Hello Abi
Iam back...Sorry for making u to wait for me for such a long time as always😳😳...Abi i read all updates..but i dint feel so ki iam reading final parts of this story...i just felt ki iam reading just one of ur updates😛...u ended this story so well..its just Perfect!!!!👏...n i saw in many comments too ki others also felt the same...Congratulations Abi😃...i know u hate sorry..but this time u have to accept ok😊...
chalo now my comments on these parts...😛
Part27
Aww..my Mannu is guilty😔..haan she dint do it intentionally😔... she was scared ki she will loose Virat if he came to know about truth😭😭😭...n her pleadings seeing his pic😭😭😭... n Virat told Manvi d happiest news ki Vmaa getting well😛..n our Angel forgot her pain n was happy hearing this news😃..n that tearwala dialogue made me speechless😊...loved that scene to the core..was simply Superb👏👏👏...like Virat said it happened bcoz of our Angel Mannu😃..Agree with him😎...n she went to Hospital n met Maa n changed her number so that Preeti wnt disturb her..n they came back to India.. Shruti too..Trio ki masti n happiness😆...n Devil Preeti saw my Virman living happily😡😡😡..she will plan something😔...Preeti did text Virat..n Mannu started suspecting Virat again😒...n Virat went to meet that devil..Loved Virat's reply to that devil Preethi😃.. n Mannu was happy hearing Virat's words n she went..n Preethi almost succeded in her plan..n here Virat's Condition..too scary..again Virat Misunderstood our Mannu..n that gardenwala scene..he started hating her😭😭😭..Abi i loved these lines ..so true..😊
"Hiding things to our loved ones is not gonna be the solution for a problem. It'll mess up our lives even more. It deepens the sores and give us only hurt in return."
Part 28i
Every one came from pooja..but they dint find Mannu in home .. par they got scared after seeing angry n frustrated behaviour of Virat 😔.. his anwers to their questions..were really very shocking😲😲..i toh hated him d most😡😡..my Mannu😭😭... par u once again succeeded Authorji👍🏼..kyunki it was really very amazing part Abi😛..n another girl our Mannu ki parchayi(shadow) Shruti..waah!😛.. her love n respect to Mannu..n her worry for Mannu n specially her bold ans n qstns to Virat was super se bhi upar👏👏👏... finally she made them understand ki our Mannu is innocent😊..Viren n Shruti went to search for Manvi..now Virat is guilty..n flash of her pleading face n words ringing in his mind😒...loved last bhabi-devar convo n this line of Jeevika 😊...
"you should make Manvi understand her evil plans and you both should live a successful life in front of her eyes happily."
Part28ii
nn.. Vmaa was hell worried about Manvi after reading her later n her words to Virat were much needed😭😭😭..she truely loves Manvi as her daughter n she did prove that😊...Mannu's letter was toh v emotional n Superb👏...in that letter our Mannu did accept her small mistake also😊...she was hurted but she was still caring her pati..n these lines toh heart touching lines for me...😭😭😭
"Don't worry for any thing Virat. Don't hurt your fists whenever you get angry over anybody, else it would be painful. And you can be very happy that you have no more Manvi here after."
Now he decided to do everything well n now he wanted to c her 😊..he called Mannu n Viren but no response..here Mannu was sitting under shower with closed eyes..she was in fainted state..she cried there for hours...n got fever 😭😭😭..but now Viren received Virat's call n told him about her..now Virat n his love,concern towards Manvi made us cry n love Virat again😳😛😭..but was happy ki Mannu is out of danger😃.. n Viren did inform family ki Mannu is safe...n Jiju- Saalis love for Mannu...n caressing her hair...that cute kiss..was really very nice...😳😛👏
Part 29
Wow Mannu wke up n saw Virat holding her hands possessively😳...n felt haapy for a sec par she got up to move away next second...N she has gone through so much😭..n he pleaded Manvi to forgive him😊..Mannu cant forgive him so easily.. Broken Virat n his support Viren😊..all stayed with Mannu except Virat..n he was repeatedly trying to talk her😃..n here Virat ka surprise n Shruti is with Virat😉😛...n that Shruti's drama to help Virat was cool😎...n her not uselesswala dialogue was super funny😆😆😆... whole scene was so cute n our Mannu ka nt scared of anyonewala dialogue😳😉😆..n that roadwale ViraMan ke dialogues toh Awesome👏👏👏..Virat's intentional hiding n Mannu's eyes searching for him😳😉...cuteee...n his fallingwala drama😳.. Manvi's care n eye lock😳😉...loved it..but Mannu is still angry with Virat babu n rejected him 😳..n Jeevika ka teasing session😉...n Mannu's Fall😳...n that dining tablewala part toh Amazing😆..Virat's Parantha eating n Mannu's Laugh seeing this..felt very happy😃..Thank u for such a lovely scene Abi😛..Virat went somewhere n Manvi was worried about it..all were acting like ki they dnt care about Virat😳..Yeh kya Our Mannu is Pregnent😲😲😲...Our Virman is coming😛😛😛.. n Mannu Wanted to share this with Virat😳..Virat called Mannu to give Surprise😛😉..like Virat said..Manvi first time did scold Virat😳..it was cute kyunki our Mannu is cute naa😳😛.. Aww..his surprise..Virat made Mannu to meet her family😊..it was emotional yet beautiful😛😭..loved each n every line..n that carwala scene was so romantic n that kiss😳☺️...n his second surprise..wow..in house all Welcomed Virman😛.. Virika's Godh bharai function got fixed..n masti..happy..happy day😃...Preethi is out of Manvi's life n will got her punishment😡😛.. n VirMan cornerwala Kiss fight😳😉 n his excitemnt after hearing ki he gonna become dad soon was Awesome 👍🏼 n whole family saw our Romantic VirMan n laughed n congratulated them😃..
Epilogue
What is this😲😲 VirMan became even more romantic n Virat naughtier😉😳...n that dining tablewala part😳..Good guy Virat😎..dnt dare again to mess With our Mannu😉..n that last pic toh Beautiful👍🏼...Chotisi VirMan Baby Girl Meera😛..Mannu ki parchai(mirror image hogi naa)..Such a cute name..❤️❤️❤️..
Thank u so much Abi😛 for such a Beautiful story...n All The Best For Ur Future Angel 👍🏼...
Haan Congratulatios new new Dazzelerji.. Celebrations..🥳👏...
Love U❤️
Take Care🤗
Edited by nia333 - 11 years ago
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