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Posted: 11 years ago
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luv the story


update second part soon
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Hello Shello peeps...!!! Plss...Plsss mere upar ghussa mat hona... I know I'm so damn late... But seriously mere paas reason bhi hai... Abhi mere class tests chal rahe hai aur upar se I'm having high fever, cough and cold... Aur fir 31st se semesters hai... I'm seriously hell busy... Aaj mujhe high fever hai... But still for u all I wrote this chap... I know I'm late so I have wrote the long chap... I hope u all will like it...!!! Plsss forgive me if u all think its not good at all coz I wrote it in hurry and I'm having fever... So hope that u all will enjoy it...!!! Here u all go...!!! Enjoy...!!!

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Part 2

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Taani's POV

"Ok Taani...!! I'm leaving now... Main shayad aaj late aaunga as I have an important meeting...!!!" Rey said as he completed his breakfast and wiped his hands with the tissue... He has his own dance academy... It's been 2 years since he have his own academy... And it's really going great... "Ok Rey...!! No problem..." I said as I too wiped my hands after my breakfast... "Do u want me to drop u at ur work place...??" He asked as he took his bag and was searching for his car keys near TV...

I smiled at this and looked on the dining table... He left his keys on the table and is searching there... I took the keys from there and went behind him... "Rey...!!" I called out slowly when I went behind him... And stood very close to him... He stopped his searching and turned around to look at me... I probably looked at his expression as he stood straight... That showed he was shocked with the proximity we had... But I looked into his eyes... They attracted me the most... I got lost in them... His eyes talked the most... His eyes told the most... His eyes portrayed the most... Love, care, respect, concern, and what not... His eyes showed that he too craved for love... Which I guess he wants from me but never showed it to me... I was totally lost in his eyes... In that unconscious state I took hold of his hand...

Rey was the first one who broke the eye contact... Then after few seconds I too came to my sense... There was a awkward silence between us... I looked here and there... Then my eyes fell on our hand... I took hold of his hand without my sense... I looked up to see his reaction... I saw him looking at our hand confusingly... Then I left his hand... And took one step back as we were really and dangerously very close... "Voh...voh ac...actually...actually aap apne car keys dining table pe hi chod diye the... So wahi dene aayi thi...!!!" I said as I stammered badly and looked here and there to avoid eye contact with him... I handed him his car keys..."Thanks..." He took them and again there was an awkward silence between us...

After few seconds, to break the awkwardness Rey asked casually "So, do u want me to drop u at ur work place...???" "No Rey...!!! Actually aaj main half an hour late jaungi...As abhi aur meeting ke liye kuch preparations baki hai so main apne aap chali jaungi... U don't worry about it...!!!" I said as I smiled to him... He too smiled back and said "Ok...!!! So drive safely... Main abhi nikalta hun... So aaj late ho jayega so don't be scared... maine mom ko bol diya hai... Shayad voh aajaye... I don't know just ask her if u want it ...OK???" He said... He cares for me so much... I'm really so lucky..."Ok Rey...!!! U just concentrate on ur meeting... Mere bare me maat socho...!!! I'll be fine...!!!" I assured him with a smile on my face... "Ok then bye... I'm getting late...!!" He said and left...

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"So what's up madam...!!! Kya socha tumne...??!!" Sharon, my best friend plus my partner in my business, asked me as she took the seat just in front of me after we completed our meeting, which went successful, and came back to my cabin... "Kis bare me...???" I asked her as I was doing some final work of the presentation... "Madam don't be so innocent... U exactly know what I mean...!!" She said making me confuse... I closed the laptop ajar and looked at her... "Shar I seriously don't know what u r talking about...!!" She came forward and hit the table lightly and said irritated "Ok fine...!!! Main tere feelings k bare me puch rahi hun Rey ke liye... Kya socha tune iss bare me...???" She looked curious for my answer...

"Actually Shar... I think... I do feel...something for him...!!!" I said shyly and blushing a little... "I so knew it...!!!" She squealed with a wide smile on her face... "But madam sirf feel se kuch nai hota... U have to be sure u know... Maine sahi me Rey ki ankho me dekha hai... He really loves u...!!!" She again reminded me... I drifted to the morning scene... When I looked into his eyes... I saw love in them... I actually see it every time I look into his eyes... I guess Shar is right he really do loves me... This thought made me blush...

