VIRMAN FF: #2 YOU ARE MY LOVE UPDATED FINAL PART PG 73(14.4.14)

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lujeyn9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Fabulous!!!!!

very emotional update 😭

waiting 4 next

Thanx 4 pm

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virmanfan013

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

awww thats so sweet part nd emotional too
loved it completely nd the way you describe their emotions were wonderful
loved the little talk between vanshika nd manvi
virman convo was too good
ohooi this preeti is tough nut to crack
she again developing misunderstanding between them
nd what she had found abt manvi
i think she found about manvis sis who broke virats frnds heart
just guessed
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm

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reyna winget

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

hi madhu !!

sry for late comment !

i liked the part

but again manvi is back to crying !

i hate that preeti !

i hate her coming btw virman !

why is virat not confronting everything with manvi ?😡

it's emotional

n u've written it very well !👏

love ... reyna

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nia333

@nia333

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Hello Abi

As usual Sorry for late reply dear 😳...Superb update dear 👏...Sad update thaa 😭...par v cant expect always happy things from our life naa..n v can understand n feel the real value of happiness after going through the sad phase of our life...😊

But every sad moments would end in happiest way... hai na? trust me, at the end not only for our Virman, all of us would have a surprise in this story... It'll be even more happy to read...
yup...v trust u Abi..will wait for that surprise...😛

Coming to the update again...loved Vmaa n Manvis cute convo 😃...vmaa scared of surgeries...was acting like a small kid ...our Mannu toh acting like Maa(like how u act Author Abiji 😉) n was making vmaa understand d situation n co operate doctors... n her cracked nutswala dialogue 😆...bdw it is true haaan 😉 ...n loved vmaas dialogue too..n Virats magicwala dialogue is right 😃...par Mannu misuderstood him 😔...nn that happy news doctors told to Virat...n he wanted share with Mannu 😊 but Preethi 😡...n Virat did scold her naa...correct kiya 😃...n Mannu ne Virat ka phone check kiya 😲..n Preethi ko call kiya..n again...thinking ki Virat is suspecting something from her...

nnn that last scene...Race bw Mannus heart n mind 😒...finally Mannus heart won 😛..our Mannu toh cant see others pain..yahaan toh Virat thaa 😳..n she can feel love in his eyes for her 😛...i loved these two lines the most..kya depth hai... 👍🏼👏
👏
He felt her whether it is joy nor sorrow, she has only him at the moment to share with and his situation was also the same
he felt her tears with the wetness of his shirt and patted her back caringly

But after this her mind took control over her heart n she went away 😔...hope at last Manvi's heart wil win...kyunki Mind can lie but not heart... 😊
Thank u so much Abi for the pm n One more thing i always learn something from ur updates..Values of life,friendship,love,relations n what not..THANK U SO MUCH...😃

Love U ❤️
Take Care 🤗

Edited by nia333 - 11 years ago

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abirami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman
with a twst soo interesting the misunderstanding gets ahead and more ...waiting to see what happens next and how all this turns out to be...update next part soon 😃

thank u sooo much kulsum...😊
I'll try to update soon dear😊

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abirami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: sumayyah1
wowww
madaline fantastic
superb
amazing
loved it
mind blowing
fabulous
just wonderful
cant wait for more
cont soon
thnx
soz for the late reply

thank u sumi... ur words are really encouraging dear😊

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abirami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: GOOGLU
frst dear its tooo short...
and also u stop it wrng point...hw devil... 😉 😉
really enjoy the update. ..its fabulous. .
love the track...hate that preethi...
feel sad for our angel...
once again love manvi and vm bonding. .
plzzz try to update soon next part. ...
egrly waitinggg...
thanks alot for pm dea...

sorry googlu... I know it's short one. I can't spend much time here these days...
I am with my sisy and neice and after they gone abroad, I 'll have no other work except my clg and studies... then I'll try to give regular updates...
thanks for commenting...
I'll try to update soon😊

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abirami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

I Learnt to comment colourfully frm my BeSt FrD 😊
Bt i cant comment sooo BEAUTIFULLY and COLOURFULLY lyk her...adjust lyk dis nly kkk 😉
Ha you shld punish dat preethi orelse i ll b lyk dis 😡 😡 on uuu...just kidding dear...
Love youuu tooo and take care 🤗

Is ur best frnd called Pari?? If not, I am sorry...
Pari doll used to give colourful updates every time and so I asked u dear😊

Ha you shld punish dat preethi orelse i ll b lyk dis 😡 😡 on uuu...just kidding dear...

oh no... plzz don't be angry... let's punish her together... haan?😆😆
thank u Aparna... take care😊

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abirami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: virman_superhit
OMG... U updated this...my fav ff... I always wait for this update and it makes me happy to c every update... And was waiting so much for this one... 😊😊😆

Now about the update... First of all it was so emotional... Poor Mannu... Awww... I am so sad to see her cry so much... 😭😭.. Plzzz.. Dotn trouble her much... Giver her her Virat back... And her happiness too... 😊😳

I loved her scene with Vanshika Maa... She can keep anyone's spirits high... Am sure Vanshika Maa will fight only for her... And come back safe and sound... 😊😊👏

Hating Preethi... 😡😡.. What does she know and y is she after Mannu... Plzzz... Make Virat throw her out of his life soon.. Forever... And make him understand how bad Mannu is feeling... Waiting for a happy update... Give us soon... 😊😊

Awesome update dear... Loved it... And love ur writing... 😊👏👏.. Too good... UpUpdate soon.. Love u... 😊😊

hi Nishu... I was waiting for ur comments... thank u for commenting every time dear😊

Now about the update... First of all it was so emotional... Poor Mannu... Awww... I am so sad to see her cry so much... 😭😭.. Plzzz.. Dotn trouble her much... Giver her her Virat back... And her happiness too... 😊😳

uffoo... plzz don't worry... She would be safe soon and every thing gets cleared... I won't trouble her too much... but you know na, gud persons would face lots of miseries, learn to struggle and get gud results at the end... it's just like that dear...

Awesome update dear... Loved it... And love ur writing... 😊👏👏.. Too good... UpUpdate soon.. Love u... 😊😊

thank u once again😊
I'll be out of station for next 4 days... then I'll update...
luv u tooo... take care🤗

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abirami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: virmanfan013
awww thats so sweet part nd emotional too
loved it completely nd the way you describe their emotions were wonderful
loved the little talk between vanshika nd manvi
virman convo was too good
ohooi this preeti is tough nut to crack
she again developing misunderstanding between them
nd what she had found abt manvi
i think she found about manvis sis who broke virats frnds heart
just guessed
waiting for the next part
thanks for the pm