Simply Irresistible (Shlok and Astha FF) (chp 10) (pg23)

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Aaah thaaat was Supeeer enjoyed it alooot

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

I really like ur story .it has a different concept .love it

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

awesome ending
loved it and enjoyed reading it
looking forward for your other work

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latha_555

@latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

brilliant ending to what was a fantastic story. its just sad that it has ended:( The ending really was well written and i liked they way he said it was hard for him to do what he did, and that he loved her. I like how you explained how he was feeling during the show and that it was a last minute decision to say no...and i never would have thought that he was worried about the class differences. A very good story indeed:)

On the bright side at least we have your other story to look forward to, and i must say thats equally as interesting:)

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Serviana

@Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Awww beautiful end and beautiful story!!! Thanks a lot for this...looking forward to more of your stories🤗

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

it was a really nice ending, thank you. Hope you write more stories

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537048

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

it was so nice and interesting

this shlok and astha are totally different from watever i hv read so far

they are adorable

so shlok came and apologise to her and confessed dat he loves her dat was so sweet of him and totally out of character love does change people and astha she also confessed dat she loves him

i really liked ur story it was little hatke

and u r a wonderful writer

thanks for this story

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Munni

@munnihyderabad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Dear Member,

Your FF has reached 15 pages, which automatically triggers the new FF rules posted in the forum, IMP: Regarding Fan Fictions - NEW RULE, based on which, we have to move this FF from IPKKND...EBP Forum to the Fan Fiction Forum.

Thank you for understanding

Please feel free to PM for any further questions

Best Regards

IPKKND...EBP Dev Team

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Aww it was amazing
A lovely ending

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AshKo

@AshKo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
That was a perfect ending not too fast but not too slow. It ended at the right time, im sad this FF ended but glad that it ended on such a sweet note. It was a fantastic story. I loved every bit of bit. I fell in love with the characters. Great work!! Im so glad I read this and I hope.you definitely write more soon. This was the best and the most unique story on Ashlok ive read so far . Thank you for an awesome story. 👏 😊

Thank you 😛