VIRMAN FF: #2 YOU ARE MY LOVE UPDATED FINAL PART PG 73(14.4.14) - Page 39

Originally posted by: miss..chalana

Heya...
Nice story...
Loved it...

U are a nice writer i must say..

Plz add me to ur pm list...
N update soon...

Originally posted by: sumayyah1

superb madaline
love it
thanx
waiting for the update
cant wait
cont soon

Originally posted by: niki795

I want an update now:-(

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

AWSM but scary teaser dear...
Atleast now virat will aware wd manvi' s mu...
EGRLY waiting for update dear...

ENJOY UR TIME AND TOUR DEAR...
WE WILL WAIT..
HAPPY JOURNEY. .
TAKE CARE

Originally posted by: nia333

Oops..ok i wnt say sorry Angel 😳...thank u...yup..very well said dear... 😛

that's like my Pari doll🤗


Who is saying thank u now 😉...ofcourse i will wait my Abi friendji.. 😛

aww...🤗 thank u😊

he he😆 you caught this thief acting??😊😆
My cute theif 😳...jo Dilon ko churati hai...😉😆

sry... donno what it mean Pari doll... ur theif is poor in hindi😭😭


Yup...200%...no Abi..u always express ur thoughts beautifully n in a very simple way 😊...u deserve alot..even more than this 👍🏼 ...u r an excellent writer Abi n i mean it ...yaa telepathy..dil ka connection... 😉

it's becoz' I am ur student na!!! so it is😊😊


Wow..thanks to u too dear..yaa.. Hitler beeji but loveable 😉...oh!..very sad 😔 ..i can understand yaar..but she is stil alive in ur thoughts n ur stories...n in beautiful memories 😊..v can see n feel that..she feel very proud of u if she is watching u toh...n her soul must b very happy n i know she is blessing u from above.. v r really blessed dear..ki v have u in our life..😛

ofcourse my loveable strict hitler grany... really I am blessed to have frnds like you Pari doll... luv u🤗



Awww...so sweet of my Abi 😛...really very happy today 😭😭😭(happy tears)...iam really very lucky ki i got a friend like u 😃🤗...u r really a gem dear...it will be a great pleasure.. dear..thank u so much my Angel ❤️❤️❤️..n u r my best friend naa toh u can call me by any name ☺️..no need to ask my permission..u have right on me...😊

really... yes I have rights to call my dolly Barbie from now on... you know Pari, the doll is so cute, looks gorgeous and very stylish one... I luv it sooo much like I luv my Pari doll😊

Now coming to the teaser...Fantastic teaser 👍🏼 ...loved it 😛...Virat wants to talk with Mannu n wants to clear misunderstandings n wants to know about her feelings 😒..nnn what Preethi gonna say to Virat 😲..My Mannu 😔 ..dnt worry Mannu 😭😭😭 Author Abi will save ur love 😊 from that evil bitch 😡...excited to read next n thank u so much for the pm...😛

haan haan...😆😆 abi 'll really save ur love Mannu... just trust me like my barbie doll😊😊😊😆😆


As usual Awesome Authorji 😉...very happy to hear this Abi...great news..enjoy 😛..n haan happy n safe journey..v will wait..u too take care..bye bye... 😊

thank u my barbie doll... I returned and enjoyed sooo much with my sisy and my neices... thank u for ur wishes dear...



luv u Pari doll... 🤗

PART 26:

Hi friends... I am here with my next update. Thank you every one who wished me and commented me previously... I enjoyed my tour happily... Now enjoy reading...

After few seconds, he parted her from his hold and wiped her tears... "what's the problem? What makes u to worry this way? Haan?" She can't accept his words this time... She thought, his love and caring words are always her weakness and she don't wanna melt in that like everytime she does... She just pushed his hands from her cheeks and ran out from the hospital unable to contol her anger, sobs, disappointments and most of all... the love she had on him.

She ran to the garden which was just outside the hospital... She fell down by her knees and let out the emotions she was trying to hold every time. "I thought only mom was your problem and I would see get my love atleast after her recovery... Only with those hopes, I still held my worries and not letting them to spoil you and your wonderful time with her these days. But everything went wrong... what the hell thing Preethi found about me??" thinking, she covered her face with her tiny palms and her sobs were increasing which clearly expressed how hurtful she was... He also ran following her direction and paused for a minute seeing her conditions... His eyes went moist seeing her tears and felt like tones of weight was placed on his heart.

"this is the very first second, I feel how useless I am... my thoughts were only around my mom and I was failed to check you and care you these days... I could understand how irresponsible I am!!! I am sorry jaan... plzz tell me what's worrying you this much" he thought after seeing her painful tears...

