virman ff: Burning in Passion part 13 page 81 (6 Dec oct 2014) *NEW*

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Menage with short comment or likes for some days
like it
awesome...

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Strikhedonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hello hello hello!😳

Look who is here! The great Arthy!😆😆😆

First of all, I know this story is gonna be awesome! Don't ask me y! Of course, two best writers are writing it toh this story will be mind-blowing only! haina?

Prologue seems quite interesting!😛 Awesome prologue!👏

Continue soon shivali di and jannat di!😳

Waiting!😉

Take care!🤗

Love you both!❤️❤️

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LoverBollywood

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow yaar..

Nice start..

Pleasee continue soon..

Virat is Maya fiance...

Thanks for the PM...

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floral

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

wow great maya not a bitch

but will virat and mannu i mean viran will happen

plzzz do continue soon

and do pm me😊😊

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hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

wowww
two great writer in a project, this can be only perfect

loved the prologue, this story will be amazing...
thanks for pm

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Awesome Start..!! Maya ko acha bana diya..matlab ye dono appne he love story k dushman..Dats nice..lekin Nice Start...Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM!

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kateyes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Firstly all d best 2 both of u 4 starting a new ff 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 n sorry 4 being late
Prologue was awsum n interesting ⭐️⭐️⭐️ , maya isn't a bitchy type person in dis story infact she is a kind hearted n fun loving person trust maanvi alots ( reallyyy 😲😲😲😲 ) but still she is dere btw virman but u make me hell shocked dat virat is her fiance 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲 n it seems dat maanvi is already smitten by his appearance dere first meeting was quite filmy but it was really nice now let see wht happen whn virman will fall in luv with eachother or i say who will fall first n how 😃😃😃😃😃
Character sketch was nice 2 😊😊😊 oh maanvi 2 hav a boyfrnd jay ( nice choice ) he propose her on pizza hut ( pizza hut ki baat nhi hogi i feel like 2 eat pizza 😉😉😉 ) n i felt so much relief after knowing dat maya is not virat fiance she is just liring 2 every1 now m eager 2 read wht happen in virman life
Ch 1 : Brilliant update 👏👏👏👏👏 virat is already falling 4 her he is 2 smart 2 ask a dance with him infront of maya ( maya stupid grl allows dem 2 dance with eachother how can she do dat whn she knows her fiance can make any1 fall 4 him if i was at her place i will never allow dat 😆😆😆 ) , he is confused about maya dat wht he is feeling around maanvi he never felt around her , maanvi n rohan part was reallyy nice 😊😊😊😊 rohan is so much caring , loving n understanding 2wards her he knows dat she don't luv him but still he is ready 2 giv her tym 2 think about dere relation n he is sure she will luv him sum day n on other side maanvi don't want 2 hurt him now let see wht happen next 😊😊😊😊
Sorry again 4 late

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itsfate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

awesome prologue

loved it...maya on positive side

virat is maya's fianc😲

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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GOOGLU

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

FRST OF ALL CONGRATS SHIIVALI AND SIDHARAH FOR NEW FF...
NOW ALOT THANX PRINCESS AND BARBIE FOR ANOTHER AWSM WRK ON VIRMAN...
NOW ABT URS IDEA ...ITS MINDBLOWING...
REALLY LOVE THE PROLUGE...
MAYA AND POSITIVE...EIGHTH WNDER...
VIRAT IS MAYA'S FIANCE..INTRSTING...
EGRLY WAITING FOR 1ST CHAPTER...
WANT TO KNW HOE VIRMAN FALL FOR EACH OTHER. ?????
UPDATE SOON DEAR..
..THANX ALOT FOR PM :::))))