"Haye dekho toh someone here is getting red like tomato...!!!" Shar teased me and brought me back to the world... "Stop it Shar...!!!" I said trying to hide my blush... "Ok... Ok...!! But madam kya socha yeh feel kya hai...??!!" She again asked me... "Shar I really don't know... Main unke liye feel karti hun... But kya I don't know... I don't want to hurt him also u know after knowing that he loves me...!!!" I said while getting sad that why am I not able to confirm my feelings...

"Ok fine... Tu sad maat ho...!!! I have an idea... Jisse tujhe confirm ho jayega tere feelings k baare me...!!!" She said assuring me... I looked at her and asked "And what is that...???" "Ok... First take a deep breath...!!!" Shar instructed me... "Arey but why...???" I asked confused that what is she going to let me do... "Do what I told u to do...!!!" She ordered... "Ohhhkk...!!!" I said... "So take a deep breath first...!!!" I looked at her and shrugged and did how she said, no sorry ordered me to do... "And now close ur eyes...!!!" I closed my eyes... "And now put ur right hand on ur heart...!!! And don't u dare open ur eyes... Just do like I said...!!!" She instructed me and I did the way she said... "Now go to ur dream world and see what ur heart shows u...!!!" She said and I did the way she said...

I went to my dream world... I saw the first picture my heart showed... It was blur at first but then after few seconds it got clear... It was none other than Rey... He was smiling... His smile meant whole world for me right now... And his eyes... His eyes spoke volumes... those eyes in which I can get lost for my whole life... "I love u...!!!" was the words I heard him say... Those three magical words... Those words brought blush on my face...

"Ok madam stop now and get back to the world...!!!" I heard Shar and came back to this world... There was atill blush which adored my face... "Hmmhmmm...!!! Ur blush is saying volumes...!!! But I want to hear it from u...!!!" Shar said getting eager... "So tell me what u say and what u feel...??!!" She asked as she leaned more towards the table... A desperate girl... "I saw his smiling face...!!! I don't know how to describe it but I felt luckiest person of this world... And then he said those three magical words which exactly made me blush...!!!" I said and she squealed... "Wow yr...!!! I know the answer...!!! But u say it by urself now...!!! Come on say it Taani...!!!" Shar said getting desperate to hear my answer... "I... Lo... Love... Rey...!!!" I said and looked down to hide my blush which sweared that it will not leave my face... And the next moment I heard a loud squeal from her and she enveloped me in a tight hug... "Shar... I...Cant... Breath...!!!" "Oh so sorry dear...!!! But it's so great u know...!!!" She again squealed as she pulled away from the hug...

"So when r u planning to tell ur feelings to him Taani...!!!" She asked after few minutes later we got seated... "Actually I was thinking why not tomorrow...!!! Kal humari anniversary bhi hai...so...!!!" I said with a blush on my face... "Hmm hmm...!!! Someone is getting so desperate ha...!!!" Shar said making me blush more... "Stop it yr...!!!" I throw a pencil on her... "Ok ok sorry...!!! But it's a great idea u know...!!! I suggest u to go with it...!!!" She said...

"Acha Shar... Yeh jo exercise tune abhi mujhe karvaya tha... Voh tujhe kaise pata...??? As I know u tut oh kabhi in sab me interested nai thi...!!!" I asked Shar after sometime while closing my file... "Actually... Mujhe yeh exercise... Swayam ne sikhaya...!!!" She said blushing... Yup she is married to best friend of Rey... And also now he is good friend with me too... It's been 1 and a half year for their marriage now... They r happy couple... Now me and Rey will also be a happy couple after tonight... "Hmmm hmm...!!! Someone blushing like tomato here...!!" I teased her...

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I got back home at 6 in the evening... I usually get back to the home at 5, but today I had to do plannings so I went for shopping... This is usually Rey's time of coming home... But as he said he will be late today so I have time to do my preparations... I also talked to mom and told her about everything... She is more than happy and wished me good luck and said that she will meet us tomorrow evening... I went to kitchen and kept some bags over there... And took the two bag and went to my, oh sorry our bedroom and kept the bags over the bed... I went to the rest room and got freshen up...

