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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

God that was so cute
Arnav sure knows how to make a deal

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

I love these dialogue-only one shots . More action in play .

It was lovely and just in the style of ASR --- ruthless , unscrupulous etc etc...

Thanks for the pm and sorry for the delay in commenting , having Internet problems.

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

hahahahhaha so cute!! loved it! ❤️

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Girl!!!! Are you for real???? How can you ever write dialogues like that?? My reactions jumped so quickly back and forth between laughing and blushing that my brain is all confused and muddled up now :P :P

You're so damn good and I'm awestruck as if I were discovering that for the first time!!! You are something else, you know. I just pray that you keep writing and making people (read me) happy ;) :D Waise, 'happy' would be an understatement right now ;)

I'm Nafisa-fied right now! :D ;)

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

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Edited:

Do you take classes? I need to learn how to use only dialogues to: narrate an entire story, provide a background, infuse emotions, create the ambiance, explain the actions, and set perfectly the beginning, the middle and the end. 👏

How do you do this??? 😲

Now to the story:

I dont know about ruthless, conniving and unscrupulous but he was most definitely in a naughty mood and played his fiance, Khushi, so brilliantly that she walked into his trap (or more specifically his terms and conditions) with a smile on her face all the while thinking she is tricking him with her emotional blackmail 😆

There are a few things KKG soon to be SR can learn from ASR 😳

Bless the sherwani. It gave me so much fun!

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

i was literally in stitches. this is so typical arnav/khushi and yes, this could have fit very well in the wedding sequence

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

I read this again and I had the same reactions as the first time ;) No matter how many times I say it's excellent, it won't be sufficient.

Khushi's rant! Oh, it's hilarious!!!! Especially - And you can come in your business suit and we'll sign a contract instead of taking the pheres and sit at a conference table instead of a mandap-" 🤣

Too funny!! Too good! ;)