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Posted: 10 years ago
m scared reading chapter 12.. aww.. firstly Arnav is angry on Khushi secondly this Lavanya came back man.. circumstances are not so adequate..

m chewing my nails...
yaar u are making me restless with such damn damn good and exciting updates.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Again a superb chapter 13..
must say.. i m getting more and more addict with ur story.. sply the way u put ur words to give a new life to the running scene..

Thank gos Arnav ended his relation with Lav.. any thing is the reason but its good that he ended it on tym before it can turn too late..

must say u are just marvelous and fantastic... how u gear up such damn sensual and awesme and political thoughts.. just tremendous.

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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 14.. as usual is just awesme...

hats off the way u put each nd everything sply the emotions and feelings.. just outstanding..

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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 15 A .. wow so Arnav somwer felt a bit of j seeing NK close to Khushi..

hahahh.. that shersingh part was seriously amazing.. how she gt scared of dog.. and how he is protecting her always from horrendous things.. was right..

it will be grt to read them together sharing a room.

And wat should i say about ur writng.. u are amazing and tremenous... hats off the way u write... like creating things in real for us..
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 15 B.. damn superb.. Really i will keep on saying Arnav has so many shades and i appreciate how you evry time peal his shades to reveal the real man.. still there is more to coe..as i see the way u write ..

Khushi too gut J of that sunaina.. man now guess its something that will start soon..

really it was a amazing update..

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 16...
i again will say.. u are really making me fall for Arnav more and more..
i guess u writers are alos a reason for me to be still alive with same passion as.. u make me feel Alive with Arshi..
really the beauty in ur updates is just incomparable... you have put the things in a grt way.. evn its the location or the characers.. evrything is so perfect..

i am, amazed how u well describe each and everything from their smiles to their small small moments..

i am just scared how will be the day when Khushi will know about Arnav.. means about his affairs .. i cant evn imagine it..

i like how Arnav gave her the right opportunity and place wer she can work and enjoy the way she want. and gain the happiness which she is missing since she left Ajora..

Khushi .. she is 21 .. naive.. but Arnav said true that she has something that other girls dnt have..
evn its her simpleness or wat attracting him.. bt i really must say .. u have characterized her character so well..


Shweta .. u are just amazing and a brilliant writer who give real touches to every phase of the story...

wonderful..


how true .. they both were so similar when it comes to present.. bth had a past that made them happy nad a present that they never wished but still this is now their life... evn it they wished for this or not.
Edited by arnavini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
As m reading Arnav in Kurta and pajama..as an politician... i have been imagining him in that attire..
so my mind cooked up something
and here is the cooked hilarious output



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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap 17...
first of all one thing i always forget is about Aman and Anjali..
i had been reading that wen evr Aman try to cnverse or ask just as common pleasantries.. she would skip from the place..
i guess there is something odd .. in this.. may be in future i may know the reason of this cold behaviour..
but to guess .. m thinking did Anjali propose Aman.. and he refused and thats the resaon she is now behaving cold with Aman or something else.. but i guess i need to read more then i may know the reason behind this unusual behavior of Anjali.

Now about mt fav.topic.. Arshi..
man .. how will they lead in their life of a married couple wen they interact so less.. or just like common set of ppl and very rarely..

And Arnav being all time busy.. didnt get tym to be with her.. and now he evn made her to be busy with her NGO work..

But sometym i feel tat Arnav is doing all this intentionally.. he want to be close to her but feel that she is too younger than him and their is something more that is stopping him.


hope in future i may know what is this..

and hahahahh Khushi too acted all cold with him.. just to show him the anger that she had been controlling since she felt that he has been ignoring her.. poor soul..

and how it too dint get unnoticed by Arnav .. that she is behaving a bit odd and cold with him..

hope they can manage the things before tit get spilled more out of the glass..

and i like how Arnav dnt want to run things illegally and want everything to be legal and not the way that jhangid is doing..
i really liked his thoughts and to say he is really smart to make Khushi accept the NGO offer .. that is helping him in many ways plus giving Khushi a kind of pleasure to help people...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 18.. damn man was so hot..

i really think .. Khushi evn though married him in haste and dunno anything about her husband but she want to be his wife not just for the society but as to feel like wife.. she needs him.. and that hurt has taken the place wer she ignore him seeing him ignoring her frm past months.

Arnav .. is j of NK .. or may be any man that can make her smile or happy which he literally fail or i say he never tried..

he himself is distancing her from himself and same tym he hate the way she ignore him.. man i guess he is confused.. hope the clouds of confusion in front of his gt clr soon.

Khushi's dejection and the last line .. was so right .. just kidding didnt mean she can be his wife or can feel like his wife..
a women has some needs and he need to look after her as she is here just because of him and it hurts to see that he is ignoring her..
so i totally justify her .

and now about you yaar wat are you?? how can you?? write so well and amazingly.. m spellbound to read ..

i always think that i will read one chap and then will start with my work and here i always end up with reading more than one at a tym..

its all ur writing's magic.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 19.

Amazing .. this was really asuperb update as usual and tremendous as all started with white tulips.

in last update i was worried for their relationship progress .. as everything was again seeing to be getting at square one.. bt m happy to read that Arnav didnt remain ignorant and arrogant .. in fact initiated a move and gave her while tulips asking for her forgiveness.. and started a fresh.

And all courtesy to Mrs. payal who feeded the required information about the tulips to Khushi..

Arnav is really impressing me with very update .. as how i read him now.. sply taking the side of his wife in front of all family and also how cleanly he asked her about the party.. smart singh raizada.

really it was a amazing chapter..
but later that Jhangid spoiled my mood.. bt really impressive to read that Khushi never gt a tinge of confusion nor she let any false hopes to the man who was all hell bend to fire her against her husband..
i am still worried hw will Khushi take the truth of Arnav being physically linked with lavanya ..

as just knowing her being his girl friend is different than knowing this.. and alos knowing that she is not like a city girl but a naive and simple village girl who may get effected with this..

hope things dnt get ugly btwn them.

and yaar u are seriously outstanding..



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