T2: Ek Aur Zindagi..(Epilogue:page 130)

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Harisree001

@Harisree001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hats off you di..
The real emotions of a ma, beta , potha...
Ma-Beta rishtha was well written.
Adi knew about dadi now. Again Arj-Adi childish acts.
Arjun ke papa ithna zidd kyun kar rahe ho?
In sab ke beech mein Aayi helpless ho jathi he. Feeling sad for her. Hope she will be fine soon.
Thanks for the pm. Cont soon.

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

so nicee and emotional ...😊... i hope sab sahi aur accha hoo ...🤗 continue soon 👍🏼

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Amazing update !!!!!!!!!!
Dadi Arjun and adi scene was so cute
wow adi knows she ishis own dadi
always a mother should suffer between dad and son!!!poor soul
loved the update
do Cont soon
thanks for PM dr

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Faruheer

@Faruheer

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Awesome
Every emotion is written very nicely
I will gv u title expression queen of words
Thanx for pm
Update soon

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@MriduB

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Kinna emotional part tha Aayi-Arjun waala! :(

Awesome as usual!

Continue soon!

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

awesome update
the emotions were well written
Arjun n his aayi's part was heart touching n emotional
Arjun-Adi morning masti n tickling session was nice
poor kid he was really upset seeing his dadi going away
while Arjun was no better
loved how aayi stood at Arjun's side n told adi that his dad wasn't wrong
and didn't need to say sorry
the past moments when Arjun packed his things while his aayi stood there
was emotional one
her emotions were well described
and Mr.Rawte again standing on his ego's side n telling aayi to go away to her son
was really bad on his part
eager to see the two Rawtes meeting
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Awwsssmmm part
loved it
cont sooon
thanks for PM

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

beautifull update heli.!
all the POVs were nicely written...
specially i loved the convo between aayi and arjun!

i really pity Mrs.Rawte! this lady has always been suffering betn the ego fights of her husband and son...

one scene frm th update stole away my mind!
it has to be
Adi's innocent advice to his dad to apologise to his dada...and so casually he said...wo bhi aapko maaf kar denge...
so cute!

Mr.Rawte seems such a heartless person...
hope nothing happens to aayi!

continue soon heli

love
Aisha

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

i was just lost reading this update...brilliantly written and so very well conveyed all the emotions...hats off to you girl you really know well to play with emotions...

each and every line conveyed a different emotion but not a single pinch more or less...u have done a great job..

i am really looking forward to the dad-son convo...plz update soon...

thanks for the pm