitney pasand hain.....aur tumhey bhi tu pasand haina,,,,,,

Armaan:haan pasand hai.....per.....

Imaan(cut his talk n says):per dosron k.....haina.....

Armaan smiles n says:haan.......

Imaan:chalo.....aik baat ka tu paata chala tum es ko pyar tu dogey...

Armaan:matlab........wase na dayta......

Imaan:haan kyun k angad ka haina.....

Armaan shocked:matlab??????

Imaan:mai tumhey achi tarha jaante hoon.....aik baat pochon...

Armaan:pocho....

Imaan:sach sach jawab do gay na.....

Armaan:tumse kabhi jhoot bola hai...

Imaan:haan.....Armaan .....do u luv me?????

Armaan get shocked...
Armaan:wat Imaan...ye tum.....

Imaan:sach sach bataooooo...mai jaante hoon tum mujhse pyar kertay ho...per aik baar tumharre moo se suna chahte hoon.....bolo na Armaan......

Armaan:haan kerta hoon bhoht khud se zada.....

Imaan:tu pheley kyun na bola.....

Armaan:phele keh dayta tu tum maan jaate...

Imaan:socha nahi kabhi......

Armaan:janta tha......magar aab tum angad ki ho........sirf uski...mere nahi hoo......nahi ho......(he crys.....)

Imaan:Armaan tum bohot achay ho.....bohot......

Armaan:tabhi tu tumhara dost hoon.....

Imaan:hmmmmm........
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Coming up:kise ka accident.....kise ki maut......kise ka saath........kise ka akela paan........kon hoga wo........
stay tunned.....4 more.....(hehehe)
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so frndz here da part
hope u all like it
do comments........
aab inshallah eid k baad ya kaal post karo gi.....
tc
luv u all
Mehreen.......

Edited by fakhra - 18 years ago

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Kia

@tarana08

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Posted: 18 years ago

#147

OMG u cont 😃
NO words
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my feelings 😭 😭
can't wait next part
Coming up:kise ka accident.....kise ki maut......kise ka saath........kise ka akela paan........kon hoga wo........
cont soon OK 😡
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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#148

mehru dear totally zabardast i loved it.. the twist in the tale was awesome yaar.. dear yeh taaliyaan tere liye as i don't have words to tell you tumne kitni achchi tarah se story shape kiya.... it was different it was nice.... fantastic... i always love ur writing.. 👏
👏
👏
ab tho shaddi ho gayi imman aur angad ki.. aur do mahine bhi guzar gaye.. & ab imaan is pregnant.. yeh tho achchi baat hain.. 😃
though i felt very bad for armaan & his akelapan... bechara..... 😭
imaan has asked armaan does he love her.. & armaan being a true friend has accepted his love.. that is the best part...& i love armaan even more for the friendship woh nibha raha hain.. he is the best.. 👍🏼
ab mehru yaar rahe tere coming up sawaal ke.. tho i have some answers.. my guess for your questions...
1)kise ka accident :- accident angad ka.......
2)kise ki maut:- angad
3)kise ka saath:- i don't know..may be drunk driver...
4)kise ka akela paan :- imaan ka akelapannn
5)kon hoga wo:- imaan will be alone...
waise dear mere pass do aur jawaab hain jiske sawaal tumne nahi pooche... aur woh hain...
1)kaun sahara dega :- armaan dega imaan ko sahara...
2)yeh accident kiski chaal :- i think... yeh hogi kripa ki chaal...
{just kissing 😆}
mehru please tell me yeh question answer round aur mere guesses tumhe kaise lage... 😆
continue soon...as me want to know ki kya mere guess sahi hain... please do continue soon.. me waiting eagerly for the next part.. 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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mehreen/sadaf

@fakhra

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: sun_423
mehru dear totally zabardast i loved it.. the twist in the tale was awesome yaar.. dear yeh taaliyaan tere liye as i don't have words to tell you tumne kitni achchi tarah se story shape kiya.... it was different it was nice.... fantastic... i always love ur writing.. 👏
👏
👏
ab tho shaddi ho gayi imman aur angad ki.. aur do mahine bhi guzar gaye.. & ab imaan is pregnant.. yeh tho achchi baat hain.. 😃
though i felt very bad for armaan & his akelapan... bechara..... 😭
imaan has asked armaan does he love her.. & armaan being a true friend has accepted his love.. that is the best part...& i love armaan even more for the friendship woh nibha raha hain.. he is the best.. 👍🏼
ab mehru yaar rahe tere coming up sawaal ke.. tho i have some answers.. my guess for your questions...
1)kise ka accident :- accident angad ka.......
2)kise ki maut:- angad
3)kise ka saath:- i don't know..may be drunk driver...
4)kise ka akela paan :- imaan ka akelapannn
5)kon hoga wo:- imaan will be alone...
waise dear mere pass do aur jawaab hain jiske sawaal tumne nahi pooche... aur woh hain...
1)kaun sahara dega :- armaan dega imaan ko sahara...
2)yeh accident kiski chaal :- i think... yeh hogi kripa ki chaal...
{just kissing 😆}
mehru please tell me yeh question answer round aur mere guesses tumhe kaise lage... 😆
continue soon...as me want to know ki kya mere guess sahi hain... please do continue soon.. me waiting eagerly for the next part.. 😃