VIRMAN FF: #2 YOU ARE MY LOVE UPDATED FINAL PART PG 73(14.4.14) - Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Unres
Sorry dear for being late. .
Now abt update n story..
Love these updates. ..
Very beautifully u expressed each n every part as well as emotions. ..
Frst love shruyi outburst on virat ...thw the way she take stand for manvi...
Manvi 's past was dreadful. ..feeling more hurt for our angle. ..
Virat deserve all this outburst n angry behavior ...
Manvi's conditions. ...bathroom scene bring tears in my eyes. ..but love viren yelling on virat $part...
Manvi 's attitude n her behavior wd virat was fully justified. ...
But love their reunion n virat' s surprise for manvi...dhe deserve best...
Totally outstanding update. ..
Abt epiloug. ..
Its an amazing part gull of sweetness n bright future of the virman 's sweet family. ...

Abt story. ..
Really fabulous story...
Enjoying n loving it core of the heart. ...
Its beautiful journey of virat n manvi. ...
The two souls..who's different frm each other in every way. ...but destiny made them for each other. ..
Starting wd hate,,,arrogance frm virat side n caring n loving frm manvi side...
But in last they became virman bczof their love ,,,care..
Its outstanding journey in which you made us part of it...
Thanks alot dear such an amazing story n ur regular pm...
We going to miss it alot..
But also waiting for ur comeback wd an amazing wrk. ..
Keep rocking dear...
Best wishes for your bright future ...
Tc
Keep smiling





thank u so much googlu...
ur long commens always encourages me dear...
I'll be back in our nia's new show...
keep smiling googlu... take care🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuharini




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thank u so much googlu...
ur long commens always encourages me dear...
I'll be back in our nia's new show...
keep smiling googlu... take care🤗</font>
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Will waiting. ..dear.. 😛 😛 😛
Thanks for replying. .. 😛
take care u too dear... ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for being late to comment
loved the ending. will miss this ff though
loved the way virat was trying to bring maanvi's anger down
loved how she revealed her pregnancy to him
the whole journey of virman in this ff was so lovely
loved this ff a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nrithyao

sorry for being late to comment
loved the ending. will miss this ff though
loved the way virat was trying to bring maanvi's anger down
loved how she revealed her pregnancy to him
the whole journey of virman in this ff was so lovely
loved this ff a lot



it's ok dear...
very happy to see ur comments...
thank you soo much for this...
take care🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello Abi

Iam back...Sorry for making u to wait for me for such a long time as always😳😳...Abi i read all updates..but i dint feel so ki iam reading final parts of this story...i just felt ki iam reading just one of ur updates😛...u ended this story so well..its just Perfect!!!!👏...n i saw in many comments too ki others also felt the same...Congratulations Abi😃...i know u hate sorry..but this time u have to accept ok😊...


chalo now my comments on these parts...😛

Part27

Aww..my Mannu is guilty😔..haan she dint do it intentionally😔... she was scared ki she will loose Virat if he came to know about truth😭😭😭...n her pleadings seeing his pic😭😭😭... n Virat told Manvi d happiest news ki Vmaa getting well😛..n our Angel forgot her pain n was happy hearing this news😃..n that tearwala dialogue made me speechless😊...loved that scene to the core..was simply Superb👏👏👏...like Virat said it happened bcoz of our Angel Mannu😃..Agree with him😎...n she went to Hospital n met Maa n changed her number so that Preeti wnt disturb her..n they came back to India.. Shruti too..Trio ki masti n happiness😆...n Devil Preeti saw my Virman living happily😡😡😡..she will plan something😔...Preeti did text Virat..n Mannu started suspecting Virat again😒...n Virat went to meet that devil..Loved Virat's reply to that devil Preethi😃.. n Mannu was happy hearing Virat's words n she went..n Preethi almost succeded in her plan..n here Virat's Condition..too scary..again Virat Misunderstood our Mannu..n that gardenwala scene..he started hating her😭😭😭..Abi i loved these lines ..so true..😊

"Hiding things to our loved ones is not gonna be the solution for a problem. It'll mess up our lives even more. It deepens the sores and give us only hurt in return."