After 15 minutes I came back in my night dress and started preparing for the surprise... I hope that Rey will like it... I prepared whatever I had to prepare in bedroom first... I had little work here so I completed it soon... And then left for the kitchen... I made some dishes for our diner tonight and also prepared cake for the surprise... I then went to the place where I wanted to celebrate our anniversary... It took half an hour for me to prepare there... After I completed it I looked around and felt satisfied... Now just I want that Rey will it...!!!

It's been 8 by now... But still Rey dint show up yet... he said he will be little late but now it's been 2 hours and he dint show up... Now I'm scared... What happened to him...?? Why dint he show up yet...?? I looked at the landline and called him... It ringed but he dint pick up... I again called him and this time again he dint pick up... I again called and this time the call got disconnected... This scared the hell out of me... I again called and now it told out of coverage area... Now what should I do... I should call Swayam and ask... he too went for meeting with Rey... They both work together so he will surely know it... I searched for my phone in the living room but I dint get it... I searched the kitchen but it was not there too... I went to the place where I made preparation but it was not there also... It irritated me... I went to my bedroom to look there... And I found it there on the bed...

I sighed and took it soon in my hand... I searched in contacts and got Swayam's number... I dialed it... "Pick up the phone Swayam...!!!" After the last ring someone picked it up... "Hello... Hello Swayam...!!!" I said hurriedly... "Haa Taani... Sorry yr... Actually got stuck in traffic aur phone silent pe tha toh iss liye late uthaya...!!! So what happened...???" He first apologized and then asked... "Swayam, rey tumhare saath hai kya...???" I asked getting worried... "Nai... Voh toh 1 hour pehle hi nikal gaya tha as uska kaam ho gaya tha... Aur mujhe kuch work aur tha so main abhi nikla hun... Kyun kya huva...?? Rey abhi tak ghar nai pahucha...???" He asked as now his voice also seemed full of concern... "No Swayam... Abhi tak Rey nai aaye...!!! Now I'm scared Swayam... Rey ka call cut gaya tha aur abhi lag bhi nai raha hai... Rey thik toh honge na...???" I asked as now I got scared and slowly my eyes started brimming... "Of course Taani... He'll be fine...!!! Plzz don't be scared... Main dekhta hun voh kaha hai... And let u inform OK...!!! Plzzz u don't panic now..." He tried to calm me down but I can't... He hung up... Now tears were coming out of my eyes... I don't want to loose him...

After few minutes I heard the door bell ring... I felt my heart stop beating... I rushed down to see if it Rey... I went and opened the door and saw my life standing there... He is perfectly fine... But a little tired... But I'm happy to see him... Now tears rolled down my eyes more... "Hey hey...!!! Kya huva...?? Tum ro kyun rahi ho...??" He asked as he came and cupped my face and wiped my tears but they r adamant and fell more... "Stop crying Taani...!!! And let me what happened...???" He asked again... I looked at him and then next moment I hugged him tightly... He dint hug me back so I hugged him more tightly and then he kept his arms around me and patted my back... "Where...where were...u...till now...???" I asked between my sobs still hugging him... "I messaged u right that I will be late as my car got major problem...!!! Tumne padha nai...???" He said while pulling away from the hug... "I dint get the message...!!! Agar milta toh main itna pareshan nai hoti...!!!" I said while getting annoyed... "Ok...!! Now plzz stop crying yr...!!! Dekho main aa gaya hun na...!!!" He said and I calmed down... "Par aap phone kyun nai utha rahe the aur fir phone kyun cut kar duya tha...???" I asked him... "Actually mera phone silent pe tha... Aur jab maine dekha toh battery khatam ho chukka tha...!!! So sorry for that...!!!" He apologized... I calmed myself and said "Ok aap jao aur fresh ho jao main diner laga deti hun...!!!" I said and let him inside... He went directly to the room... I called Swayam and informed him about Rey...

End of Taani's POV

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No one's POV

It was 11 o' clock now and Rey slept soon... He was actually tired today because he walked a long distance... Taani got the chance and she made the last moment preparation... After 30 minutes she was done with everything... She went to the room and saw Rey sleeping peacefully... She adored him... But within few seconds she came back to the world and left a note beside him on the table... She went inside the rest room and soon changed into the saree of Rey's fav color red... Within 10 minutes she got ready and went from there...

