ArHi SS: ThE BrOkEn BaNgLeS *Chap 04* Pg 100

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Interesting concept...

Loved the first jhalak of the story...

Awesome...Please continue soon..

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Monalisaa

@Monalisaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Beautiful start, the story is different n would love to ream more. Its quite different from what i have read on this forum. And if this is ur first writng then ur just too good with words n I love it, do keep up the good job.

Please do pm if u can, would love to read more.

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

oh my God i cant wait more yarr ..

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shweta

@dhimmersarhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

nice prologue...
eagerly waitting for next chap
update soon...
thanx for the pm...

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sindhu

@misscrazyfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

looks interesting prologue and teaser...

when u update pm me

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

amazing teaser 👏 👏 👏 👏👏

update soon dear😃

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aleezay

@aleezay

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

okay first all im waiting for the story to start ... vvv good start nd that was so sweet of you for the pm girl ❤️
now cming to story ... ye thud slap ti ... if dat was * ouch * ASR ki ego kya ho ga plus that dialog of arnav for khushi ... YYY ???
do update soon i'm waiting !!

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Anu

@soapopera

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

sounds really interesting...for one sec...when u said khushi was a widow in t first chap...i was bowled, i taught arnav passed away! is tat possible to write a story after tat?

and then i came to know it was his brother...hoping to read more of this...please PM me when u update next...pleaseee