virman ff: Burning in Passion part 13 page 81 (6 Dec oct 2014) *NEW*

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Nikita

@Duggukede

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

awesome update

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Really dear after long time...
Missing this ff and sweet sidrah :::(((((((
You both are just amazing...
But on clouds 9 to finlly see ur update...
And u done fully justice wd this update...
Love virman ramp description ...
Sad wd maya and rohan' s behavior...
Specially the way rohan treated manvi...
But hw can manvi forgive him so easily? ?????
U can urself imagine hw awsm u write it?,,, that I take it so much seriously...
Really outstanding update shivali...
Amazing wrk...
Keep it dear...
Plzzz update soon next part ...
Thanks alot for pm dear...
Love you shivali...
Miss you sidrah...
Keep rocking princess and Barbie...
Tc

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manvilover18

@manvilover18

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Awesome update...
I hate that rohon...
Throw that rohon from manvi's life...
I want to see virman together...
Update it quick plzzz...

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komalvirman

@komalvirman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Awesome update , hate rohan .update soon ,thanks for pm

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mira shrestha

@NIVILOV

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Nic update dear n tx 4 pm I WANT JANAT BACK YA WY D EVERY BEST VIRMAN FF WRITER R LEAVING 😡 D FF YR 1ST SHILPA THAN ANNU THAN NISHA N NOW SHARDHA ALSO PLZ COM BACK YAR 😭

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kateyes

@kateyes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Brilliant update ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ u hav written everything very beautifully specially d lines about jealousy 👏👏👏👏👏👏 ( yeah its a very harmful emotions 4 every 1 lifes it can turn u into d person which u never want 2 b like it can ruined every 1s life including urs 2 n u can't repand it after realising dat u were wrong ) , virman reharsals n ramp walk part was really nice 2 😃😃😃😃😃😃 dey both know about dere feelings dey can't deny dat dere closeness affect dem but dey 2 know dat dey can't b with each other as dey r committed 2 sum1 else , maya n rohan were feeling uncomfortable by seeing dere partners with sum 1 else ( i don't think dey both r wrong in dere places dey both luv dere partners so how can dey accept dat dere partners r more comfortable with sum1 else instead of dem dere reaction was natural , yeah rohan took it 2 far he shouldn't hav said harsh words 2 maanvi but he was hell angry on her he had waited 4 her so long he had given her so much tym n after seeing her with sum1 else made him mad plus he was not in his senses so said all dis 2 her ) , maanvi was heart broken by his words dat how can her frnd think so low about her n blame virat 4 everything which happened in dere life poor virat got confused n hurt after listening her words he doesn't know wht happened 2 her suddenly but got hurt by her behaviour with him 😔😔😔 n maanvi forgive rohan 4 everything she knows dat 2 he didn't do it intensionally his luv 4 her made him 2 said dose words 2 her ( but i think maanvi should tell him dat she don't luv him instead of dragging dere relation bcoz u can't luv sum1 by forcing urself 2 luv dat person whom luvs u its a feeling which only happens on its own she should think about it dat watching her with sum 1 else made rohan so mad at her dat he forgot everything wht will happens whn he came 2 know dat virman hav feelings 2wards each other d situation can b worse more ) let see wht happens next 😊😊

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

ohh nooo,
pleaseee manvi dont forgave rohan this easily... the ramp scene was great written , i could really imagine it...

thanks for pm

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

awesome update
the ramp walk was nice
she showed all her anger on virat for no reason
felt bad for virat
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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abirami

@madhuharini

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

It's awesome Shivali...you wrote it too well dear...
I love this update from the begining to end... you wrote their feelings amazing...
when Virman rocked the stage, rohan's anger, Manvi's hurt, Virat's hurt by Manvi, ROH-MAYA's jealousy... everything is perfectly written...
waiting for ur next update specially my Jannat's one...
luv u Shivali... take care🤗