After 5 minutes, in bedroom... There was a loud buzz sound all around the room... This disturbed Rey... He slowly opened his eyes while irritated and looked around for the source of sound... He saw here and there and found nothing... Taani was also not there... "Taani...!!!" He called out loud... But he got no response... He was getting irritated by the sound and thought to stop it first... He looked for the sounds direction...It came from behind the couch... He went and searched behind it and saw it was alarm... He stopped it and kept it on the table... Again the sound came... He looked below the bed and there was another clock... He stopped it too... And kept it on the table... Now this irritated him... His sleep now all got over... Again the sound started... He looked at his bed side alarm clock... He thought he dint put any alarm so how come it started ringing... He went there and stopped it... When he kept it back he saw a note kept over there... He took it and read it...

"I'm so sorry for the disturbance Rey...!!! But its important... I have planned something for u... Will u please come to the back yard...!! I'm waiting there for u...!!!"

He got confused that what it must be...?? He knew its Taani coz he can identify her handwriting so well... He closed the note and kept it there... He went down stairs and went to the back yard... As he entered there... He got totally mesmerized looking all around... It was so perfectly set... A table with a cake on it and all around rose petals were spread... The table was amazing set... He went near it... He saw the cake and read what was wrote on it... He got shocked as it was written "HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TO U"... He had no words for it...

Soon he felt soft hands on his chest and someone hugging him from back... He knew its Taani and this made him go to 9th cloud... "Happy Anniversary Rey...!!!" She said softly... Her voice was so sweet that he totally got lost in it... He holds her hand and brought her in front of him so that she came face to face with him... She was looking down... And of course its obvious that she was blush... This made Rey more than happy... As today, after so long, he is seeing his love blush for him... He had never felt so lucky as he is feeling like now... He looked at her and saw she was wearing his fav saree... The saree which he brought for her a month back, but he had no guts to give her by him, so he asked his mother to give it to her...

He kept one finger below her chin and made her look up... As he looked at her face, the only word came out of his mouth was "Beautiful"... He had never seen such a beautiful creature, ever in his life... He felt world's luckiest person for being the husband of such a beautiful woman... Taani slowly opened her eyes... They both soon got lost in each other... After few minutes, Taani hugged him tightly and said "I LOVE U REY...!!!"... Those three magical and beautiful words when came out of her mouth... He felt like listening to an awesome rhythmic song... He slowly came out of it and hugged her back and said "I LOVE U TOO TAANI...!!! In fact a lot...!!!" He was smiling widely by now... All his tiredness left from his body... Actually it left the time Taani touched him... He hugged her tightly caressing her back... Here Taani too felt out of this world when Rey said those magical words... She never thought these words will sound so good to her... She too smiled widely and closed her eyes to capture this moment forever with her and hugged him tightly...

After long time they broke the hug but dint leave each other... Rey cupped her face and kissed her forehead and wished her "Happy anniversary Taani...!!! This is the best day I would have ever had in my life...!!!" He smiled to her... She too smiled back... She got lost in his eyes... But after few seconds she felt his hot breath near her lips... She looked and saw he was coming close to her face, actually near her lips to kiss her... She wanted to kiss him but there was something left to do... She kept her hand on his heart and stopped him... Rey opened his eyes in shock and looked at her... "Umm... Rey... Lets first cut cake...??!!" She said blushing... He smiled and took her there...

They came near the table... The cake was perfectly set in between the table... It looked so beautiful... Rey made her stand in front... He stood behind her and kept his chin on her shoulder... This position of them made Taani more blush... Rey saw this and kissed her cheeks... This made her more blush... Rey smiled at her... He took the knife from the table and gave it to her... She hold it... Then her hold her hand... "Happy anniversary Taani...!!!" Rey said and they cut the cake... Soon they fed cake to each other...