He took few steps and placed his hands on her shoulders... She got shrugged and stood up wiping her tears immediately. Before he started to speak, "Virat... I am alright. Operation might be over right now, and you please go to mom" she said like acting boldly.

"let's talk about this Manvi... I know ur mind was caught up with some thing and that could be clearly seen... you are trying not to hurt me and so maintaining it with your silence... but plzz understand ur silence is hurting me much damn' it... don't try to hide ur feelings" he said hell angrily shaking her shoulders...

"Nothing to hide more... I said I am alright. You just go in and take care of mom. Nothing is much important than that" she said sternly...

He could sense something wrong behind her words and her way of speech. He don't wanted to argue with her now. He just want to know her problems and to fix them without affecting her. So, he tried to maintain silence and replied, "Viren and bhabhi are there to care mom. I just came to talk with you" in calmly...

"Virat... enough of this. You go inside else I am going" she said and was about to walk inside. He caught her hands before she was moving...

"Enough? Enough of what?? Could you explain me clearly??" he said in an angry voice without able to accept her words... "what's your problem? I wanna know what's the damn thing made you to ignore me..." he again shouted thro' his lungs.

"Haan... just shout how much ever you can. That's the only thing you could do for me and that's what I deserved... It's not me ignoring you... you are the one always doing it and hurting me whenever I came near you... " she said while tears were continuously flowing down her cheeks...

He felt like her words were piercing his heart that her words were true in some cases... "Manvi... I just..." said this he extended his hands to her cheeks to wipe her precious tears. She stepped back at the very second not letting him to touch her.

"You were there to always understand my feelings and could sense everything running inside my head... but today, you failed. You can't understand how it feels when you stepped back from me... Manvi... I am sorry for shouting and hurting you every time. I can't think the alternate until mom gets recovered. I know whatever I did were big mistakes... you are the one who gave me this happiness what I am going through now... you taught me a new definition of love... love is not only getting from one side but giving it immensely without expecting anything in return... I learned it only from u & I always love you Manvi. Please mujhe ignore math karo... Please mujhe maaf kardo... please..." he said while his eyes were pleading for her glance at him and to trust his words... She can't take it anymore. She just nodded her head negatively and closed her eyes to let out the tears brimming in her eyes...

He felt like he wanna hug her and wipe her tears at the very second... but she had denied his rights to wipe them. He closed his eyes and clenched his fist without able to control his feelings. When his rage was over-flowing without limits, he raised his fist to hit the strong, hard woody tree as the way to punish himself. Before his hands reaching the tree, it was caught hold tightly. When he opened his eyes, he saw her both hands were holding his wrists to protect him from getting hurt and injured...

A little smile crept on his lips seeing her love... She immediately covered the distance between them by encircling her arms around his neck and pushing herself more into his shoulders, "I won't cry Virat... Plzz don't hurt yourself... Plzz... I don't cry here after" she said between her sobs... he pulled her more into him and hugged her tightly. A lone tear escaped from his eyes. He smiled seeing her love and care that she held for him every time and he said, "but still you are crying".

She parted little from his shoulders and raised her head and kissed his forehead and said, "I love you"

"I love you too" he said and kissed her nose which was already pink... "But Virat, will you promise me?" she said...

"I ll do whatever you wish... just order me" he said with a smile, but they were still in same position... "you should not trust any one more than me... ok?" she asked like a child... "what is this Manvi? Whom I gonna trust more than you?" he said without knowing what she meant.

"If I asked you one thing, you should say the truth... only truth..." she said and he nodded his head positively. "you suspecting anything from me? I mean..."she extended to speak but was cut by him in the middle saying, "what should I suspect from you? I trust you blindly Manvi" he said... "then why she said like that?" She thought a second... "No no... I should not hurt you asking some thing..." she thought for the next second...

"Manvi... Manvi..." he said to make her come out of her traunce... "I too wanna trust you blindly..." she said and hugged him more passionately and possessively... He could understand some thing she was hiding besides her words and was too stubborn to say it to him. But don't wanna think anything other than her when he has his love in his arms at that second...

*****

After 20 days...

Vanshika ma's treatment went on with a complete co-ordination between her and the doctors... Viren and Jeevika were very happy with their unborn child and holding their dreams... Preethi went too tired after trying Virat's number so many times but no response from his side... Virat was asusual very busy with his mom's treatment which is yet to be completed in few more days. Every one are still praying that she should be completely cured from cancer. But what about our Mannu?? Is she really happy with the same bubbliness and enjoying her moments asusual?? The answer is a big NOOO...