Part 28i


Every one came from pooja..but they dint find Mannu in home .. par they got scared after seeing angry n frustrated behaviour of Virat 😔.. his anwers to their questions..were really very shocking😲😲..i toh hated him d most😡😡..my Mannu😭😭... par u once again succeeded Authorji👍🏼..kyunki it was really very amazing part Abi😛..n another girl our Mannu ki parchayi(shadow) Shruti..waah!😛.. her love n respect to Mannu..n her worry for Mannu n specially her bold ans n qstns to Virat was super se bhi upar👏👏👏... finally she made them understand ki our Mannu is innocent😊..Viren n Shruti went to search for Manvi..now Virat is guilty..n flash of her pleading face n words ringing in his mind😒...loved last bhabi-devar convo n this line of Jeevika 😊...


"you should make Manvi understand her evil plans and you both should live a successful life in front of her eyes happily."


Part28ii


nn.. Vmaa was hell worried about Manvi after reading her later n her words to Virat were much needed😭😭😭..she truely loves Manvi as her daughter n she did prove that😊...Mannu's letter was toh v emotional n Superb👏...in that letter our Mannu did accept her small mistake also😊...she was hurted but she was still caring her pati..n these lines toh heart touching lines for me...😭😭😭


"Don't worry for any thing Virat. Don't hurt your fists whenever you get angry over anybody, else it would be painful. And you can be very happy that you have no more Manvi here after."

Now he decided to do everything well n now he wanted to c her 😊..he called Mannu n Viren but no response..here Mannu was sitting under shower with closed eyes..she was in fainted state..she cried there for hours...n got fever 😭😭😭..but now Viren received Virat's call n told him about her..now Virat n his love,concern towards Manvi made us cry n love Virat again😳😛😭..but was happy ki Mannu is out of danger😃.. n Viren did inform family ki Mannu is safe...n Jiju- Saalis love for Mannu...n caressing her hair...that cute kiss..was really very nice...😳😛👏

Part 29

Wow Mannu wke up n saw Virat holding her hands possessively😳...n felt haapy for a sec par she got up to move away next second...N she has gone through so much😭..n he pleaded Manvi to forgive him😊..Mannu cant forgive him so easily.. Broken Virat n his support Viren😊..all stayed with Mannu except Virat..n he was repeatedly trying to talk her😃..n here Virat ka surprise n Shruti is with Virat😉😛...n that Shruti's drama to help Virat was cool😎...n her not uselesswala dialogue was super funny😆😆😆... whole scene was so cute n our Mannu ka nt scared of anyonewala dialogue😳😉😆..n that roadwale ViraMan ke dialogues toh Awesome👏👏👏..Virat's intentional hiding n Mannu's eyes searching for him😳😉...cuteee...n his fallingwala drama😳.. Manvi's care n eye lock😳😉...loved it..but Mannu is still angry with Virat babu n rejected him 😳..n Jeevika ka teasing session😉...n Mannu's Fall😳...n that dining tablewala part toh Amazing😆..Virat's Parantha eating n Mannu's Laugh seeing this..felt very happy😃..Thank u for such a lovely scene Abi😛..Virat went somewhere n Manvi was worried about it..all were acting like ki they dnt care about Virat😳..Yeh kya Our Mannu is Pregnent😲😲😲...Our Virman is coming😛😛😛.. n Mannu Wanted to share this with Virat😳..Virat called Mannu to give Surprise😛😉..like Virat said..Manvi first time did scold Virat😳..it was cute kyunki our Mannu is cute naa😳😛.. Aww..his surprise..Virat made Mannu to meet her family😊..it was emotional yet beautiful😛😭..loved each n every line..n that carwala scene was so romantic n that kiss😳☺️...n his second surprise..wow..in house all Welcomed Virman😛.. Virika's Godh bharai function got fixed..n masti..happy..happy day😃...Preethi is out of Manvi's life n will got her punishment😡😛.. n VirMan cornerwala Kiss fight😳😉 n his excitemnt after hearing ki he gonna become dad soon was Awesome 👍🏼 n whole family saw our Romantic VirMan n laughed n congratulated them😃..

Epilogue

What is this😲😲 VirMan became even more romantic n Virat naughtier😉😳...n that dining tablewala part😳..Good guy Virat😎..dnt dare again to mess With our Mannu😉..n that last pic toh Beautiful👍🏼...Chotisi VirMan Baby Girl Meera😛..Mannu ki parchai(mirror image hogi naa)..Such a cute name..❤️❤️❤️..

Thank u so much Abi😛 for such a Beautiful story...n All The Best For Ur Future Angel 👍🏼...


