Arhi SS:Ab Na Jaa epilogue pg115 (*COMPLETED)

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Xpress-
Loved the start...interesting

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
Amazing start
do continue soon
pm me whenever u update

Originally posted by: AimmyLovesSobti
Beautiful!
Liked it a lot!
Plz continue soon!

Originally posted by: hrudaya
nice start continue soon

Originally posted by: pari_goyal
awesome...

thanks guys

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Amazing n very interesting start
The update was sad, poor Arnav he is in pain because his Khushi is also.
Looking forward to the next update eagerly

thanks. dear
jaldi try karongi

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: pup03
a very nice start.. khushi in coma for four years.. but you have taken a breath away when read the line that she closed her eyes never to open again.. loved the start.. 😃khushi will be alright.. she has to for her arnav..

thanks for pm😊

thanks dear
hahah i know dat line was scary

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: meniranjana00
GOOD...ONE...

Originally posted by: ravalisharma06
beautiful...

Originally posted by: Aisha1996
Awesome start 😊
Continue it soon :)

Originally posted by: barsana
hey, nice one... do continue...😊

Originally posted by: farru786
Nice prologue
Hope khushi gets well soon 😭
Loved arnavs care,love and concern

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed
AWESOME UPDT

thanks guys n srry fr making u cry

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

really a heart touching story

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: lalarukh
awe sarah its awesome...beautifully written...i feel like crying...thank u so much for saving her although in coma but still she is there in his room on there bed...

thanks dear
i know had i killd her y guyz wud hav killd me

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: chavvi16
man that was touching
she is there with him physically
but of course not there with him really
poor thing is waiting for the day she talks to him laughs with him fights with him
and hopefully that day will come soon
was afraid she didnt make it
but she did though not how he wanted it
ahh this is touching piece for sure
cheers for pm

thanks dear
its f frst tym m tryn sumthn emotional n seems lik it workd

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ..Divya..
Nice start

Originally posted by: yappingduck
simply fabulous
loved it/

Originally posted by: nadiafarjana
amazing start
do continue soon...

Originally posted by: sondaryalakshmi
Very emotional start.

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
great start😳loved it to the core
eagerly waiting for the nxt part
thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: sweetlife
nice start... continue soon.

thanks dearies

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: dumas
loved the start interesting concept so sad she is in a coma hope she wakes up and remember him thanks for the pm very emotional so sad

thanks dear n well dis pic is in my banner too

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Sarah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan
god u just scared me ...for one sec i thought khushi was no more ,,uff relief she is in coma ,,but pheww i can imagine condition and his feelings,,,

god he just got bowled by heeri angelic smile,,,one has to ofcourse...

intresting...

update next

thanks dear
i know i scared wid dat sentence
i will update soon