Kriyaansh OS - not this time Kriya

res...
unres..

First toh welcome back after a long time and that to with OS...

As if i didn't knew about this one...😆 😉

chalo ab kaam pe aati hun..

I always loved ur writing that u know and this it is not an exception to..

I liked the turmoil of rey and his every feeling you described during recall time of both the ladies dialogues..

and the way you showed kriya's hesitance in song sequence her helplessness... my.. tu humesha aisa hi karti hai... emotional karke chodti hai mujhe...

Or haan mereko samjh aaya ki rey na konsa step kiya so ur explanation of chereo is good there...🤣

Again a power pact usage of words like "Not this time" this phrase stole the lime light..

Mereko ek baat iss Os mein sab se achi yeh lagi there was no explanations, no drama about past... and the way rey said he is ready to put past behind and wanna start fresh was something which is different in this return OS...

love u for writing this munchkin...❤️

brilliantly put in words... fantastic...👏👏


love-
pallavi.

PS: do start up with UD mate... _/\_ dekh main haath jodne ka signe bhi banana sikha hai ab toh shuru kar usse...pleashhh...😳

well firstly you really wrote it well 👍🏼

amazing os i loved it totally!!!

Mishu :)

Yaar this is so damn heart touching. I so loved the way you depicted.

Laced with emotions.

Such a bliss.

I loved it.

Awww mish...
It was such a lovlly os...
Loved it...
Loved the way u described the whole senario n reys feelings... Haiiiyyyeee... Tooo gud...
Loved it...

Hey Beautiful work...

I never expected that somebody can express emotions so nicely and they all were real...

I liked the way you showed inner fight of various thoughts in his mind and reality...

Keep up the good work...and i am really glad that Kriya is back now and we all can have the real dil dosti dance now...

Thank you for pm...i am glad that you considered me worth reading your work...

Pratik...

Hey i just loved it. Very few os had been written on rey's lonliness and his pain. i loved it becuse everyone finding faults in him but no one want too see his pain.

that was a wonderful and marvelous os... loved it