Haan Congratulatios new new Dazzelerji.. Celebrations..🥳👏...



Love U❤️

Take Care🤗

Edited by nia333 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuharini




it's k Pari doll...
now u have to type it from the begining na...
It's all becoz' of me... Sorry for wasting ur time this much dear...
take ur time... And I 'll wait for u like always
luv u tooo🤗



Abi thank u so much..😃
dnt u dare to ask me sorry again ok verna i wnt talk to u..😳
Aww...My Angel
🤗 ..
Mmuahhh...
❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi pari doll... finally my barbie doll commented!!! Yeah!!!
I am really happy to read it words...
U know Pari, I checked my ff daily whether you comment at least today... finally I got it now.

You can't understand how happy I am feeling right now... I saw ur comments 2 days before itself. But lil busy with my convocation & my dabba pc got repaired too... plzz don't take it wrong dolly.

I am commenting from my mobile & so can't give a detailed comment... plz try to understand dear...

I' ll comment u briefly after my pc got repaired...
Love u Pari doll...
Thank u sooo much for commenting & making the ff fulfilled valuable with ur comments...
Take care dolly🤗
Edited by madhuharini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuharini

Hi pari doll... finally my barbie doll commented!!! Yeah!!!

I am really happy to read it words...
Even iam happy seeing ur happiness Angel😛

U know Pari, I checked my ff daily whether you comment at least today... finally I got it now.
Aww😊..i saved some part of my comment in lappy n my sis gave it for servicing isiliye i commented late Abi.. 😳

You can't understand how happy I am feeling right now... I saw ur comments 2 days before itself. But lil busy with my convocation & my dabba pc got repaired too... plzz don't take it wrong dolly.
Aww..so sweet of u Abi😃..n i know u may be busy with ur studies n exams..iam ur friend naa u waited for me naa..phir why r u saying all this😒..friends mein sab kuch chalta hai😉😳..no problem..😛

I am commenting from my mobile & so can't give a detailed comment... plz try to understand dear...
Aww..my Sweetest Abi..🤗..I know Authorji n this much long comment also not needed😳 kyunki u already gave us 3 long updates..i can understand u..😊

I' ll comment u briefly after my pc got repaired...
Ok Abi n iam happy with ur this comment only n haan plz dont worry about me ok..😊

Love u Pari doll...
Love u too Abi...❤️

Thank u sooo much for commenting & making the ff fulfilled valuable with ur comments...
Thank u sooo much for giving us such a lovely story n ur precious replies...😃

Take care dolly🤗
U too take Care Angel🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi my dear buddy... Knw wat, dis is d best ff I have ever read... I have become a fan of your writing... Pls do add me to your buddy list and pm me your other works too... Love u... ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Pari doll... how are u?
I feel very happy to have my best friends' comments here finally...
I was checking my ff for ur comments daily, but once I found out, my system got repaired to reply you... such a bad luck for me na!!!


This FF is sooo much special one for me as it gives me a best friend like my barbie doll... You started commenting here from the 8th part dolly. And the credit of making you to comment in IF is also belongs to me and feeling proud for that too...


After my last update, almost all of my friends including u have congradulated and appreciated me... I feel very happy and my happiness is beyond the words. But you know what dolly, the real happiness came not becoz' of all such appreciations... It's one and only becoz' of the friendship I earned here like u, Jannat, Marry, Niki, Prathe, Appu and the list goes on...


I love your colourful comments and many of us here are great fan of ur colourful words... Even I love colours when it spreads like rainbow. That's why just like my Pari doll, I gave colourful comments in rly for every one this time... When we have atleast one coincidence with the things we like/love with our frnds, we'll feel very happy na? In my case, in so many areas we have same likings that I observed from our FB chats. Can you Guess how much happy I felt for this...


I'll never forget the days, we chatted in FB... Dolly, I am lil busy these days and so can't come to FB often. Plzzz don't mistake me... My semester starts by june 3 and ends by 17... After getting over from all these stuffs, we'll continue our chat again... convey my regards to Appu😊

I'll be back here back with our Nia's new show dolly... I Wish u to be there too... will u?? plzzz😊

And thank you for the wishes dolly... u are the first here to congradulate me this time😊


Commenting here in ur busiest schedule na? thank u sooo much for that Pari doll...

luv u sooo much🤗

take care🤗

Edited by madhuharini - 11 years ago

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