Though she wants to trust her Virat completely, the evil bitch is not allowing her to do so... She always tries to call Virat and texted him that she wanna share something with him. Manvi saw him disconnecting her call several times in front of her and would get worried by imagining some thing by herself... She was in a big dilemma from that day what she heard from Preethi on Virat's phone... but she can't say all these to him that he might be hurt if she asked any thing wrong by mistake... Some thing she can't deny herself from thinking Preethi and Virat's relationship that went on few years back... She asked about their luv story so many times from Viren in these days and his replies about their love would made her think them again and again but she didn't showed anything in front of Virat... But one thing, we could clearly understand is that their relationship has lost it's flavour which it had before...

On that day, Preethi sat on her room with Manvi's family pic in her hand... that was the only photo Manvi had since her childhood days... the pic was the only proof that she belongs to chaudary's... Preethi found the pic from Manvi's room when she went to their house few days back. She got a small doubt seeing Mahesh Chaudary on that photo as she was very well aware of smriti and her parents through Vikram... She took the photo and organized her secret group to find why Manvi had their photo. Finally, she was shocked yet surprised to know that Manvi was the daughter of Chaudary's and specially the elder sister of Smrithi... who's the girl Virat hate the most in his life... as she was the one and only reason behind his close friend Vikram's death... the reason for murder behind Vikram's dad... She was the whole reason behind the entire drama caused few years back... the reason behind his meaningless life he lived these years before the entry of his Manvi... the days that Virat needs to erase from his life...

She was very happy after knowing all these... But she donno the reason why Manvi was staying away from her family and she don't have the need to find that. She was enjoying that she got a huge volcano to be bursted in Manvi's life and she would be finally separated from Virat's life completely... she was celebrating her skills and appreciating herself for nearing the destiny which she planned for...

"aarrgghhh... this Virat na... how many days I am trying to say this happy news to him, but he always disconnecting my calls and not ready to speak even single word..." she said angrily. "always saying I love only my Manvi... he he he..." she mimicked devily in her voice... "Ok... Let's do one thing. Before we inform this to Virat, we should torture his beautiful angel for few days... Manvi... I don't want you to be happy with my Virat... I don't want you to enjoy all the gifts what I wished to have in my own life..." she said herself spitting her words with mixture of evilness and jealous...

Manvi was sitting with Virat in V..ma's hospital room from few minutes back... "Virat... you go and eat some thing. I'll be with ma till then" she said.

"have you done with ur breakfast?" he asked in reply... "Haan... I am done. If I say anything, just do it. Don't question me instead" she said naughtily.

"then I too done with my breakfast" he smirked...

She got quiet angry with his lie, "Virat... don't try to fool me. Ofcourse, I trust you. but it doesn't mean you should lie me every times..." she said. Her words have some other meaning than this...

He can't understand what she exactly mean... "But you also lied na... bhabhi told me you haven't ate anything" he said pinching her cheeks playingly...

V..ma smiled seeing their childish act and said, "beta... don't fight now. You both go and have your breakfast" in a strict voice.

They nodded their head silently and went to canteen... they completed the breakfast and Manvi got ready to go home after some time...

"Ok Virat... take care. I love you" said she hugged him. Virat kissed her cheeks in return and bid gud bye to her...

When she reached her home, she checked her mobile hearing a beep sound...

"hellooo... hi Manvi... how could I address you? Hmm... virat's wife? or SMRITHI'S SISTER? Waiting for ur reply ---- Preethi" seeing the text msg in her mobile, her eyes got widened in shock... She closed her eyes and opened again unable to realize what she read... her breath hitched for a minute... She felt her world has turned upside down... She stormed into her room and slammed the door heavily... words were strucked in her throat for few minutes and she can't speak even a word... She took her mobile and reading the msg repeatedly to check whether she read the text correctly...

"I had almost forgotten this damn' truth these days... How could she knew all these?" said her eyes were pooled and she was breathing heavily unable to digest the fact...

Now she could clearly understand, what Preethi was about to say him from that day? her whole body was trembled and shivered in fear... "I haven't said any thing about my relationship with Smrithi to anyone except Shruthi. Then how could she knew this??" shouted this she fell on the bed but managed to sit over it...

Suddenly her gaze fell over the pic which was their marriage photo... She ran and took it on her hands... she holded it and caressed Virat's image softly... "If you knew this... If you knew all this??" words were failed to came out from her mouth further...

"Preethi... plzz don't snatch my Virat from me... Plzzz..." thinking, she was mentally begging to save her love from that evil bitch...

Hope you'll like it friends... I gave a very long update this time na? waiting to read your comments now... I'll try to update soon...

Luv u all... take care...🤗