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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Shweta,

What do I say? That was not only brilliant update but an intense one. I almost read it on breath. The beauty of this update was, when we readers were getting comfortable thinking, things are moving smoothly between Arnav and Khushi, you threw a curveball at us. And now we are back the edge, waiting to see what happens next.

Yashoda is a perfect example of those parents who are so hung up on their status and social image that they do not care of their children's dreams, goals, or even happiness. Undeniably Yashoda has played in a role in spoiling Akash as well as Arnav's lives and she is bent upon doing the same with Anjali.

I feel bad for Anjali; she is tormenting herself. I wouldn't say Anjali is picking easy way out; she is just making things easy for everybody else and in the process tormenting her. She dotes on her brother but even his assurances are not helping the situation as she doesn't want to add to his distress.

Now coming to the real "confrontation" and stealer of the update; it has to be one of the most powerful scenes until now. A lot happened in this one scene. Khushi got a real peek into Arnav's past, Arnav shut Khushi again, the positive feelings Khushi was developing for Arnav were nipped and above all, it showed the depth of Arnav's pain and how torn he is between his past and present, between the person he wants to be vs. being the person others want him to be.

I really felt bad for Khushi that she was at the wrong place at the wrong time and had to face Arnav' s wrath for no fault of hers. But honestly, there is no other way for Khushi to know about Arnav's past. Nobody including Arnav is going to make Khushi sit down and narrate the story to her. She will discover her husband through cherish able moments like by the lake or cruel confrontations like this. Poor girl was still giving benefit of doubt to Arnav even after being yelled at and pushed out by Arnav.

Khushi is more shattered and hurt by the catastrophe caused by what Arnav said to Aman, than his behavior earlier. She was just starting to admire Arnav and since loss of her parents, unknown to her she was trusting Arnav. All the fights, arguments they had until now hurt her pride but this was betrayal.

Arnav, tulips won't work this time. Last time Khushi gave him a silence treatment for few days only but this time it will be a long silence treaty. Arnav definitely is feeling guilty, knows he really wounded the girl's heart and will definitely do everything to mend their relationship. But it's going to be an uphill battle.

I am positive that whatever happened in this chapter will push their relationship in the right direction.

Aman is as broken as Arnav; they mirror each other at a personal level and connect. Even without reading much about Aman, the way he stands by Arnav supports him through his silence and their equation it tells how much pain he has endured. When it comes to Arnav he forgets his own pain. He wants Arnav to find his peace and knows that Khushi can give him that.

Regarding Aman's reaction to Anjali's news, he is like a poker player. He won't react and do anything that might cause ripples in Arnav's personal or political career. Having said that he will definitely make, efforts to talk to Anjali.

PS: I swear, didn't mean to write long comment again but there was so much happening in this chapter that I had a lot to say. Next time onwards, I will try to keep them shorter than your updates!!

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
the come out of his argument with his mother kind of expected I was sure about Anjali's consent she is heat broken by aman so she has given it to what her mother wants poor soul
Arnav's past or whatsoever made him do but that was simply harsh how rude he was with her
she was unaware of that restricted place n he knew that
im glad khushi came to know the reality of his oh so kind down to earth Arnav singh raizad's act all for his selfish motives behind each n every action he did at that trip she must know what he does only for his benefit this marriage gave him a lot not khushi n he is using it fully for his career to achieve his goal n khushi unknowingly playing big part in his favor
whatever little were there between them is going in drain I think after this poor girl
awesome update
Edited by aayt - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just started reading this story and im hooked... u are an amazing writer...lookinng forward to the next chap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav is so confusing...obvi he has some feelings for khushi...but does not want to accept it..n then his ambition... he is putting in his everything to win... n using khushi to do some of it too... in the process confusing khushi n hurting her...poor khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta, main kucch nahin kahoongi'
I hope you understand what I want to say!
Want to know what happened with Arnav and Khushi, and Aman and Anjali, and Payal and her no good husband.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Shweta, main kucch nahin kahoongi'

I hope you understand what I want to say!
Want to know what happened with Arnav and Khushi, and Aman and Anjali, and Payal and her no good husband.


Main bhi kuch nahi bolungi! 😳
Par hamme bharosa hain aap par😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shweta,
we want to know how Arnav will make up to Khushi.. when will we know? 😳 here is a song for Arnav and Khushi

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KResnwEOV54[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 11 years ago
It has been such a long wait since your last update...can't wait to see Arnav, and his big ego making it upto her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
😛
Stalking pays!

A young girl's heart is a fragile thing
And its very difficult to forget ones first love.
I feel for Anjali.
Though of course Aman never really encouraged her in any way, but Anjali fell in love with him in spite of everything. He was the first man to shower attention upon her. She, who maybe craved the attention of her family, was bound to fall for this good looking charming guy who gave her that precious thing, time!
What happened to Priya? And what mistake did Aman make?
What I liked about the Arnav Khushi conversation is that Arnav was truthful to her.
At least their relationship is based on honesty.
He has in his own way apologised to her.
He handed over the work of the NGO to Khushi knowing that she was capable of taking it to new heights. It might have helped his political ambitions, but it helped take Khushi's mind of her grief.
And he is there for her when she needs him.
This is one of the best works on IF at the moment, Shweta, and the updates are eagerly awaited.
I'm already waiting for the next one.

This story is among my current favourites on IF. Just love it and the updates are eagerly awaited.
Edited by 1chilly - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😊

We were worried about our Khushi bitiya, as it has been almost a week since we heard about her and the last time we were allowed to sneak into her life she got to know a shocking truth about her Arnav ji...but here she was playing hide and seek with her husband..Hai re Nandkishore!!!! 😆

Jokes apart, after the dhamakedaar Confrontations chapter, was eagerly waiting for the following one! Would not fair to comment on the first half of the chapter without knowing Aman's deeds (or his idiocy as you termed it!) three years ago which resulted the cat & mouse game Anjali's playing with him! So let's pass it for now..

Coming to the other subject...Did I tell you I love this Arnav? If not, you should know now! 😳

Yes, he does sounds like a first hand jerk, specially considering the fact that an innocent soul has been unconsciously weaving her dreams and hopes around him and he himself was responsible for that as he was allowing her to see a little bit of "Arnav" in him time to time.

But however, he didn't sugar coat his words, he was frank and direct, which I think is important for Khushi to know. Based on everything your story revealed so far, it is sort of evident that neither he was interested nor politics was his first career choice, He has given up his first choice of life on to family politics for reasons yet to be revealed. As he mentioned during his previous little chat with his mother, and also mentioned by Anjali once, he had sacrificed his choice of life. So in turn he wants to win the election by hook or crook (well, within the legal capacity!). So he came clean about that. And didn't he mention that his family happiness matters to him. And his dear wife is his family. I wouldn't expect your Arnav to go and say sorry to Khushi for his doings, because he was truly not. May be he is, for the way Khushi had to hear it accidently, but not for his doings, not completely. And those "candid" moments with her, were definitely not pretense. He unconsciously let his guards down, letting her see the man who was there...His words were definitely not the ones that you expect where you need a progress, so yeah, we are sort of at a dead end right now... But Khushi is an intelligent woman to handle situations in her own ways, so we'll wait to see how she handles her "I-don't-explain-myself-to-anyone" of a husband...Will it be too much to say that "we can expect great things from her"?

And no mention about "mysterious room"!!!🤔...Oh well! Later then!😔

Will wait for the next chapter 👍🏼


Edited by anu41982 - 11 years ago

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