"Rey 1 sec I'll be back...!!!" Taani said and ran inside the house... Rey stood there confused... After few minutes she came back with her hands behind her... "Where were u Taani...?? U said 1 sec and u took more than years...!!!" He said with a pout when Taani came and stood in front of her... "Awww...!!! Sorry Rey...!!! But u know u look so cute when u pout...!!!" She said and pulled his cheek... "And u look cute and beautiful when u blush...!!!" Rey said and pulled her cheeks and she blushed... "Ok Rey...!!! Mujhe pata hai aap mujhe bahut pehle se pyaar karte hai... Aur maine anjane me aapko hurt kiya...!!! So I'm sorry for that Rey and this is for u...!!" She said and moved her hand towards him which had a gift for him... He looked at her and the gift box... He took it from her hand... He looked at it amused... He looked at her and she was smiling... He unwrapped the gift slowly so that it doesn't get crumpled, coz he want to keep it with him as her first ever gift... Taani smiled looking at him as he was unwrapping... Soon he unwrapped it and looked that it was a red box... He looked at it confused... Then he opened it and saw a beautiful waist watch which had a heart shape on it... He smiled looking at it... He took the watch in his hand and saw that their names were craved in the heart shape... He smiled more widely... He kept the box on the table and opened the watch... He was shocked as he saw inside... There were their pics in the watch on either side... He had tears in his eyes as looked at it... It showed how much she loved him... He looked at her with teary eyes but a smile on his face and thanked her...

Taani saw tears in his eyes and moved close to him... Cupped his face and kissed the tears off his cheeks as they were rolling down... She looked at him and nodded her head saying no tears... He slid her hands on her bare waist and hugged her tightly... Taani too kept her hands around his neck... They were feeling as if in this whole world only they r present in this world... Like this they lived their life happily together...

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So guys here I end my TWO SHOT...!!! Hope that u all loved this chap and this two shot...!!!

PS : Don't expect updates from me till jan as I have semesters from 31st...!!!

PPS : If I get time I'll surely update my other works...!!!

PPPS : Plzzz hit like and comment big as I wrote this chap for u all even though I'm not at all well...!!! Plss don't leave any RES post...!!!

So here I bid bye to u all...!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awesome update
sharon made taani reaise her feelings
taanis surprise for rey superb
amd confession
loved it to the core
take care of ur health 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Prassi,I so loved part1.One could nvr bn mr blesd wn thr partner trns ot to be d 1 thy lvd*blisful*! I guesd d shock gvn by T before hand! Glad that R is such an amazing undstndg hubby.1 r d other day,love wil defo blosm in T's hrt,aftral who cn resist hm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
res/unres
amazing update
taarey eyelock scene taani totally lost in rey
liked rey concern n love for taani
finally taani realize her feeling thanks to sharon she is the best
taani surprise was fab
then rey didnt pick call i was also scared just like taani
taarey hug was lovely
then alarm scene was cute
rey loved taani surprise so much
finally they confess with eachother their love
loved taarey moments at last
thanks for pm
get well soon n best of luck for semeters
keep writing more
Edited by SWEETPOOJA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
I love this happy ending
Taani finally realizing her love for Rey was amazing
I love all her preparation she did to make their anniversary and her confession beautiful
Taani confessing moment was magical, I love Rey reaction
Mind blowing chapter
Feel better soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
beautiful update
taani realised her love wow ...love it
taani preparation super ...
taarey confess her love ...lovely


ps- thanks dear for update ...
plz take care ...
best of luck for semeter
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Awesome update... Finally,it took ages for her say it...
All the best for your exam
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
P2,amazing! Sha boasting T to realize hr lv fr R.Awe,T ws so worried wn he dnt pick d cl n tat teary hug ws so gd.Finaly,d surprise by T to R mkng it specl wit 3 magical wrds! Lvly!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Lovely update. . .😊

I was all the while blushing reading it. . .☺️

You have beautifully penned each and every part. . .👏 👏

Awe, she was so worried for Rey. . .

Love you for including Sharon and Swayam. . . 😛
Though they had only a small role. . . but it was adorable. . .😉

Loved the way Sharon said. . . Swayam taught her that exercise . . . 😆

Loved the small romantic moment of TaaRey. . .
especially the cake cutting part. . . 😳 😳

Keep writing. . .
Stay blessed

A tight hug 🤗 from me for such an awesome work . . .😃

Thanks for the pm 😊

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